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Last Updated: 11/19/2009

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Gender: Male
Status: Swinger
Age: 19
Sign: Gemini

City: an okay town not good not bad
State: California
Country: US
Signup Date: 11/20/2005

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Saturday, July 05, 2008 
The One

Of all you've ever hoped to have
Or all you stand to gain
Theres nothing quite as painful
As the girl you chased in vain

Through your cloudiest memories
And past your darkest dreams
Lies the one you wished to have
And who in your darkness, gleams

Of all the lips you wished to kiss
Or bodies to embrace
The one which ails you most now
Is the girl you'll never taste

Across the sanctums of your thoughts
And by the passing day
You chased and tried to catch her
But she slowly crept away

Of all the girls you hoped to love
Or all you find to hate
The girl who fucked you over
Has resigned you to your fate

To travel far in search of her
Across your troubled mind
She who you are searching for
Is the one you'll never find
3:34 PM
 
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♥ T. Smith
Tawnie Smith

 
That's really good Edwin. You should keep writing for sure.

 
Posted by ♥ T. Smith on Wednesday, July 23, 2008 - 6:53 PM
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sarah*jane

 
I am usually not in favor of poetry that rhymes,

young people tend to get caught up in the rhyme itself

and then the poem loses its original meaning.


But I like it. I think you pulled it off pretty well.

 
Posted by sarah*jane on Sunday, August 17, 2008 - 8:38 PM
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Rose♥

 
Since when does Edna write poems? Very nice, buddy.

 
Posted by Rose♥ on Friday, August 29, 2008 - 4:44 AM
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Edwin

 
mmm it kinda happened there was this girl i really liked and she had the most amazing feet ever lol but she had a boyfriend so i was wallowing in my misery. lol well that was the starting point of the poem but i made some of it up lol
 
Posted by Edwin on Tuesday, November 25, 2008 - 7:47 AM
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Brittany Marie.

 
Edwin this is good.. Like really good..
you seem to have a way with words,
very impressing ;]
 
Posted by Brittany Marie. on Saturday, February 14, 2009 - 3:02 AM
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