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Vincent Casciotta


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Gender: Male
Status: Single
Age: 21
Sign: Scorpio

City: Staten Island
State: New York
Country: US
Signup Date: 9/22/2004

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20 Oct 07 Saturday 

Current mood:  thankful
Let's see how this goes.

It Will Be Untitled
What an odd... thought
seemed like it could make sense
But where is the... reason?
Can it be found in here?

I built this one
I'll take it down.

Intriguing, nonetheless
I'd like to explore.
But, maybe not today.
Give me a good reason at least...

I built this one
I'll take it down.

What lies there?
Can I see it?
Should I see it?
I will grasp it in my slumber

I built this one
I'll take it down.

When comes the morning?
Unanswerable questions arise...
When comes the morning?
The time has come

I built this one
I'll take it down.

I'll take it down if I choose.
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ZIEL
Jacquelynn is badass.

 
I like it alot. The repetition makes the strong point of how you are in control of your own decisions in life. Maybe theres something your contemplating on, but want your own opinion of it? I wonder what intrigued you to write this. But very nicely written, nonetheless.
 
Posted by ZIEL on 02 Dec 07 Sunday - 5:04 PM
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Vic
Vincent Casciotta

 
Mmm, you're close on it.

Basically, this poem was written on the fly so that's probably why it's so hard to understand. Looking back on it now, I'd probably change up a few lines, but it's no big deal because this is not some big production of mine. Heh.

Nonetheless, the poem talks about my indecisiveness towards situations that arise in my life and whether or not the choices I have are the right ones to be taking. On the another note, the repeating of "I built this one; I'll take it down." metaphorically notes my life. I got to this point, I'll decide if it should go any further.

The entire poem is mostly a conflict within myself (or yourself, depending on if anyone can relate to it) based solely upon decision.

Thanks for taking the time to read it. I'd post more, but meh... the others are extensively personal lol.
 
Posted by Vic on 02 Dec 07 Sunday - 8:56 PM
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