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Jack Violet


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Gender: Female
Status: Single
Age: 27
Sign: Virgo

State: New Jersey
Country: US
Signup Date: 11/28/2005

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Tuesday, October 28, 2008 
She sat in a coffeeshop overlooking a busy street, in the corner table by the window.  A small girl, with somber eyes and a quiet smile.  Black hair, black coffee, a black hat placed on the chair beside her.  Not much to look at, but then, no one was looking.

Except her.

She had a notebook open on the table in front of her, next to her coffee.  A tattered thing, well worn and beaten at the edges, but sturdy still.  Smiling slightly,  she looked out the window, watching the people swarm on the street, wet and bright under the night sky, and she'd tap her pen twice, take a sip from her cup, and then jot down a short phrase in the book.

She didn't know what she wrote, not really.  It wasn't a premeditated thing, it wasn't even a story--just fragments, one for each person.  They didn't fit together until later, when, having been started and abandoned by her pen, they grew on their own and wrote themselves into whole sentences and paragraphs and sometimes even full pages.  She couldn't edit them after; half the time she couldn't even read them.  She'd flip past the older pages, filled up with writing, and only catch incidental words, fleeting images.  It was frustrating sometimes, but she understood that was just the way of things.  All she could do was seed the phrases.  Just how it was, and you had to accept it.

Once she wrote a person, she couldn't write them again.  Most she wrote in their their 20s, their 30s, their teens if she was short that day.  Sometimes she'd write a child, if they caught her eye.  Sometimes she wouldn't catch someone till their 50s or 60s.  She wondered about the people she never got a chance to write, then wondered if it was presumptious of her to wonder.  She wasn't omniscient after all, she only did what she could.  And that, too, was the way it was.

She'd hear people talking around her, sometimes.  She liked it best when she chanced to overhear the ones she'd written, years later, to see how it all turned out, make sense of the snatches she could get from her book.  Often they'd mention her by name.  They tended to ascribe too much to her, and too little to themselves, she thought.  She only seeded the phrases, and did her best to catch people at the right time.

Her sister was the one who could read the whole book: her ultimate editor.  She'd be the one to rip out the pages, when she wanted.  But she couldn't write in it, and that, too was just the way it was.  You just had to accept it.


Satie’s Faction

 
You have a rather bewitching writing style. This reminded me a bit of the way Paul Auster writes about his characters. I hope you don't hate him.

 
Posted by Satie’s Faction on Tuesday, October 28, 2008 - 2:22 PM
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Jack Violet
Jack Violet

 
Thank you, darling. I haven't read any of Auster's works actually, but I am sure I don't hate him. :-) This came about from having just gone to a Neil Gaiman signing (although it's not in his style at all), and sitting in a coffee shop waiting for a friend.
 
Posted by Jack Violet on Tuesday, October 28, 2008 - 2:46 PM
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violet_sky

 
I wish you'd write more. Or share more of your writing ;o)
I just love your style so much; strange how I usually never think of written things as 'beautiful' - they can be good or interesting or thrilling or inspiring even... yours are beautiful in addition.
However often I read any of your stories, I discover something new each time. I love how you perfect the art of not saying everything.
Are the sisters Fate and Death? Oh my God, I really love this story so much. Thanks!

As for Paul Auster, I really like the narrative of 'Moon Palace' or 'Mr. Vertigo' while 'The New York Trilogy' puts me off somehow...
 
Posted by violet_sky on Friday, October 31, 2008 - 9:58 AM
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Jack Violet
Jack Violet

 
Awwww, thank you so much. That is such a lovely compliment, too! I sometimes worry that I'm too obscure, so I'm glad that you enjoy it.

The character is meant to be Life, but she's kind of both Life and Fate. I was thinking when writing it that this line "They tended to ascribe too much to her, and too little to themselves, she thought" probably made it seem too much like Fate, but oh well, close enough! I shall check out Auster, and I have some more stories I may write soon...

<3
 
Posted by Jack Violet on Monday, November 03, 2008 - 6:53 AM
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