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Status: Single
City: Detroit
State: Michigan
Country: US
Signup Date: 11/29/2005

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Thursday, December 25, 2008 

Current mood:unravelled
Category: Writing and Poetry




Every time you come
you come inside

You don't stand at my door with flowers
You don't ask for years of forgiveness

Between telephone calls from your current lover
and your former lover

Between your beady brown eyes
Between my sympathetic thighs

You don't stand at my door

You come inside
Licking the walls
with morning breath
Electing me as your timeless mistress
you know
Even the mice in my kitchen feel used
once you leave
And return to your current lover
or your former lover
Who you swore on your dick you didn't desire anymore
you lying sack of shit

Leave me
and my mice
and my welcome mat
alone

I am so sick of loving you.



West Cramden

 
hmmm...
i wonder...who is this about?
 
Posted by West Cramden on Wednesday, December 24, 2008 - 19:36
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jieux
Joey Armeni

 
generally... I don't like to be considered one because of opinions such as this.

Most humans are "sick animals" - dames fill that role just as often...

but there are a seclect few that are completely open and honest...



"An ache in your soul is everybody's goal, to get what they can't have
That's why you're after her, and that's why she's after him
But sayin' it wont change a thing, and they'll realize that it wont change a thing."
 
Posted by jieux on Thursday, December 25, 2008 - 17:36
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DetroitDregs

 
Not really, you just like shitty guys I guess - seems to be sadly common.

 
Posted by DetroitDregs on Wednesday, December 24, 2008 - 21:41
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Ken

 
Geeeeeeezzz, couldn't we just have one day that is sacred to peace & happiness?

I am sorry to hear you are obviously hurting. But there are choices. And those are yours to make..... right or wrong or indifferent. If you elect to become that of what you do not want and complain later in a lament of your own sorrow I bestow no pity only limited empathy with reservation, not in judgement but in sorrow and frustration for I know you are smarter than that and now you seem to be guided by emotion painful and of no value. You only have two choices in life, be happy or miserable in any given situation. I will always try happy, it makes life a lot more enjoyable and forgiving. Whether or not you are religious or spiritual and observe the days of Christmas Eve and Christmas? I would only hope that you may observe and partake in these two days however you wish in a serene and joyous festive manner and mood. Appreciate yourself and the value your true friends know of you though they may not always bestow or make apparent, but just the same know you are appreciated and loved. Merry Christmas Ms. Em.
 
Posted by Ken on Wednesday, December 24, 2008 - 22:17
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Meghan Tonjes

 
Your pain makes some heartbreaking, deliciously angsty wordage.
I adore you.
I like you and your mice
and I will be over to play soon.

<3
 
Posted by Meghan Tonjes on Wednesday, December 24, 2008 - 22:43
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Misterio Perez||Tec Records Int||Five Star Traxx

 
another work of art darling n_n whether or not this is to a true ex lover or not, its poetry and im sure it gives you a wonderful sense of accomplishment to have been through this and able to produce such fine art (= many kudos (=
 
Posted by Misterio Perez||Tec Records Int||Five Star Traxx on Wednesday, December 24, 2008 - 23:21
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Tabitha Lynn

 
I can re-late... Someday we will be treated like princesses... Right??? Well at least I don't stop dreaming and hoping for that... and singing about it. LOL...
 
Posted by Tabitha Lynn on Thursday, December 25, 2008 - 0:57
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Jessica

 
it's hard....i know.
 
Posted by Jessica on Thursday, December 25, 2008 - 2:07
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Courtney
courtney hillman

 
girl i know exactly how that feels.
 
Posted by Courtney on Thursday, December 25, 2008 - 2:53
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J u l i a n

 
this piece is posted under the heading "writing and poetry" and from that basis, this is a very fine write....
 
Posted by J u l i a n on Thursday, December 25, 2008 - 7:07
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the wesley owens project

 
okay okay... I get it. I'll bring flowers next time. And chinese takeout. Deal?
 
Posted by the wesley owens project on Thursday, December 25, 2008 - 16:49
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gyro

 
What Ken said ...................Also I am an Exterminater I will get rid of your mice...............Mike
 
Posted by gyro on Friday, December 26, 2008 - 6:41
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nicole
nicole retka

 
i can understand this poem, its a good one..
 
Posted by nicole on Friday, December 26, 2008 - 23:12
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jim

 
I'm curious about that other person's "all men" remark. I'd like to see the evidence, please. Obviously she is conveniently overlooking millions of people in her groundless assertion. How childish a response.
 
Posted by jim on Tuesday, December 30, 2008 - 0:55
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Colleen
Rickys Mommy

 
oh dear.

if only they could be perfect all of the time; or even some of it.

oh dear.
 
Posted by Colleen on Tuesday, December 30, 2008 - 22:41
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Krystine the Anametamystik

 
I need to play for you Combichrist "Lying Sack of Shit" for you. The "Everybody Hates You" album would suit your current mood quite well.
 
Posted by Krystine the Anametamystik on Sunday, January 04, 2009 - 2:59
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