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City: CHICAGO
State: Illinois
Country: US
Signup Date: 12/14/2005

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Thursday, March 06, 2008 

Current mood:  calm
Category: Life
Disguise

Intimidation drowned me in her prescence
As I struggled for any form of breath to speak to her.

Sophisticated sorority girl, she waves and says hi
and all I do is smile, and slightly nod my head up.

Thursday evening, this day is different.
Fresh haircut, well dressed, crisp kicks,
her waterfall will not drown me today.
I have safety equipment, fully prepared
to go whitewater rafting inside her mind.
I am inextinguishable fire today.

She waves, I say "hey, how're you doing?",
she says fine, we exchange majors, religious beliefs,
favorite foods, sports and cell phone numbers,
all in an hour's conversation.
But something was wrong.

The fire that I possess is undermined by her flame.
She has real fire and it has been blown in my face.
Twenty-four hour morning breath has melted my skin
this entire conversation.

No longer drowned, but charred with her inextinguishable fire.
We finish talking, promise to call one another.

Upset, embarrassed, amused...
I walk away...

wishing I never tried to swim in her water.

Omen
Blaq
Chocolate Girl Wonder

 
LOL...WHAAAAAAAAAAT
 
Posted by Blaq on Thursday, March 06, 2008 - 2:53 AM
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BABY BITCH

 
im fuckin dying at this hillarity. love it. im still peeing. i needed the laugh...
 
Posted by BABY BITCH on Thursday, March 06, 2008 - 6:51 AM
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~Cynthia~

 
I was cracking up laughing from the transition of the waterfall of her outer beauty into the pungent fire of her breath... when it's applied to a human form it's hilarious. And then we realize our biggest hurdle is ourselves. I'm enjoying getting to know you through your inner thoughts. ^.^
 
Posted by ~Cynthia~ on Thursday, March 06, 2008 - 6:54 AM
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gabrielle

 
"LMAO!!!! I was blushing for you and shit!!! ....still LMAO!!
 
Posted by gabrielle on Tuesday, March 18, 2008 - 1:35 AM
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(¯'·._)?karamel_d_lishess?(¯'·._)
camille reynolds

 
wow.............
 
Posted by (¯'·._)?karamel_d_lishess?(¯'·._) on Thursday, March 27, 2008 - 12:27 PM
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Deadskull Studios

 
Ha Haa. Serious! Been there Dude.

 
Posted by Deadskull Studios on Thursday, March 27, 2008 - 6:02 PM
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JennyKorn
Jenny Korn

 
Hilarious poem.
Autobiographical? Always gotta have fresh breath!

*smile*
JennyKorn

Please feel free to visit my latest blog posted this past Thursday on 4/24 at
http://blog. myspace. com/jennykorn
(I take blog topic suggestions & I subscribe to everyone's blog who subscribes to mine)
 
Posted by JennyKorn on Tuesday, April 29, 2008 - 3:20 PM
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Emerica

 
Very cool. I like your referenc about you safety gear pertaining to your clothes. That's so true how we feel more confident when we are dipped. Sorry that her flame blew out your fire.

What she didn't realize is that if she let her charcoals simmer and not blaze so strong, you guys could of burned together causing a massive five alarm fire. LOL... At least you tried, that's more than alot of people do.

 
Posted by Emerica on Saturday, May 03, 2008 - 12:58 AM
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♥Mimi Est.83

 
Damn!!!!!!!! Lmao! You're mean! Lol if she had stank breath you shoulda gave her a tictac or some certs! Lol
 
Posted by ♥Mimi Est.83 on Friday, July 18, 2008 - 5:09 PM
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bLAcK bArBiE LoVe jOnEs
MoRe sLaCk

 
I hope intimidation is not becoming our reality...

Because if you are intimidated, then I am afraid of what will not be visualized...(:))

YOu know fire can purify (like water) and make you stronger...ask gold!

Nice elements huh?

"God has not given us a spirit of fear, but of power, and LOVE, and a sound mind" Icorth.
1:7????
 
Posted by bLAcK bArBiE LoVe jOnEs on Monday, November 10, 2008 - 7:27 PM
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