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Gender: Male
Status: Married
Age: 34
Sign: Virgo

City: Surprise
State: Arizona
Country: US
Signup Date: 12/15/2005

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Monday, June 02, 2008 

Current mood:  complacent
Category: Writing and Poetry

One of my poems has been included in the 25th Anniversary issue of Suisun Valley Review.






Unheard Symphony



Eyes closed, I exist
only as a vibration
in a world of pure sound

Pervading the cosmos, finite tones
resonate throughout space
echoing into infinity

Removing the mystery from coincidence
frequencies blend and absorb each other
harmonizing into a universal key

Opening my eyes, I will
trust in this noise, even 
if they call it God



Side note 1:  
This is the middle section of a piece that I occasionally perform with my friend's punk band.
 



Side note 2:  
A woman once asked me about that piece, after a reading. She said that she particularly liked that one (I don't remember what else I read that night) and asked if I was familiar with the String Theory. 

I hadn't heard of it, but I told her that it was interesting because my first draft used thread instead of sound.  It tangled instead of harmonized and ended up with God as a knot, instead of noise.
Currently listening:
Bonefish: The Legend of Mahogany Cass
By Colorstore
Release date: 2008-04-01
...chela...

 
lis, this one is good. the string theory has nothing to do with string...instead it is as your poem says, the string is only what they imagen it may resembule if we could see it with the naked eye, it is science trying to put a face to the energey that we all vibrate with...you see it clearer than they do! with out needing to know it as they do!
 
Posted by ...chela... on Monday, June 02, 2008 - 9:29 PM
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John
John Tynan

 
I can see you embodying this poem when you read... your attention to sound.

Great going! Glad to hear this poem made it to print.
 
Posted by John on Thursday, June 05, 2008 - 5:30 PM
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Blue Moon

 
congrats! i am a hand on the string, like a guitar...enjoying every sound that is played.. Sooo is God white noise????
 
Posted by Blue Moon on Monday, July 07, 2008 - 6:56 AM
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A.D.Hitchin
A.D Hitchin

 
CONGRATULATIONS!

The poem is first-rate and the magazine looks good.
 
Posted by A.D.Hitchin on Wednesday, July 09, 2008 - 3:21 PM
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harold harper

 
i need to get myself some of that...
 
Posted by harold harper on Tuesday, May 12, 2009 - 4:03 PM
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