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Gender: Male
Status: Married
Age: 38
Sign: Leo

State: Ontario
Country: CA
Signup Date: 10/18/2004

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Friday, June 12, 2009 

Category: Writing and Poetry
The Grotesque
   
    A kiss from bloodied lips,
    silenced tongue licks the fist,
    beautiful are your bruises
   
    Trapped within glass cocoon,
    the butterfly grows no wings,
    grounded slave of mine
   
    Your presence will always linger,
    ... here in the grotesque
    Your tears will forever rain,
    ... here in the grotesque
   
    Perfect pair are we,
    sadistic monster stalks wanton prey
   
    Macabre dance, we are violence,
    stripped of self, love is surrender
   
    Betrayed desires, cherished gift of pain,
    bed of regret, I am your vampire
   
    Your broken smile will always be
    ... a portrait of the grotesque
    Your haunting eyes will forever
    ... lead me back to the grotesque
   
    Spider spin a web,
    catch the fly unaware,
    pleasure is the struggle
   
    I become a god,
    butterfly sprawled upon the altar,
    sweet sacrifice unto me
   
    This love is a feast,
    ... at the table of the grotesque
    Every lie wears my skin,
    ... I am the grotesque
   
    Hungry life the wolf,
    perfume of blood attacks the senses,
    feed me what I crave
   
    Cracks in the cocoon,
    freedom is a breath never taken,
    in silence I grow weak
   
    Absence is a disease that kills,
    you become the death of me,
    in the grave I pray for your return
   
    Tender kiss from bloody lips,
    a hole where there was once control,
    weakened prey, once a monster
   
    Together we are the grotesque ...

Copyright CW. Hobbs/2009
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Alpha Gal

 
This is an interesting piece, and honestly, could be taken so many different directions....I feel the numbing undesirableness, but at the same time, a haughtiness that you have control.......even if it's involuntary...it's like a story of needs fulfilled, but with very different expectations.....I'd love to see your thoughts on this one........
Excellent write! You never cease to amaze........



 
Posted by Alpha Gal on Tuesday, June 16, 2009 - 02:48
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Duff (Chaos Junkie)

 
Sorry for taking so long to reply to this, I have no excuse, I just haven't felt like doing much of anything. My brain is just exhausted lol. Ok, let's see, my thoughts on this one. This is the part I always have a hard time with lol. I don't really know where my mind was while I was writing it, I never really do, but what I get from it is, a twisted little love story. An abuser and one who lets themselves be abused. The result is death, but that is just a new chapter in their story. The abuser is haunted by the one he killed, it's the only way she can abuse him. And he realizes part of him died with her and all he has left is a need for her, a need so desperate that he would surrender control just to have her back.

As always, thank you for your comments, they are always appreciated

 
Posted by Duff (Chaos Junkie) on Saturday, June 20, 2009 - 15:53
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