POV coming from Closet Man walking through brushy alley while breathing heavy and scanning several backyards as he creeps through the brush, suddenly flinching/spooked as big dog barks viciously at him from behind fence.
POV Closet Man (hooded) moving forward down the alley…
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Car aggressively parking on street with a sudden stop.
POV from back in bushes of drunken man (MAC) climbing out of car stumbling his way onto sidewalk and into yard unzipping and instantly urinating on bush in front of house as Closet Man continues to watch while inching closer from the brush as Man (DEREK) comes out of house standing at door on front porch…
DEREK
Hey I already watered those today go piss in your own damn yard!
POV still from Closet Man getting even closer as Mac’s pant’s slip to his ankles.
MAC
Screw you you’re lucky I don’t straight drop a pile of pie in your precious
yard!
POV Closet Man’s view of Derek disgustedly turning back inside.
DEREK
Fuckin’ drunk…
POV Mac’s view as he continues to water the bush.
POV Derek inside taking heat from his wife (MISTY) who’s peeking out window.
MISTY
You’re such a pussy…
DEREK
What do you want me to do go out there and beat up a drunken man
with his pants down over his ankles?
Wife simply staring out window without responding…
DEREK (sarcastically)
Would you like me to flip on the light so you can get a better look at his
package?
Misty instantly popping away from window…
POV Mac pulling pants up and stumbling out of yard toward the next house over.
POV from bushes in between both Derek and Mac’s porches at Mac approaching and tripping on steps to his porch.
POV Mac back to his feet with a fart and to the front door struggling with his key.
POV from bushes as Mac opens and enters without fully closing door behind him…
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A fart with Mac standing at open fridge chugging back a beer (only source of light coming from fridge) before placing it back inside simply standing there swaying a bit on the verge of getting sick as he then holds it back in his mouth and quickly closing fridge to dark…
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Dark with POV from inside toilet as lid lifts just in time as Mac opens up wide.
POV behind Mac on his knees with a fart while heavily puking in toilet…
POV above Mac as he comes to a stop catching his breath remaining on his knees fighting back a little more puke before quickly jumping up pulling down pants and sitting on toilet with liquid sounding crap pouring into toilet…
POV Mac’s uncomfortable expression as the crapping ceases with a look of getting sick again…
POV again above toilet as Mac jumps off back on his knees without wiping/flushing and simply begins puking…
POV behind toilet of Mac puking with door in background as suddenly (with IBS) freaky image of hooded man quickly walks past door as Mac continues puking…
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Mac drunkenly flopping down on bed without shutting off lamp, undressing or covering up and simply passing out…
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Close-up hand unlocking latch to window falling back to hooded Closet Man in dark attic opening window and poking head out.
POV his view of roof as he scans the surroundings.
POV Closet Man closing window but not locking, turning and creeping right past POV…
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Closet Man creeping down the staircase…
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Closet Man slowly opening door to room and creeping inside.
POV his view of extreme display room with knives and weapons from movie scenes as he scans the room before staring at a specific set (Riddick blades)…
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POV from hall as Closet Man cautiously exits the room creeping over to closet with a peak inside while squatting and reaching for a couple items and slipping something under his hood over his head/face then glancing both directions of the hall before rising (with items in hand) and walking right past POV now wearing snowboarding goggles under his hood…
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Close-up boots falling back as Closet Man creeps down basement steps…
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POV Closet Man’s view of washer/dryer as he creeps past them…
POV behind Closet Man as he walks under staircase through another room…
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Closet Man turning corner and walking back up basement staircase…
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POV closet with door slightly ajar swinging open as Closet Man walks out now wearing a neoprene mask under his hood along with the goggles and an old white UPS shirt over his sweater as he creeps past POV…
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Closet Man creeping upstairs…
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Mac completely passed out on his back when suddenly something begins splashing down around and on his midsection along with the mattress all around his midsection as POV falls back and upward to Closet Man standing next to bed as the splashing ceases with sound of Closet Man zipping back up and simply walking out of room…
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POV from inside closet as Closet Man enters and closes door behind him to black…
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EXT. MAC AND DEREK’S HOUSES – DAY
POV both Mac and Derek’s homes with sound of engine coming to life.
POV Derek inside his car (baseball cap and shirt) now pulling away…
POV Misty closing back door walking straight over to fence beginning to climb it…
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POV close-up Misty entering Mac’s room with a foul expression from the smell before completely rolling her eyes with a shake of her head.
POV Mac as Misty begins shaking him awake...
MISTY
Mac… Time to wake up stud…
Mac groggy as hell as he comes to…
MISTY (CONT’D)
Derek just left for the afternoon, thought I’d come over to play…
Although, apparently not in here!
Misty a look downward as Mac stretches and takes a look for himself while fully waking.
MAC
Oh what the ffffuck?!
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Steamy bathroom with POV at shower (dark shower curtain closed, water running)…
POV soapy Mac standing away from falling water wiping soap all over his body then looking forward with curiosity…
MAC
How the hell’d you get in here anyhow?
Misty into POV moving past Mac as he moves under the shower water rinsing off.
MISTY
After knocking for 30 minutes I finally realized your drunk ass left the door unlocked… Lucky some deranged lunatic didn’t stumble on in…
MAC
And here I thought I was lucky that’s exactly what did happen!
Mac moving in on her seductive expression for an intimate kiss…
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Multiple POV flashes of vacant locations in house where Closet Man had been the night before beginning with the last closet he entered, attic window, attic stairs, Riddick blades on wall, hall way closet, washer/dryer, basement staircase, Mac’s room with wet sheets and closet in background…
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POV steamy bathroom at shower curtain from outside with sound of sex as POV falls back revealing (with IBS) Closet Man (standing on chair or other bathroom item) sprawled out against wall peeking over top of shower curtain.
POV inside shower down low angled upward with parts of Mac and Misty in view along with Closet Man in background up high peeking down on them (as IBS continues)…
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POV (coming from outside window at window) Closet Man falling back as he stares downward out attic window…
POV his view of Misty down below hopping fence into her yard heading toward back door…
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