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LIFE AT THIS LEVEL Stories and verse from the stalker of the cow pastures in the rural district on the outskirts of the City on the Edge of Nowhere

chuck



Last Updated: 11/18/2009

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Gender: Male
Status: Married
Age: 54
Sign: Libra

City: DALZELL
State: South Carolina
Country: US
Signup Date: 1/10/2006

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August 23, 2009 - Sunday 6:29 PM

Category: Writing and Poetry
Love the way you grin at me-  wanna keep that smile forever,
but you insist on wasting away, and I’m stuck to the wall of never.
Lost my train of thought   when the spike went through the tracks,
but I always like to journey out    like I ain’t coming back.

You gotten like a bad jam; you’re stinking up the joint.
Don’t think that you could ever play, but that’s beside the point.
What I think I’m saying-    what I say is, thought
I sold my soul to the lowest bidder, and he hates what he bought.

There’s me    and you
don’t know what to do
because I still like it when we dance
but you refuse to move

Maybe I misheard you say:   “Pass the black eye, please,”   
so I put one on you, and you dropped to your knees.
One thing leads another, until nothings what I got:
except a low-fi needle and you, here, left to rot.

Three days is forever-   locked away with you
in a hundred buck apartment   as we both come unglued:
you, melting in that crazy way like everyone who’s died-       
me, trying to write a cryptic note that hints to suicide.
                                   
There’s me    and you
don’t know what to do
because I still like it when we dance
but you refuse to move
Myrrym Davies - Horror Writer

 
I like this one, Chuck.  A lot.  The concept of insanity creeps me out, and you've managed to capture that uncomfortable vibe very well here.  Kudos. 

 
Posted by Myrrym Davies - Horror Writer on August 23, 2009 - Sunday - 7:47 PM
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chuck

 
I guess it's a Choate thing to go with what we know.  Do you think this kinda stuff is MND worthy?

 
Posted by chuck on August 24, 2009 - Monday - 2:57 AM
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Myrrym Davies - Horror Writer

 
LOL, I don't review the poetry; LB does.  That said, I don't see why not.  It's dark and creepy enough. 

 
Posted by Myrrym Davies - Horror Writer on August 24, 2009 - Monday - 3:02 AM
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Zombie Zak
Zombie Zak

 
Nice!  Got great beat pattern!  Creepy WTF is he doing with the dead image/vibe.
 
Posted by Zombie Zak on August 23, 2009 - Sunday - 10:02 PM
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chuck

 
Nothing like that voodoo boogie for dancin' with the dead.  All hail Papa Zombie Frog! 

BTW, congrats on your poetry appearing in the anthology: Vicious Verses and Reanimated Rhymes! 

 
Posted by chuck on August 24, 2009 - Monday - 3:06 AM
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