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13 Jan 08 Sunday 

Current mood:  drained
Category: Writing and Poetry

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Keep your pace

as black velvet covers,

caresses your skin;

 

fingers of the wind.

 

Your hands stretch out;

searching, twisting,

desperately hoping…

 

The silence pounds.

 

Fantasies blur to grey,

as lights suddenly strobe,

head aches, ears reach out

 

to the pounding drum.

 

Stressing, straining

to peel back the black.

Is there anything worth seeing?

 

Bass reverberates

 

bringing a roar of sound

smell and the constant

longing;

 

hands stretch out…

 

If only she were closer

maybe you could catch her,

test the snare and measure

your beat to her rhythm.

 

All those hands are good for is stretching.

Y TUESDAY POETRY CLUB

 
Hello you,

Good to read a new poem of yours.
"ears reach out" like it.
 
Posted by Y TUESDAY POETRY CLUB on 08 Jan 08 Tuesday - 4:59 PM
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Y TUESDAY POETRY CLUB

 
Hello you,

Good to read a new poem of yours.
"ears reach out" like it.
 
Posted by Y TUESDAY POETRY CLUB on 08 Jan 08 Tuesday - 4:59 PM
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Mike; The Lone Maverick
Mike Schonewolf

 
Love the rewitten version of this. Try get it published.
 
Posted by Mike; The Lone Maverick on 09 Jan 08 Wednesday - 6:45 PM
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A.D.Hitchin
A.D Hitchin

 
Brilliant work!

Expressive, raw, sensual with a genuine sense of yearning.

How are you? Haven't seen you or your work for what must be ages!!!
 
Posted by A.D.Hitchin on 10 Apr 08 Thursday - 5:57 PM
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