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Last Updated: 11/20/2009

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Status: Single
City: New Orleans
State: Louisiana
Country: US
Signup Date: 7/3/2009
July 4, 2009 - Saturday 

Current mood:  drained
Category: Writing and Poetry
Dear love,
you broke me down
you told me you cared
yet u made me look like a clown
because u weren't there
(but I was)
you made me happy
yet u made me so very sad
faith in u
I no longer have
u brought smiles to my face
which tears quickly replaced
I don't respect u
and u are a disgrace
i'm ashamed to say I once felt ur presence
but u are no longer near
I am not under your harmful blessings
if I were to ever want u again
I would Rather shoot myself
than to live under your sin!
5:50 AM
 
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[tirrany]

 
Rather violent towards da end but, its nice & like da rhyme scheme.

 
Posted by [tirrany] on July 8, 2009 - Wednesday - 5:01 AM
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Dr. Billie J
Jeremy JEanjacques

 
this is good we should write sum time
 
Posted by Dr. Billie J on July 8, 2009 - Wednesday - 5:17 AM
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Lonnie

 
i like tht!!
ima have to put tht on me page unda B.HART POETRY SECTION!
lol

 
Posted by Lonnie on July 8, 2009 - Wednesday - 7:25 AM
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*SCJ*Neva Trashy*Miss.Toukie
Miss. Toukie

 
I can feel where u cumin from on this this is good
 
Posted by *SCJ*Neva Trashy*Miss.Toukie on July 8, 2009 - Wednesday - 7:27 AM
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|JERAMY|
J A

 
im feelin this one ma

 
Posted by |JERAMY| on July 8, 2009 - Wednesday - 7:46 AM
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ĶƺƺźƳ✰

 
That was deep 4 real ma i see where u comin from on dis mad propz 2 u
 
Posted by ĶƺƺźƳ✰ on July 8, 2009 - Wednesday - 9:08 AM
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(9) King Apache (9)
Geronimo Jr.

 
well damn,lol
shuldn't give up on luv cus a dumbass fucked ova ya
 
Posted by (9) King Apache (9) on July 8, 2009 - Wednesday - 10:18 AM
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VAlARiE REN'EE -->[iM dHA iSH BABi]<--
VAlarie MOore

 
B33N DOWN DHiS RO4D B3fOR3 SO iM R34llY f33liNG DHiS ON3
 
Posted by VAlARiE REN'EE -->[iM dHA iSH BABi]<-- on July 8, 2009 - Wednesday - 2:24 PM
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♥fαsнίoи.lovє.мυsίc.
Fяєsнίє Вαвγ

 
lovinqq tha poem its deep
 
Posted by ♥fαsнίoи.lovє.мυsίc. on July 8, 2009 - Wednesday - 3:19 PM
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Fred.Vance
Fredrick Vance

 
I like it. That was really good
 
Posted by Fred.Vance on July 8, 2009 - Wednesday - 4:28 PM
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Most Hated

 
Feeling the poems
 
Posted by Most Hated on July 8, 2009 - Wednesday - 4:54 PM
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~& n€n€
N. Jones

 
Gyrl that shit is on.!
 
Posted by ~& n€n€ on July 8, 2009 - Wednesday - 5:02 PM
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-reavenn♥

 
i lOVE tHiS. =)
 
Posted by -reavenn♥ on July 8, 2009 - Wednesday - 5:35 PM
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Bria A.K.A Sexy
Bria Riley

 
Ahh...now this shit go fed! but be careful not to contradict yo self in sum of the lyrics but overall its a good look!
 
Posted by Bria A.K.A Sexy on July 8, 2009 - Wednesday - 7:18 PM
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SWEET TEE

 
thats what it is my girl keep doing u ma
 
Posted by SWEET TEE on July 8, 2009 - Wednesday - 7:20 PM
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kimmie...!

 
I liked what youre trying to say in this. Whatever you're trying to say, you said it very well. I give you props on that one!
 
Posted by kimmie...! on July 8, 2009 - Wednesday - 10:57 PM
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9~Mr. Outstanding~9
Mr. Vicks

 
dats some deep shit
 
Posted by 9~Mr. Outstanding~9 on July 8, 2009 - Wednesday - 11:31 PM
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~Reeses~
Brittney Reese

 
This was real emotional. I was a bit lost at the end but i was found. Made you think about the power love has...
 
Posted by ~Reeses~ on July 9, 2009 - Thursday - 4:08 AM
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AaRoN [#30]
Aaron Ditty

 
Very nice poetry!
 
Posted by AaRoN [#30] on July 10, 2009 - Friday - 6:39 AM
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ill be bacc /illy/krazy k
Keras Deray

 
dats up dats real chick
 
Posted by ill be bacc /illy/krazy k on July 12, 2009 - Sunday - 10:34 PM
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Fabo
Phelim Brown

 
Yea
I feel ya
Keep rhymin
Much respect right here 
Much love

 
Posted by Fabo on July 13, 2009 - Monday - 5:25 AM
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*~MS DIVA~* DA BITCH U ENVY
MS DIVa

 
I LIKE DIS 1 2 GURL
 
Posted by *~MS DIVA~* DA BITCH U ENVY on July 27, 2009 - Monday - 5:05 AM
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shottas :G.M.C
Tevin Parker

 
sht lilmama it seems u spit dat shit from the heart
 
Posted by shottas :G.M.C on July 27, 2009 - Monday - 7:26 AM
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Ms.Tina'Rose ♥

 
i like this blog soooo much i want to take it llol but i feel wat u r sayin and goin threw, u will get ova it and wen u do he will want u bac, like they always do lol but it
 feels so good to shit on a nigga wen he did the same to u..
 
Posted by Ms.Tina'Rose ♥ on July 27, 2009 - Monday - 1:33 PM
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~*♥ :)MISS SMILEY:)♥~*!!
~♥ :MIss SMiley:♥~

 
i really love this one cuz i feel that way about my ex
 
Posted by ~*♥ :)MISS SMILEY:)♥~*!! on July 28, 2009 - Tuesday - 3:54 AM
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MRS.dAGGS™

 
....I like guddie job-j.d -Billy-joe-joyce -billy!!! fah short
 
Posted by MRS.dAGGS™ on July 31, 2009 - Friday - 2:53 AM
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Kydd

 
nice, its real talk
 
Posted by Kydd on August 2, 2009 - Sunday - 9:56 PM
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DYNAMICDEE

 
nice, i wouldn't shoot myself.....just love myself a whole lot more. lol though  you do so well....
 
Posted by DYNAMICDEE on August 4, 2009 - Tuesday - 12:38 PM
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dont like myspace

 
Really love
 
Posted by dont like myspace on September 3, 2009 - Thursday - 3:54 PM
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