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Gender: Male
Status: Married
Age: 29
Sign: Virgo

City: London
State: London and South East
Country: UK
Signup Date: 1/13/2006

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Wednesday, March 04, 2009 

Category: Writing and Poetry

Everyone,

thank you for all your comments on my last blog. I wrote this new piece for fun yesterday.

Check out my new piece at a handful of stones here

Enjoy!

Chris

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Father Icarus



He hung a teaspoon

on the door instead

of a hat, fed us mud

instead of porridge.



At night we heard him

squirm in the confines

of a bed too small

for his page-like frame.



The dreams produced

were too big for his head

and often dripped through

the ceiling. One morning



I woke with men marching

on my lap. Another,

with giant ants, paprika-red.

The day he left, I found



him by my window, wearing

an Icarus suit, desperate

to fly even though the feathers

had been melted to his skin.


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Paulbearer

 
Such meaning handled in such compact economy of words....color me impressed

I can't wait to read more of your stuff
 
Posted by Paulbearer on Wednesday, March 04, 2009 - 9:13 PM
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Christian

 
Thanks!

Glad you enjoyed reading my poetry

 
Posted by Christian on Thursday, March 05, 2009 - 10:29 AM
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Empty Souls

 
Good piece

Nick
 
Posted by Empty Souls on Wednesday, March 04, 2009 - 9:25 PM
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Christian

 
Thanks, Nick
 
Posted by Christian on Thursday, March 05, 2009 - 10:30 AM
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Jacqui Corcoran
Jacqui Corcoran

 
this is colourful and mysterious Christian.

I really liked it. it has a fable/fairytale feel.

Interesting piece!
 
Posted by Jacqui Corcoran on Wednesday, March 04, 2009 - 10:13 PM
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Christian

 
Thanks, Jacqui

Glad you liked it
 
Posted by Christian on Thursday, March 05, 2009 - 10:30 AM
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Miss Jane

 
Not sure what a "page-like" frame is, but the rest of this made sense in its own way. Dug it.

 
Posted by Miss Jane on Wednesday, March 04, 2009 - 11:28 PM
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Christian

 
Glad you liked it, and thanks for dropping by
 
Posted by Christian on Thursday, March 05, 2009 - 10:33 AM
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Connie Stadler
Connie Stadler

 
Yes a brilliant, poignant fairy-tale...
 
Posted by Connie Stadler on Thursday, March 05, 2009 - 12:24 AM
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Christian

 
Thanks, Connie
 
Posted by Christian on Thursday, March 05, 2009 - 10:33 AM
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John Eagle

 
Christian, love the pace of this one and the last stanza really works well. Excellent. I look forward to more of your stuff....really.

 
Posted by John Eagle on Thursday, March 05, 2009 - 1:23 AM
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Christian

 
Thanks for the kind words, John
 
Posted by Christian on Thursday, March 05, 2009 - 10:34 AM
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tj jude

 
it's great to read new christian, but it's nothing new to read great christian. excellent.

 
Posted by tj jude on Thursday, March 05, 2009 - 3:41 AM
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Christian

 
Glad to see you, tj, and thanks for dropping by
 
Posted by Christian on Thursday, March 05, 2009 - 10:34 AM
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Dan Miles

 
Wonderful use of language and imagery. Superb stuff as always mate. Loved it.

 
Posted by Dan Miles on Thursday, March 05, 2009 - 11:27 AM
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Christian

 
Thanks, Dan. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

 
Posted by Christian on Thursday, March 05, 2009 - 12:23 PM
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PERRY
Perry Miller

 
Great, as usual. I love your terse style and your adept use of imagery.


I enjoyed reading "False Eclipse," even as a flock of starlings and grackles thundered overhead, sending the beagle running to cower under the olive bush. I don't know how big the flocks get there in England; but here in North America, they can darken the sky for two or three minutes.

 
Posted by PERRY on Thursday, March 05, 2009 - 12:00 PM
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Christian

 
Thanks, Perry

I've seen some pretty big crowds of starlings over here, but they are nothing to the ones I've seen in France. Those are similar in size to the ones you've described.



 
Posted by Christian on Thursday, March 05, 2009 - 12:25 PM
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Petra Whiteley
Petra Whiteley

 
Love the narrative running through this, the dreaminess of the tone and images coveyed the thought wonderfully. Excellent.

 
Posted by Petra Whiteley on Thursday, March 05, 2009 - 4:42 PM
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Christian

 
Thanks, Petra

I'm glad you enjoyed reading it
 
Posted by Christian on Thursday, March 05, 2009 - 5:40 PM
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Stephanie

 
Excellent, Christian!
 
Posted by Stephanie on Friday, March 06, 2009 - 6:20 AM
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Christian

 
Thanks, Stephanie.


Glad to see you around
 
Posted by Christian on Friday, March 06, 2009 - 9:00 AM
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Si
Si Philbrook

 
If I've said it once I'v said it a thousand times.
Never eat cheese before going to bed!





"The dreams produced





were too big for his head





and often dripped through





the ceiling.
"





I enjoyed this a lot. I hope I was supposed to smile.






Si
 
Posted by Si on Friday, March 06, 2009 - 10:47 AM
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Christian

 
You crack me up, Si



I'm glad you enjoyed it and I'm pleased it made you smile
 
Posted by Christian on Friday, March 06, 2009 - 1:01 PM
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Kafkabug

 
The story of Icarus and Daedalus has always been my favorite.



Brilliant motif.

 
Posted by Kafkabug on Sunday, March 08, 2009 - 6:03 PM
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Christian

 
Mine too!



Thanks for dropping by, I've missed you
 
Posted by Christian on Sunday, March 08, 2009 - 7:10 PM
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Christian

 
Thank you, Diego



Glad to see you around
 
Posted by Christian on Wednesday, March 11, 2009 - 7:39 AM
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