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Last Updated: 11/21/2009

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Gender: Male
Status: Married
Age: 29
Sign: Virgo

City: London
State: London and South East
Country: UK
Signup Date: 1/13/2006
Friday, April 17, 2009 

Category: Writing and Poetry




Everyone,

here's something I've written lately. Enjoy!

Christian

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Pastoral

Landscape moves
like stage scenery.
Clouds roll past
on rusty castors,
jaundice coloured
meadows are brought
in by nervous stagehands.
A backdrop of river
and two amateur fishermen
rolls down. A sudden
stop, curtain swishing across
like the end of consciousness.
That finale, how many times
have I expected it? rewritten it?






6:09 PM
 
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Petra Whiteley
Petra Whiteley

 
Very nicely done, much enjoyed.

 
 
Posted by Petra Whiteley on Friday, April 17, 2009 - 6:33 PM
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Christian

 
Thanks, Petra. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

 
 
Posted by Christian on Friday, April 17, 2009 - 10:04 PM
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Christian

 
I've been on many a train, Sig. Thanks for dropping by and I'm glad you enjoyed it.

 
 
Posted by Christian on Friday, April 17, 2009 - 10:05 PM
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Christian

 
Thanks for your kind words, Diego. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

 
 
Posted by Christian on Friday, April 17, 2009 - 10:06 PM
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Jacqui Corcoran
Jacqui Corcoran

 
brilliant. love the life as a stage simile and the 'deep' ending (open to interpretation) of natural death or something more planned.
enjoyed, Christian!
 
Posted by Jacqui Corcoran on Friday, April 17, 2009 - 10:32 PM
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Christian

 
Thanks, Jacqui. Glad you enjoyed reading it.

 
Posted by Christian on Saturday, April 18, 2009 - 7:47 AM
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Empty Souls

 
Good piece



Nick
 
Posted by Empty Souls on Friday, April 17, 2009 - 11:46 PM
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Christian

 
Thanks, Nick.

 
Posted by Christian on Saturday, April 18, 2009 - 7:47 AM
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John Eagle

 
for such a short poetic journey...this was so vivid!
 
Posted by John Eagle on Saturday, April 18, 2009 - 11:04 AM
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Christian

 
Thanks, John. I'm glad you liked it.

 
Posted by Christian on Saturday, April 18, 2009 - 2:48 PM
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Jorge
Jorge Concepcion

 
Very vivid & creative.
I liked it!
 
Posted by Jorge on Saturday, April 18, 2009 - 1:09 PM
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Christian

 
Thanks, Jorge. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.

 
Posted by Christian on Saturday, April 18, 2009 - 2:49 PM
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Connie Stadler
Connie Stadler

 
The ending seals a very fine poem, Christian.

 
Posted by Connie Stadler on Saturday, April 18, 2009 - 6:50 PM
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Christian

 
Thanks, Connie. I'm glad you liked it.

 
Posted by Christian on Saturday, April 18, 2009 - 6:51 PM
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Crafty Green Poet
Juliet Wilson

 
I love thei idea behind this, and the detail of the nervous stagehands.

 
 
Posted by Crafty Green Poet on Monday, April 27, 2009 - 8:24 AM
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Christian

 
Thank you, Juliet, I'm glad you liked it.

 
 
Posted by Christian on Monday, April 27, 2009 - 8:29 AM
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A.D.Hitchin
A.D Hitchin

 
Great tight structure and prosody.

Distinct, original tone and style.
 
 
Posted by A.D.Hitchin on Friday, May 01, 2009 - 5:00 PM
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Christian

 
Thanks, Antony. I'm glad you liked it.
 
 
Posted by Christian on Sunday, May 03, 2009 - 10:50 AM
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Marlynda

 
"That finale, how many times
have I expected it? rewritten it?" Yes... I like it!

 
Posted by Marlynda on Monday, May 25, 2009 - 4:53 PM
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TATTOOS BY MARILAN
Marilan Tinajero

 
How many time will we endeavor to rewrite of it again?  Brilliant stage...may the play, it's neverending and renewed perspectives never lose their luster. Fine writing. :)

 
Posted by TATTOOS BY MARILAN on Thursday, June 18, 2009 - 12:35 PM
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