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Gender: Male
Status: Married
Age: 29
Sign: Cancer

City: San Francisco
State: CALIFORNIA
Country: US
Signup Date: 1/20/2006

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Tuesday, February 12, 2008 
When one is having an extremely busy day in which the e-mails are just pouring in, one does not generally expect that a telephone pole outside one's building will catch on fire, shutting down power for the day. Well, that happened to one ME today. I'm now working from home for the rest of the afternoon, which, trust me, sounds way more awesome than it is.

(Actually it's kind of awesome. I have a laptop and it's 65 degrees outside. You do the math.)

Anyway, this post is going to be brief because of the aforementioned busy day, but I'm getting a bazillion queries lately and I've noticed something kind of interesting about the way different people characterize their accomplishments in query letters.

Put on your agent hat for a moment. Which of these two authors would you be more interested in signing:

Author A has published six books, published numerous articles, and is a an award winning author.... only after some digging you find out the six books were published by a very small press with a sketchy website, the articles were published on the author's blogs, and the award was Citizen of the Year from Nowheresville, Indiana.

Author B has published several works from small presses, has a killer idea for a new novel, and is ready to make the leap to a major publisher. After some digging, this is all turns out to be true.

So who would you choose? Author B, right? Trick question: THEY'RE THE SAME AUTHOR. Also I made them both up. This blog gets trickier and trickier.

Anyway, the moral of this bizarro example is that it is much better to be completely honest about your accomplishments but pitch yourself as being on the rise than it is to try and blow up your accomplishments into something they're not. Agents do not like it when authors try and fool them, and we can smell a turkey sale a mile away.

On the flipside, though, don't undersell yourself either. Don't apologize for a lack of writing credits -- don't fake them, but just make sure you have a great story and you're confident about it. If you do, an agent will come calling. Assuming their telephone pole isn't on fire.
Collodi
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Given that this turns out to be the same author, would you take them on at all? I would presume the answer would be "no." I don't know why so many people attempt to fake their credits and credentials, since to be caught will blow any credibility they have, unless some actually get away with it. If they can get away with it, that doesn't reflect well on the industry.

Hope it warms up for you.

R
 
Posted by Collodi on Tuesday, February 12, 2008 - 12:39 AM
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Millie-- I'm back!
Millie Andersen

 
Thank you so much for this :)
 
Posted by Millie-- I'm back! on Tuesday, February 12, 2008 - 12:40 AM
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Erika

 
How do you feel about listing MFA degrees? Does it matter? Does it matter if you come out of a top ranked program?
 
Posted by Erika on Tuesday, February 12, 2008 - 1:03 AM
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Nathan Bransford

 
It can help, but the story is still what matters.
 
Posted by Nathan Bransford on Tuesday, February 12, 2008 - 1:09 AM
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Helen The Amusing Muse
Helen Hobbs

 
Why didn't you take a picture? My dad took a picture when the circus had a herd of elphants crossing the street in a long row. Apparently that's how they cross the street. Both events don't happend often and both events are picture worthy!

How do we make sure we don't under sell our selves? Over selling seems obvious to me, but this is something I have been accused doing WITHOUT sending a querie letter so now I am extra nervous.
 
Posted by Helen The Amusing Muse on Tuesday, February 12, 2008 - 1:30 AM
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Nathan Bransford

 
Just don't apologize for being an unpublished writer.
 
Posted by Nathan Bransford on Tuesday, February 12, 2008 - 1:32 AM
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Helen The Amusing Muse
Helen Hobbs

 
That's it?
 
Posted by Helen The Amusing Muse on Tuesday, February 12, 2008 - 2:51 AM
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Mark Wooding

 
Personally, my goal is to have several well developed personalities. That way when I get bored with one life, I can just shift over to another one.
 
Posted by Mark Wooding on Tuesday, February 12, 2008 - 3:11 PM
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Dream Walker
Lori Barton

 
I'm from Nowheresville, Indiana...we don't even give out citizen of the year awards anymore. We got tired of passing them around between the 3 of us.
 
Posted by Dream Walker on Monday, February 18, 2008 - 4:22 PM
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B. C. Bell: Crime! Horror! Science! Pulp!

 
My first thought was, "Shouldn't Author B have more than just an idea for a novel?" And, if someone's sending you a query doesn't that automatically mean they assume their ready for the leap to a major publisher?

P.S. I've never even been nominated for citizen of the year.
 
Posted by B. C. Bell: Crime! Horror! Science! Pulp! on Tuesday, June 03, 2008 - 8:28 PM
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