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Last Updated: 11/18/2009

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April 18, 2009 - Saturday 

Category: Writing and Poetry
Painfully Humorous





 


 






Cardboard trees surround me
in the jungle of my past.



Old friends and ex-lovers lie
ready to pop out and yell surprise!




I fall into a time machine
made out of paper and ink.




Looking at my past-self is like
peering into a funhouse mirror...



 

painfully humorous.







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THE Reverend

 
Relocation leads to self observation, and revisiting your past writing collection. Loved the cardboard box/tree reference! Don't spend too much time between your ears, or in the rear view mirror Jess.
You have a lot to look forward too:)
 
Posted by THE Reverend on April 18, 2009 - Saturday - 5:10 PM
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Jorge
Jorge Concepcion

 
Well said & true!
 
Posted by Jorge on April 18, 2009 - Saturday - 5:10 PM
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John(Coyote)
John castellenas

 
What we have done and what we have try to forget? A very good poem. In so few words you brought us with you.


Coyote
 
Posted by John(Coyote) on April 18, 2009 - Saturday - 5:10 PM
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Michael
Michael Fitz

 
Some people got it, some don't, U got it.

 
Posted by Michael on April 18, 2009 - Saturday - 10:11 PM
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Audrey Michelle Spoken Word Artist

 
Perfect - this describes you and your writing perfectly
 
Posted by Audrey Michelle Spoken Word Artist on April 19, 2009 - Sunday - 12:05 AM
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Georgia

 
I've experienced this. It's so painfully true.




I love your writing!
 
Posted by Georgia on April 19, 2009 - Sunday - 12:47 AM
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Lola

 
Reminds me of times I moved......I can remember getting rid of things that I had previously been unable to part with......they had lost whatever it was that made me keep them in the first place.....stay well and happy....
 
Posted by Lola on April 19, 2009 - Sunday - 12:55 AM
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shannyn
Shannyn Campbell

 
i love it....short and to the point... i want to share my stuff with you sometime but fear exposing them to the whole world!
 
 
Posted by shannyn on April 27, 2009 - Monday - 6:46 PM
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Jim
Jim Turner

 
Sooner or later I get around to telling you this is good. Clear images and a telling point at the end. jim
 
Posted by Jim on May 15, 2009 - Friday - 7:36 PM
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Ralston Sterling 3.0
Ralston Sterling

 
Very, very true! Nice write.;) xoxo ralston
 
Posted by Ralston Sterling 3.0 on October 1, 2009 - Thursday - 11:46 PM
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