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Jon Dorner


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Gender: Male
Status: Single
Age: 21
Sign: Aries

City: Whittier/Los Angeles
State: California
Country: US
Signup Date: 11/14/2004

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Thursday, February 01, 2007 

Current mood:  creative

Even more lyrics by me: I was surprised and shocked at how well they go with the instrumental song "Pallar Anders Visa" by In Flames off of Colony. Even the mood is perfect for it. But these lyrics came to me sheerly on their own accont, on my way to work, before I even decided to listen to this old fav MDM band of mine.

Lately lyrics have been coming to me more clearly, freely, and in a better flow. Out of nowhere, especially when its quiet or im not thinking of nothing at all, like right before I fall asleep. It's kinda annoying since I then feel obliged to get up and write them down so I dont lose them, because some people think that theyre actually not bad especially for not having to think about them.

So, here you are dear friends and followers, my latest and all of the lyrics i've written, to date, please read them and if you can listen to the song listed above while doing so, and let me know what you think, I'm depending on you,

I call this one "A Viking's Thought"::

A warlord sits on a field under a moon laden sky and sheds a tear
For a brother who fell victim to the mighty spear
And shed blood on the very land that he was born
Why in batte, he wonders, do we fight so hard yet have nothing to show for?
Is it for diplomacy? Or is it for something that is no more...

Years ago, a mother's love, a father's skilled sword,
Gave rise to this fearless young warrior
Now he sits on the plain and tries to think back
On how it all came to be like this
He looks to the stars for an answer, but it wont come,
Nor can he understand a man's strive for glory
Was it for democracy? Or was it rather for something that is no more....

Why must we always strive live in the shadows of the valley of ruin...?
Continuously in the "honorable" midst of war...
A penniless existence that is ours...
And nothing more...   

The world has long since moved on 

 

 

 

New G&M Lyrics Courtesy of Yours Truly (My first breakthrough in lyricism):
"Ded Too Young" (Chorus)
Never got to watch my mother die
Never got to see my daughter grow old
Never got to live this life of mine
When will i crawl out of this hole?

 

 


New Singlorious lyrics by Me:

"Morality in Sin":
May RUE befall him that succumbs
To self-gratifying arrogance
May consequence strike down those who
Learn naught from prideful deceit!

In this life theres but ONE lesson to learn:
That which is PAIN.
It's how much you can take and still press on
That determines your character!
For some the pain turns to HATE
And erupts into rage and irrationality
For others it turns to AGONY
And a loss of will to persist

 

Currently listening:
Colony
By In Flames
Release date: 02 November, 2004
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J B

 

I like them.
Kind of sounds like something from Amon Amarth.
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Posted by \m/*O*\m/ on Thursday, February 01, 2007 - 8:31 AM
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Carlos [DF]

 

sounds good, but the question is how can we sing it??


 
Posted by Carlos [DF] on Tuesday, February 20, 2007 - 7:23 AM
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