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City: LOS ANGELES
State: California
Country: US
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Monday, June 29, 2009 

Current mood:  groggy
here we have the first part of the second chapter in a.w. fox's "i hate you please love me." we hope you will comment on it, and let us know if you know an agent (lol)!

Chapter Two
The milquetoast-bland white sky was beginning to darken as Kelsey headed back towards his apartment. He walked as quickly as he could given his condition--a prisoner in the state of Withdrawal.
Len's mention of Nancy Reagan had hit too close to home. Throughout Kelsey's childhood, her chicken legs, rubber face, and huge head had been scary enough years before he would despise her political views. To make matters worse, he had spent the last year or so having recurrent nightmares about his sister-in-law, Marissa Manchester, in which she impersonated Nancy Reagan.
In these dreams, Kelsey was jumped by his formerly sadistic, presently condescending, consistently conservative older brother Kenton's new wife. Marissa, clad in a Nancy Reagan mask and the former First Lady's customary red suit, leapt on Kelsey's bed and climbed on top of him. She then whipped the mask off, started stripping, and then began spanking Kelsey while repeatedly screaming "Just Say No! Just Say No!" The fact that Marissa, a recent law school graduate, was working for the notoriously "tough on drug crime" District Attorney of Seattle, Biff Paisano, J.D., made Kelsey's dreams more frightening. The fact that Marissa had tried to seduce Kelsey on the eve of her and Kenton's wedding made them seem all too realistic.
Kelsey and his brother, Kenton, had been the best of friends until puberty, when the two brothers' personalities changed abruptly. Kelsey not only became an artsy 'weirdo', but was also sought after by various girls and older women whom Kenton often fancied. Kenton was a standard high school jock who gained an almost inexplicable amount of joy in tormenting Kelsey. When Kenton left for college at the University of Washington, Kelsey felt thankful that he'd no longer be within striking distance of his brother's wrath.
Marissa and Kenton had met in college, where they played on their respective sorority and fraternity's co-ed Ultimate Frisbee team together. The two of them were like two peas in a pod. They were blithe spirits who believed that they existed in the best of all possible worlds. Nothing rankled them; they were twin pictures of physical health and emotional normality. They were the sort of people who said "high school was the best time of my life" and really meant it. Marissa wasn't necessarily evil or cruel, and Kenton was no longer so, but neither were they sensitive or sympathetic. They especially had little concern for the fragile or the downtrodden. The two of them also had a particular reaction--a mix of contempt and puzzlement--for people who didn't fit in to society and play by its rules. It was as if Kenton and Marissa felt that people who blew off society denied them the pleasure of being recognized as winners: If the losers dropped out of the race long before Kenton and Marissa had reached the finish line, then how could the two of them be considered truly victorious?
Given how different they were from Kelsey, he had been utterly shocked when Marissa had tried to hit on him. The memory of that entire night was still far too intense for his liking.
For Kenton and Marissa's wedding weekend, the bride and groom's families stayed at the Fairmont Hotel in Seattle. The night before the festivities, the bride-to-be and groom-to-be took part in the gender-divisive traditions of the bachelorette and bachelor party, respectively. Kelsey wondered what went on at a bacholerette party. He had heard that most male strippers were gay. He had also heard that most bachelorette parties didn't involve scantily clad men at all. Both of these truisms depressed him, in terms of what they implied in terms of sexual desire and difference.
He brooded about this while Kenton and his best man--a loud beer-guzzler named Paul--escorted him to a strip club called Gentlemen's Paradise. They ignored Kelsey's suggestion to have the party at an alternate venue. The club's slogan, tackily rendered in glaring neon, read, "Where Every Man Is King!"
This irked Kelsey as well. He liked to go to a neighboring strip club, The Kitty Kat Club, because female custmers felt welcome there. It aroused him to watch girls get off on the dancers. He hated the testosterone-stewed sausage fest atmosphere that clubs like Gentlemen's Paradise encouraged. The owners of the club might as well have posted a sign that read "Boy's Clubhouse--No Girlz Allowd" in grammatically incorrect, misspelled English, as if a dyslexic nine-year-old boy had stuck it to the makeshift door of his treehouse with a piece of already-been-chewed bubble gum.
Kenton and all of his other friends vocally enthused that Gentleman's Paradise had "the best looking bitches of any strip club in the Puget Sound area." Kelsey watched several dancers inside the antiseptic-smelling club while sipping a rum and Coke very slowly--he was fairly new to heroin then and extremely high that night; in this state alcohol tended to nauseate him. By the time the fourth dancer did her thing, Kelsey found that he disagreed vehemently with his brother and his friends' appraisal of the 'talent'. Of course, he could have predicted that they all would have liked the dancers there the best. The girls all looked like versions of Marissa, except with massive tit implants and more orangey, spray-on tans. Even the two non-white women--an Asian-American girl and an African-American girl--had the same layerless, bangs-less, long straight hair, a tall, skinny, breast-implanted body that resembled a seventeen year old boy's with outsized, circular tits that resembled archery targets, and no tattoos or piercings. Their faces all seemed similar--uniform symmetrical features, none especially striking, and perpetual face-stretching smiles. Kelsey loved a memorable, beautiful face--on boys or girls--and he could find nothing of the sort here.
In an effort to placate his brother, Kelsey deflected the attentions of the strippers ("Your blue eyes are so pretty!" "Are you in a band?") and bought Kenton a lap dance from his chosen dancer, a blonde whose stage name was Porsche--"spelled like the car", she had said. Kenton then delivered a line that Kelsey was sure that Porsche had heard numerous times before: "Well, I'd certainly like to take you for a test drive." Heh, heh, Kelsey thought sarcastically.
After an hour or so at Gentlemen's Paradise, Kelsey pleaded with Kenton to at least spend a few minutes at The Kitty Kat Club. He was surprised when Kenton agreed. The girls at the Kitty, as it was called, were far cooler and prettier in Kelsey's opinion. Their discerning musical tastes were illustrated by the selections the DJ played while they danced. They wore interesting costumes and represented a variety of body types and ethnicities. Many girls were pierced and tattooed. Most were intelligent; a large majority of the dancers were either grad students, artists, musicians, or writers. Lots of them were bisexual, some were lesbians, and the club was always packed with a mixed-gender crowd.
As soon as Kelsey, Kenton, and his brother's hooting entourage entered the Kitty, Kelsey immediately felt embarrassed. A sexy, dreadlocked Ph.D student/dancer known as Raven grabbed Kelsey around the waist and kissed his neck. "Kelsey baby! I haven't seen you here in a couple of weeks! But who's this gang of frat fucks that you've foisted on us?"
"My brother's bachelor party," Kelsey answered. "I'm sorry. I just couldn't deal with another minute at Gentleman's Hellhole."
"Well, make sure they tip us," Raven said, wrinkling her nose at Kenton and his fellow overgrown frat boys cum corporate ladder-climbers. They were all braying, chortling, and emitting the all-too-typical "Woooo!"
Kelsey tried to encourage Kenton and his friends to tip, but after a few dancers performed, he realized that this would be futile. To compensate, he spent most of his time near the stage, folding five dollar bills into cleavages and g-strings. The girls rewarded Kelsey for both his looks and his generosity by touching, stroking, and kissing him. He had an especially arousing moment with a dancer he hadn't seen before, an incredibly hot, voluptuous Bettie Page lookalike. An added bonus was that the girl had gyrated sexily to All Cats Are Grey, one of Kelsey's favorite Cure songs.
Once Kelsey walked back to his seat, blushing, Kenton left his perch at the bar. He walked up to Kelsey and boozily cuffed his ear.
"Little bro, this is so not our speed," he said. "It's your kinda thing, you fuckin' freak."
"What, you're going to go back to that cheesy bimbo factory instead of here where the girls actually are hot?" Kelsey inquired
"Are you fuckin kiddin' me? The bitches at the last place all looked like fuckin' Destini Childs!" he yelled, referring to an eighteen year old "pop singer" from the Bible Belt who alternated between interviews condemning pre-marital sex and centerfold spreads in Playbunny."That's not a selling point with me," answered Kelsey.
"Like I said, you're a fuckin' freak. At the Paradise, every single stripper was a hardbody with huge fuckin' tits! Perfect fuckin' tens, all of them! This place looks like a goddamn freak show. The girls should pay us to watch them."
"Whatever, Kenton. I totally disagree," said Kelsey. "Do you mind if I stay here?"
"Kelsey, you've always done what you've wanted no matter what anyone thinks. Don't tell me you're going to start changing now." He rolled his eyes. "Besides, I think we'll get more attention from the bitches without you monopolizing things." He motioned to his buddies, who were all clustered around the bar, finishing the dregs of their drinks. "Let's get the fuck outta here."
Kenton saluted Kelsey as his friends followed him out the door. They were all whispering and shaking their head, ostensibly at Kenton's weirdo little brother's taste in girls.
At first after Kenton left, Kelsey had a pleasant, nondescript night. He drank another rum and Coke, got a couple of lap dances, and chatted with his favorite dancers. It was a typical night at the Kitty until a tall, dapper man with alert, deep blue eyes and a young-looking, attractive face that contradicted his stuffy three-piece suit requested Kelsey's presence in the Champagne Room. The Room was a bordello-like enclave in the back of the club. Clients who paid two hundred dollars could be entertained by their stripper of choice in a manner that mere twenty dollar lap dances didn't offer, drink free champagne, and--usually--do drugs.
Kelsey walked towards the back of the club, guided by a cocktail waitress who had been dispatched to bring him to the Champagne Room. "Here he is," the waitress said.
The man was holding a cocaine spoon to the nose of a slender, tattooed dancer with olive skin and a chin-length purple wig. Kelsey had never seen her before. She pinched one nostril and inhaled deeply with the other, then looked up at Kelsey.
"Hey, hottie," she said. "Jean-Paul here has paid your admission fee. I'm Simone."
Kelsey held out a hand to each of them and introduced himself. Simone shook his hand, and Jean-Paul kissed it. The businessman then busied himself with the champagne bottle, pouring three glasses. He distributed them, then raised his own. Simone and Kelsey did the same.
"A toast," he said, in a vaguely French accent. "To a beautiful boy and a beautiful girl. What else is there to live for?"
They drank their champagne, and then Jean-Paul held the tiny spoonful of cocaine under Kelsey's nose. He inhaled willingly--an amount that small wouldn't fuck with his heroin high the way an intravenous helping of coke in his spoonful of dope would.
A Deftones song was booming from the stage. Jean-Paul began kissing Simone and rubbing Kelsey's back. He moved his hand to Kelsey's thigh. I watched you change, the singer moaned.
Simone got up. Jean-Paul moved closer to Kelsey and held his arms out. She spread her legs and threw one slender thigh across Jean-Paul, one across Kelsey, and began gyrating.
Kelsey sighed and threw his head back. The cocaine was making him extremely horny. Simone licked a trail from his chin to the dog tags that hung near the hollow at the base of his neck. He reached forward and cupped her ass. Jean-Paul stroked her collarbone, and then dipped his fingers close to her breast. Simone pulled her black slipdress down so that her small firm tits were exposed. Jean-Paul traced the small circle of areola that ringed her light brown nipple.
"You, too," he nodded at Kelsey.
Simone grabbed at Kelsey's tight three-quarter-sleeve New Order T-shirt, pulling it up to expose his stomach and slim, hairless chest. She raked her fingernails from his sternum to his bellybutton, and Jean-Paul used his other hand to play with the silver ring pierced through Kelsey's nipple.
"How much would it cost for an after-hours dance from both of you?" Jean-Paul asked. "I have a beautiful suite at the Four Seasons."
"Three hundred dollars for an hour," Simone said definitively, as if she had done this kind of negotiating before. Kelsey was surprised, but not judgmental. All of the dancers he spoke to at The Kitty swore up and down that they would never accept money for sex. He believed them completely, but couldn't imagine that every dancer had this policy. Why should they?
As for him, though, it was another story.
"I'm not...into getting money for sex," Kelsey said weakly.
Jean-Paul laughed softly. "Oh no? Then why are you back here with us?"
Kelsey shrugged. "A free pass to the Champagne Room?"
Jean-Paul pulled at the sleeve of Kelsey's shirt. Kelsey noticed a Rolex gold watch on his wrist. He yanked the sleeve up above Kelsey's elbow.
"What a surprise," he said, in a voice that somehow managed to be both sarcastic and gentle. "I will pay you then with heroin."
Simone looked utterly unsurprised as well.
Kelsey looked down at the crook of his arm. A telltale trickle of blood that he had neglected to wash away had dried amid his lacerated scars.
"I can get the heroin myself, you know," he mumbled softly. But he seriously doubted that any dealers would still be out this late, and he didn't have anything left. To make the proposition even more tempting, he realized that he had brought his kit in his vintage messenger bag.
"But you cannot get the kind of heroin that I have brought from Montreal," he said. "China white. Pure powder. Not the tar merde that has scarred your beautiful arms. When I come to Seattle, I always bring a bit of it for the situations like these, and it never disappoints."
Simone was smirking at Kelsey's indecision. Kelsey closed his eyes, concentrating on the music that emanated from the stage: Why can't we not be sober?...Why can't we sleep forever?
Kelsey sat, subsumed between action and reaction, for what seemed like forever. Then, The Kitty's DJ announced, "OK, guys and girls, that's it for tonight. Go home, have some good sex, and come back tomorrow!"
"Look," Jean-Paul said quietly. He cupped Kelsey's chin in his hands and stared into his eyes. "You are very beautiful. I'm sure I don't want to do anything that you wouldn't want me to do. I just want to touch you a bit, see you play with the beautiful girl, and get you off, okay? I can tell you are like me, into both men and women. I can tell you are attracted to both of us. You would do what I want for free, no?"
Kelsey stared at the stained carpet. Jean-Paul was right. He nodded his head almost imperceptibly.
"Meet me out back in the alley behind the club in ten minutes," Simone said.
Jean-Paul stood up and held out his hand. Kelsey took it, and Jean-Paul pulled him upright.
Two hours later, Kelsey had entered the Fairmont, high as his first time, thanks to Jean-Paul's super-pure China white heroin. He was shocked and surprised to see Marissa seated in a corner of the lobby, staring out the hotel's floor to ceiling picture windows. She was nursing a bottle of Ketel One. The hotel staff either did not see her drinking openly, or was choosing to ignore any indiscretions committed by the main event of tomorrow's wedding.
He went over to her. Could it be that Kenton and his stupid friends still hadn't come home yet, and Marissa was still waiting for him?
"Marissa, hey," he said. "Why don't you go upstairs? You're supposed to be married in, like, nine hours."
He was shocked when Marissa drunkenly threw her arms around his slender hips and grabbed his ass.
"Shit! Come on, Marissa. You're really fucked up. Let me take you upstairs."
She looked up at him, her eyes glazed with wild drunkenness, and then reached up to muss his hair with fingers that had been buffed and manicured at the hotel's salon.
"Oh, and you're not incredibly fucked up?"
"Point taken," he said. "But still. I'm not getting married tomorrow."
"Fucked up tonight and always, I mean. Kenton's really worried about you, Kelsey. He thinks you have some kind of drug problem." Marissa was slurring her words, but this sentence was all too clear to Kelsey.
"Whatev--hey!" he shouted. Marissa had just grabbed his nipple, as Jean-Paul had done earlier.
"I just think you're hot," she said contentedly. "I always have."
Kelsey's eyes widened. "Come on, Marissa," he said. He guided her into a standing position. The China white made this action effortless. He supported her and pulled her towards the elevator. He needed to get her into her bridal suite--whether or not Kenton was home--and then slide under the million thread count sheets in his room. He needed to begin the process that would hopefully result in him forgetting about the night's events, or at the very least, eventually viewing them as a distant and foggy aberration.
"Where's Kenton?" he asked, pressing the button for the top floor.
"Fucking a stupid whore, I'm sure," she giggled, then threw her arms around his neck. "I wanna fuck you, Kelsey."
He was shocked to hear this, but he couldn't help but think Why? You wanna fuck a stupid whore too? Marissa clung to him, but was quiet throughout both the rest of the elevator ride as well as the walk to the bridal suite. Kelsey wondered if what she had said was a joke, until he opened her suite with the card key he found in the outside pouch of her purse. "Goodnight, Marissa. Sleep it off, and I'll see you at your wedding tomorrow."
"Last chance, Kelsey," she said. The slur in her voice was gone.
"I can't do that to Kenton," he said, not mentioning that he had no desire for Marissa. Not in the past, not on the eve of her wedding, and certainly not after his night with Jean-Paul and Simone.
Marissa never mentioned to Kenton what she had tried to do the night before their wedding. Thereafter, she treated Kelsey with a chilly impatience that Kelsey thought was the result of what she interpreted as him rejecting her. The few times that Kelsey had seen his brother since the wedding, Kenton had repeatedly tried to bait him to admit that he was a drug addict. He had also recently told Kelsey that Marissa referred to him as 'my husband's fucked up little brother'. Freaked out about Marissa's position within the anti-drug juggernaut as well his already-tenuous position within his family, Kelsey had, of late, tried to ignore any of their attempts at communicating with him.
Presently, Kelsey tried to shake the memory of the night before Kenton and Marissa's wedding out of his head. Whenever he was in need of medicine, the war his body raged upon him--the miserable physical symptoms, the life sentence of embodiment--was his dominant concern. However, his thoughts and emotions were twisted and intensified by withdrawal as well. His worst memories were always broadcast in surround-sound in the television in his head, the one he could only turn off with heroin. The drug created a lovely eternal now in which one could sink, unimpeded by the past and relieved of the future. In contrast, the lack of the drug fomented a dizzying space/time warp where miseries from the past and fear of the future became an endless circle, an ourobourus that looped around and bit the ass of the present.
Kelsey was breathing hard, sharp gasps that cut into his ribs as he scaled the final blocks up towards Capitol Hill. A nasty mist was beginning to fall. He stood at the intersection of Pine and Summit, folding his arms around his chest against the chill. He stared up at the stark, brittle trees as he waited for the interminable traffic light to change, surprised to see Christmas lights choking their emaciated branches. It wasn't even November yet.
As a child, Kelsey had always been in charge of uncoiling the knotted Christmas lights which, along with the ornaments and other tree-trimmers, had been placed in a cardboard box in the garage the previous New Year's Day. He didn't know exactly what year brought the torments of puberty upon him, but he did associate furtive masturbation sessions, a sharp decline in his health, and an inexorable moodiness with the holiday season that his father wordlessly proclaimed that Kelsey had failed at his usual job. Kensington Manchester narrowed his eyebrows and pursed his lips at his younger son. It was a facial expression that would grow to speak volumes over the years.
"What? What did I do wrong?" he'd asked, a question that would soon become customary in his dealings with his father.
"Don't you see the two dead bulbs on the string of lights, Kelsey?" his father asked, stalking to the back of the Christmas tree, the portion that was utterly unviewable by the typical observer.
"Well, yeah," he said. "But I put them behind the tree! Nobody's going to see them!"
"Take the whole string off the tree. We'll have to get some new lights tomorrow."
"Really?" Kelsey asked. "I thought I hid the dead lights pretty well."
Kensington Manchester shook his head. "No. Hiding the broken parts aren't going to do any good. Once one of the bulbs goes, the others aren't far off. It's a lesson for life, son. When one part weakens, it'll eventually destroy the others, and then the entire system is useless. The weak bring down the strong."
to be continued in part two of chapter 2. leave kit (a.w.) a comment as to how you like this story so far!

note on "cost": i know that we have recommended this novel before, but here we do so again, noting that robinson's novel of a family dealing with the heroin addiction of one of their own has strains of the same writing style as a.w.'s. the only downside is that we feel the book is a bit too anti-drug and that the author could have done a bit more research on the average heroin user...still a great book.
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