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Gender: Female
Status: Married
Age: 35
Sign: Libra

City: The Danger Zone
State: California
Country: US
Signup Date: 2/19/2006

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Saturday, October 11, 2008 

Category: Writing and Poetry
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Yellow Tape Blazes

"Do   Not   Cross".

Outlines Fallen Wings

O  u  t  s  t  r  e  c  h  e  d

Gore, clots caking

Gradually removed by

Casual soles stomping.

"Didn't you see the tape? This is a fucking crime scene!"

Grimaces some new CSI

Nudging Glasses Bridge-ward

Inspecting Errant Feather

Four feet south of Atrocity.

 

 

Grape gum landed in my

EMOTIONAL CRIME SCENE DO NOT CROSS EMOTIONAL CRIME SCENE

Some kid spit it into what he thought was

Ketchup

Splattered packets stomped

Sometime last Tuesday lunch.

 

 

Evidence will be bagged

But not remembered

This half-life

Of memory

Will blow feathers

South of home.

 

 

 

 

 

 

This crime scene

Will be cleaned

Midnight :01 to 6 a.m., Friday

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Smokey (J8)

 
This is right up my alley!
I love it!
Especially your emotional crime scene. I was hoping to ride my emotional wheelchair in my emotional bikini through it if that's alright with you.
Happy birthday!
I love you.
 
Posted by Smokey (J8) on Friday, October 10, 2008 - 6:28 PM
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Smokey's trying not to be depressed(SBBDB)

 
I totally put this up for Warrick.

Kidding and serious. I thought you'd like it, being CSI visual and all.
 
Posted by Smokey's trying not to be depressed(SBBDB) on Friday, October 10, 2008 - 6:47 PM
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Seb

 
Killer visuals!
 
Posted by Seb on Saturday, October 11, 2008 - 7:11 AM
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Terri

 
This is really unique and off kilter for it's point of view. I like it!
 
Posted by Terri on Sunday, October 12, 2008 - 1:30 AM
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