Well, here is another rate my poem...check it out at the address below:
http://www.poetry.com/voteforme/poemvote1.asp?PID=12292107
The poem is in honor of those who died, suffered a loss, worked tirelessly to help their fellow man on 9/11 as well as those who continuously work to make the lives of all those affected by such tragedy better and liveable...
let me know if you have trouble getting to it...