yea this is a song i wrote a little while ago. i need some feedback. i dont care if it sucks or not id just like to know.

Stiff pain running through my back
dont know if i can turn back
i think ive gone to far
way as well hit it to the bar

wheels are turning
rubber is burning
dont know if im going
to heaven or hell

i dont know where im going
i guess knolege isnt knowing
why do i go on?
i bet ill die before dawn

i dont know why i did this
i guess it was that unfaithfull kiss
now i am on the run
running into the sun

wheels are turning
rubber is burning
dont know if im going
to heaven or hell

i dont know hwre im going
i guess knolege isnt knowing
why do i go on?
i bet ill die before dawn

i dont know hwere i am
i think im on a dam
i guess im gonna die
im gonna drive into the sky

i dont know why i did this
i guess it was that unfaithfull kiss
now i am on the run
running into the sun

wheels are turning
rubber is burning
i dont know if im in heaven or hell
i think i really died
i drove into the sky