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Glen Yumang Manese


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October 19, 2009 - Monday 

Category: Writing and Poetry

Suffice © 2009

Written by Glen Yumang Manese

(Dedicated to my new muse, Oblivia)

 

The obvious is present without impairment.

Only the differences are exactly opposite.

The attraction lures to love-making.

Overcomes is feelings within my observation.

Constructs is lines of my canvas of yours.

Arches are follicles to the eyelashes do convey.

My eyes attract looms each vessel amorous.

Touches are marvels that prism the iris.

The visage tolerates much my hands create.

Slowly, my precision shades this lady of mine.

Volumes confine lips of cherry so suffice.

Sacrifice these daunting hours, be not disturbed.

Strands lockets does my fingers add to mesmerize.

Indian red looks to sheen through the image.

Captivating your eyes and lips influence.

Occupy, but life inhales vitality in ascension.

Breath-taking to my heart inhume.

  

Metanoia

 
I do always enjoy your work, Glen. I think though, if I may speak boldly, candidly...that your muse is depleting your readership because you kill the mystery of "muse" by advertising her tangible self. People want to associate themselves...see themselves and FEEL your work through their own eyes, and the name of no other than that of their own creation. Leave her name to silence...so sacred it should never fall from your lips...ever leaving the reader in suspension and rapture of the greater mystery...to see through to the innermost self.

Give to poetry your reading and own passionate eyes...drink the wine of verse from many that it should open other doors of yearning and creation. Give more than you receive in verse...that you may be broken open and spill forth your greatest Truth.

Just my thoughts...for better or worse.

Namaste~



 
Posted by Metanoia on October 20, 2009 - Tuesday - 11:10 AM
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Leila -
        I can see your point of view and by all means say what's on your mind...  You know I'm open to you and the rest that would like to comment, even most of the times in private by others to my work...  I get in the groove of being stubborn so too speak and say in the immediate instead of expanding and letting others just see with their eyes and read my words to paper...  My silence, should be directed to the Muse only and leave the verse speak a measure to others...  Let's give this a go then shall we...  Thanks much for the comments in the pictures and this one on my blog...  Good day...



Glen Yumang Manese

 
Posted by Glen Yumang Manese™ on October 20, 2009 - Tuesday - 10:35 PM
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