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Gender: Female
Status: Single
Age: 46
Sign: Libra

City: salt lake city
State: Utah
Country: US
Signup Date: 3/28/2006
October 14, 2009 - Wednesday 

Category: Writing and Poetry
when you put a pencil in a glass of water....it will look like the pencil is bending. but our science tells us, that certain properties of glass, and/or water....are bending the light, which then causes us to perceive a bent pencil that is not bent. but what if we're wrong? it's been known to happen.

we "bend" light in a prism to create a rainbow....but are we really just "bending" or changing the direction of "light".....or is something much more complex going on? anyway....that's where i got my title.....cheers!


E.





what the glass bends

We perceive our existence as movement
“It’s all in the journey”
Our lives portrayed as steps on a beach
Paths taken
And paths forgiven

Living on streets
Roads
And highways

Forever stretching before us
And more of the same stretching behind us
Like vagabonds
Shuffling

We see ourselves as having to move along
In order to find what we want
And what we want
Is to not want
Loving every moment that hustles us on our way
Every speck of beginnings that push
Us into tomorrows

But what if it’s not that at all?
What if life is a rocking chair
Not a road
What if the best that we can do
Is to divide in our homes
Humming a song for what notes give it birth

What if the world is what belongs to a window
And time is nothing but back
And forth

Avenues aching on your doorstep
Dusty
From their path

Turns that equal choices
And crossings
That equal pain

With a beginning and an end
Starts and destinations
Fueled by inadequacy, insecurity, and indebtedness

We dream of flying
And wings
And eternity suckled on a stratosphere
That held us ever in abeyance

But what if it’s not that at all
What if movement is the illusion
Time a misnamed platitude
And the mind….

Oh the mind

What if the mind is our only true love
Our only real friend….
Every world that is us

Pressed upon it




copyright 2009 eebrinker
Barbara
Barbara Kausteklis

 
Yes, the big WHAT IF . . . .  Big questions for sure.  And I'm sure the big answers must be out there somewhere.  Awesome write.  Lots to think about in your words always.

 
Posted by Barbara on October 14, 2009 - Wednesday - 5:53 AM
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]]]Hell and Back[[[

 
thanks Barbara.....i just like to question the status quo

 
Posted by ]]]Hell and Back[[[ on October 14, 2009 - Wednesday - 7:19 PM
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The Poetrist Phenom™ (A True Poet)

 
What if is a question itself...sometimes we regret the things that we should have done but didn't do...great write.
 
Posted by The Poetrist Phenom™ (A True Poet) on October 14, 2009 - Wednesday - 6:07 AM
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]]]Hell and Back[[[

 
and sometimes those regrets are nothing but a path in a mind used to beat ourselves up.....

 
Posted by ]]]Hell and Back[[[ on October 14, 2009 - Wednesday - 7:21 PM
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HYDRA
Hydra Woman

 
Nice, I especially like these lines:

"We see ourselves as having to move along
In order to find what we want
And what we want
Is to not want
Loving every moment that hustles us on our way
Every speck of beginnings that push
Us into tomorrows"
 
Posted by HYDRA on October 14, 2009 - Wednesday - 6:16 AM
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]]]Hell and Back[[[

 
thanks Hydra....it gets frustrating when life requires us to have this motivation to "move forward".....most the time, tomorrow gets here whether you want it to or not.....*smiles*

 
Posted by ]]]Hell and Back[[[ on October 14, 2009 - Wednesday - 7:22 PM
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John Eagle

 
The refraction of light...like the pencil in the glass...life is not always what it seems...and sometimes is...we have to use enough of our brain to know the difference...very thought-provoking piece, E....you are a philosopher....
 
Posted by John Eagle on October 14, 2009 - Wednesday - 11:37 AM
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]]]Hell and Back[[[

 
thanks, yea, my favorite course in college.....

and i'm sort of looking how man gets in his head that he has found a fact or solution....even if it's a theological solution....such as saying life is like these footprints on a beach...

and when something is considered a solution....NOTHING is questioned.  and often, our solutions such as the refraction of light....completely remove the element of awe.

we are a people without awe.....

 
Posted by ]]]Hell and Back[[[ on October 14, 2009 - Wednesday - 7:26 PM
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wretched
wretched one

 
Excellent piece E.
I really like the ending.

What if the mind is our only true love
Our only real friend….
Every world that is us

Pressed upon it


-byron

 
Posted by wretched on October 14, 2009 - Wednesday - 1:50 PM
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]]]Hell and Back[[[

 
glad you enjoyed that......felt right

 
Posted by ]]]Hell and Back[[[ on October 14, 2009 - Wednesday - 7:31 PM
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chris poet /writer and heather
Chris heather Thripp

 
nice write
 
Posted by chris poet /writer and heather on October 14, 2009 - Wednesday - 8:28 PM
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]]]Hell and Back[[[

 
many thanks

 
Posted by ]]]Hell and Back[[[ on October 15, 2009 - Thursday - 9:44 AM
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Newamba

 
I like your pondering in this. Gotta wonder what is real... Are things real because they exist, whether your mind recognizes them or not, or only real if your mind recognizes them? Philosophical questioning is intriguing. 
 
Posted by Newamba on October 15, 2009 - Thursday - 1:23 AM
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]]]Hell and Back[[[

 
i wrote a big long comment in response, and decided to blog it, instead.  thanks for getting me to thinking....because i came up with a couple new ideas that make sense to me. 

 
Posted by ]]]Hell and Back[[[ on October 15, 2009 - Thursday - 10:33 AM
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Robert: Asshole Writer
Robert Wilson

 
Very philosophical write. Life is a rocking chair. It can relax you or make you vomit. Haha

 
Posted by Robert: Asshole Writer on October 15, 2009 - Thursday - 9:22 AM
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]]]Hell and Back[[[

 
no, you're thinking of the spin out at magic mountain......where if you barf, it flies back in your face.....

 
Posted by ]]]Hell and Back[[[ on October 15, 2009 - Thursday - 9:44 AM
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Sir Monkeylicious says...Have a Happy Thanksgiving

 
Nice write E...or maybe it just LOOKS that way!!


 
Posted by Sir Monkeylicious says...Have a Happy Thanksgiving on October 15, 2009 - Thursday - 5:55 PM
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]]]Hell and Back[[[

 
smartass.....lord luv ya......

 
Posted by ]]]Hell and Back[[[ on October 15, 2009 - Thursday - 5:57 PM
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Sir Monkeylicious says...Have a Happy Thanksgiving

 
Always better than a dumbass!! 

Much love girl...


 
Posted by Sir Monkeylicious says...Have a Happy Thanksgiving on October 15, 2009 - Thursday - 6:02 PM
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]]]Hell and Back[[[

 
true!.....same back attcha. 



 
Posted by ]]]Hell and Back[[[ on October 15, 2009 - Thursday - 6:40 PM
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left&leaving

 
tops!

 
Posted by left&leaving on October 16, 2009 - Friday - 6:55 PM
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Kristaline
Kristaline shanon

 
I don't know about all of that, but my grandma's rocking chair still rocks and she's been dead for 35 years, hmmm.....
 
Posted by Kristaline on October 17, 2009 - Saturday - 5:42 AM
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]]]Hell and Back[[[

 
that's the way to be....

 
Posted by ]]]Hell and Back[[[ on October 17, 2009 - Saturday - 6:18 AM
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nella

 


what if movement is an illusion...hmmm...I kudoed, then went to read another, came back to read this again...interesting question...I like this. :)
 
Posted by nella on October 18, 2009 - Sunday - 2:40 PM
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]]]Hell and Back[[[

 
thanks.....was inspired by a writing on wordpress, speaking of walking the road or path.....that has been used SO much as a metaphor....you have to wonder if there is something wrong with people.

i thought it would be fun to contemplate existence being stationary instead, and it's a perfectly valid theory or hypothesis.  rather than us being "in motion"....the world around us moves to make it appear that we are moving.  like when you are a passenger in a car, and the car next to you starts to inch forward at the stop light, there will be a moment of confusion as to which car is the one that's actually moving. 

of course, it would only work as a singularity.....with all other life bent to serve one's own purpose.  a lot of people think that way already, though....and there could be an over-lapping idea on the feasibility of "matter".....just because your senses tell you something is there....does that mean it really is?  and if the error of perception is a MASS error...since we judge reality according majority rules.....anything misperceived by the general populace, will be taken as a stone cold truth.....even if it's the biggest lie in history. 

and it's curious....we have to admit it to being curious.....that all our metaphors have us out there wandering on roads and highways.....rather than comfortably settled in our own homes.  what does that mean? 

 
Posted by ]]]Hell and Back[[[ on October 18, 2009 - Sunday - 3:20 PM
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