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Gender: Female
Status: Single
Age: 46
Sign: Libra

City: salt lake city
State: Utah
Country: US
Signup Date: 3/28/2006
October 19, 2009 - Monday 

Category: Writing and Poetry
i woke up hating a million people
who have 10 zillion ways
of
THEY’RE NEVER GOING TO UNDERSTAND YOU

it’s the goals we all equate
that’s all it is
the
“eye on the prize”
“let’s make more money than god”
the whole stinking attitude that severs
them
these creatures

and they’re not just assholes
they’re assholes surrounded by Zits
with every one
thinking the puss they manage to squeeze
from their giant
aching corpuscular nightmares
is gold
surrounding their shit

and i don’t see any reasons

sit on the bus
and watch the cars tremble by

and i don’t see any reasons

look at the church
each cross borne to fly

and i don’t see any reasons

i walk to the dentist
make jokes with a rat
and smile this weak smile
that is never coming back

and i don’t see any reasons

for i had your vision, too
it was very long ago
and i held it as the only thing
on earth

but then i frightened my forgiveness
into shadows never showed
and each beauty that is suffered
from each birth

and the lightning strikes the sky
just as the answers
shoot the moon
and the door bells ring inside
for your guests will be here soon

and the party’s never started
’til the songs are under way
but not today
never today….in the absence of our dreams
in the hope that’s never shared
did you say just what you mean
for even angels learn to care

for i had your vision, too
it was very long ago
and i held it as a glaive against
the earth

but then i frightened my forgiveness
into shadows never showed
and each beauty that is suffered
from each birth

for i had your vision, too
it was very long ago
and i held it as the only thing
in sky

but then i started asking questions
from these shadows never showed
and i finally looked my God
into His eyes

and i don’t see any reasons
i don’t see any reasons

quiet are the thoughts
to whisper hearts into a grave

and i don’t see any reasons
i don’t see any reasons

but that silence was the one thing
that your noise could never save


i woke up hating a million people
who have 10 zillion ways

the light we shared was angry
for what’s suffered cares the most
THEY’RE NEVER GOING TO UNDERSTAND YOU
clarice

 
this hurt, so sad and some truth


 
Posted by clarice on October 20, 2009 - Tuesday - 12:43 AM
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]]]Hell and Back[[[

 
you have to wonder....after all, all is geared to make the rich richer
 
Posted by ]]]Hell and Back[[[ on October 20, 2009 - Tuesday - 2:35 AM
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John Eagle

 
Whoa! assholes and zits and puss...strong stuff...dear, dear...the problem might be that you care too much what people think...me...I don't give a shit...if someone understands me...fine...if they don't...fine...I worry about what I have control over...nothing more...
 
Posted by John Eagle on October 20, 2009 - Tuesday - 2:26 AM
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]]]Hell and Back[[[

 
oh...but if you persist enough....you can control all  
 
Posted by ]]]Hell and Back[[[ on October 20, 2009 - Tuesday - 2:33 AM
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Creative_Soul (M.)

 
Wow! Incredibly well stated, well written, and deeply felt! GREAT but sadly truthful contents! M.
 
Posted by Creative_Soul (M.) on October 20, 2009 - Tuesday - 2:18 PM
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Kristaline
Kristaline shanon

 
Fanfreakingtastic!!!!
We are in the same mood!
Hugs
Kristaline

 
Posted by Kristaline on October 20, 2009 - Tuesday - 3:37 PM
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nella

 
this almost flows like a song...I know, weird...but the rythym of it...I think it's the repetitive of I don't see any reasons...just saying...lol...but it's a fantastic write...I really like the ' I frightened my forgiveness....' sounds like something I'd do.... ;) Sad, but honest and great.
 
Posted by nella on October 20, 2009 - Tuesday - 4:53 PM
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Newamba

 
No, they're not. That's why I hate a million people too. 
 
Posted by Newamba on October 20, 2009 - Tuesday - 7:25 PM
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wretched
wretched one

 
This is excellent.
 
Posted by wretched on October 21, 2009 - Wednesday - 12:55 AM
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chris poet /writer and heather
Chris heather Thripp

 
great write
 
Posted by chris poet /writer and heather on October 21, 2009 - Wednesday - 6:54 AM
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Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision
Don MacIver

 
You know sometimes I seem to pause, to slip out of gear (while still conscious of my surroundings) and while looking at things before me ask that same (confused?) question..."I don't see any reasons".
 
Posted by Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision on November 3, 2009 - Tuesday - 6:50 PM
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]]]Hell and Back[[[

 
thanks, Don....i suppose i could say it better by saying "i don't see any ADEQUATE reasons."  .....lol

 
Posted by ]]]Hell and Back[[[ on November 4, 2009 - Wednesday - 2:58 AM
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