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Claire



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Gender: Female
Status: Engaged
Age: 26
Sign: Capricorn

City: Chicago
State: Illinois
Country: US
Signup Date: 4/5/2006

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October 25, 2007 - Thursday 
Though I've heard it a hundred times before, today felt like the first time. Had to find the words, and here they are:

I Wish I Knew How It Would Feel To Be Free

I wish I knew how
It would feel to be free
I wish I could break
All the chains holding me
I wish I could say
All the things that I should say
Say 'em loud say 'em clear
For the whole round world to hear
I wish I could share
All the love that's in my heart
Remove all the bars
That keep us apart
I wish you could know
What it means to be me
Then you'd see and agree
That every man should be free

I wish I could give
All I'm longin' to give
I wish I could live
Like I'm longin' to live
I wish I could do
All the things that I can do
And though I'm way over due
I'd? be starting a new

Well I wish I could be
Like a bird in the sky
How sweet it would be
If I found I could fly
Oh I'd soar to the sun
And look down at the sea
Than I'd sing cos I know - yea
Then I'd sing cos I know - yea
Then I'd sing cos I know
I'd? know how it feels
Oh I know how it feels to be free
Yea Yea! Oh, I know how it feels
Yes I know
Oh, I know
How it feels
How it feels
To be free

Nina Simone
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runaways are romantic

 
I thought you had written this at first!!! It did not seem so different from your style, but how do I know, I was not in any creative writing class with you..
I loved it. I am familiar with Simone; makes sense I have liked what I've seen of her writing. I'm surprised how John Lennon the message is, or maybe, that it could go with a song of his.
 
Posted by runaways are romantic on November 21, 2007 - Wednesday - 11:29 AM
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Claire- what do you make of the fact that she wishes to know what it feels to be free

then suddenly she says she knows?

"Then I'd know" she says and then

she does not seem to switch but rather to SPIN into "I KNOW YEA I KNOW" is she speaking sadly now or in denial or just decided that because she knows about how birds fly or because she knows about wishing- or what she MIGHT see- she is free because she does not know what she might see.

it's confusing to me because often wishes are disappointing?

dunno.
 
Posted by runaways are romantic on November 21, 2007 - Wednesday - 11:36 AM
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PS. If you have a chance, and you want to, check out "The distance between trances" it is this short story of mine that is different from how I usually write stories- (stream of consciousness, humor, crass, ect) it is psychological and sad and dense. It could also use alot of editing but anyway..if you do read it, let me know what you feel. Okay. Goodnight.. (It's 3:35 A.M here and I should finish writing my jazz paper comparing how Art Tatum and Keith jarrett play the same song...)
 
Posted by runaways are romantic on November 21, 2007 - Wednesday - 11:40 AM
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sorry to post again.. the short story is the first of my myspace blogs.
 
Posted by runaways are romantic on November 21, 2007 - Wednesday - 11:41 AM
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(i just added you to my preffered list.)
 
Posted by runaways are romantic on November 21, 2007 - Wednesday - 11:42 AM
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