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	Miss Joann Taylor	I thought your new Apparatjik track has a city sound in a part of it. Real good track.   Posted by Miss Joann Taylor on Monday, April 06, 2009 - 9:56 AM [Reply to this]

	Pau	Shiny metal and..unbroken glass....memory ..is reconstructive:..dissolving the past..always changing the now....human soil..architectural petal....thank you city..for grinding us down united..at last.   Posted by Pau on Monday, April 06, 2009 - 9:56 AM [Reply to this]

	Pandora	This one really evokes the city of London... all glass and metal. I love the "human soil, architectural petal" lines. I've always found that cities do indeed "grind us down," too..... but that's just me. ....Thanks for the thought provoking stuff on this fine Monday morning, Mags!   Posted by Pandora on Monday, April 06, 2009 - 9:56 AM [Reply to this]

	Karin F Karin Gobitta-Földes	This time you were in São Paulo I gave you a CD next time I'll give you a book. Calm down Mr F! Not in Portuguese! Well, just if the book come together a Brazilian girl translater graduated in Language Arts and Portuguese Teacher! hahahahahahahahahhahahahaha....O.K I'll stay here studying Norsk... Jeg snakker litt Norsk. ;-)....Ha det bra! =D   Posted by Karin F on Monday, April 06, 2009 - 9:57 AM [Reply to this]

	simonetta	..Subtraction and addiction...you always likes to play with words! This is like a chessboard...neutrons recostructed....united at last.... ;-)..   Posted by simonetta on Monday, April 06, 2009 - 9:58 AM [Reply to this]

	Fruitwaffle	Which city? London did grind you down, but that was a long time ago. ....I like the part about memory being reconstructive - how we can change the past by consciously or unconsciously changing our memories of it. Like in the song "White Canvas": "You cannot erase them, words that were said, just paint them over, inside of your head." That song means a lot to me and, since I use it in a playlist as part of my daily yoga, I listen to it every day! .... "Dissolving the now" - I do that all the time when I daydream.   Posted by Fruitwaffle on Monday, April 06, 2009 - 9:59 AM [Reply to this]

	Véronick	je vais attendre demain pour faire un commentaire vous etes si subtil que tous mes écrit sont pour vous dénuez de sens !!   Posted by Véronick on Monday, April 06, 2009 - 10:00 AM [Reply to this]

	firstbreath and last	Enjoying the barrage, thank you. :)   Posted by firstbreath and last on Monday, April 06, 2009 - 10:00 AM [Reply to this]

	Véronick	tu parle de batterie??   Posted by Véronick on Monday, April 06, 2009 - 2:55 PM [Reply to this]

	Brigitte	Are you copying what I did the other day? Taking one poem apart to create another one? Did I inspre you? ;D   Posted by Brigitte on Tuesday, April 07, 2009 - 10:29 AM [Reply to this]

	Jane	Very clever!! This and 'As Neutron' - I guess there is some sort of word-reaction going on here - but as I don't know the first thing about physics (we spent more time watching 'red dwarf' in our physics lessons than learning) that is as far as I can take it - however my clever brain has detected that there is a reduction in words to create a new poem! Anyway you deserve the nobel prize for word-physics!!! Very good! :)   Posted by Jane on Tuesday, April 07, 2009 - 1:39 PM [Reply to this]

	Silke Silke A	very often it appears to me as if architecture and poetry are different means of expression of the same thing, (Ok not always, sometimes architecture can be awesomely bad and disturbing, but on the other hand poetry too ;-)), as its best it's ....hmm.....artitecture ?.. perhaps that's one of the reasons why you love or loathe a city.....speaking of .... still can't find "universion" in one of my highly appreciated online dictionaries it's a shame!....btw. I like the way you created different meanings and moods with the same words by rearranging them or letting them go....P.S. "quark, quark" says the duck ( sorry, couldn't resist :-/)   Posted by Silke on Tuesday, April 14, 2009 - 10:27 AM [Reply to this]

	CANVAS	Makes me a monster if you want to fight. And a myth if you want to seduce me. Ahead is the end. And follow what you want let go. Shadows always left in the sun. You want see me shine. But can make me blind. And don't look no explanation. Do not expect inspiration, no one. Men from around the world, draw wings for flying. And make company to big dreams again. Fall down old walls. Build new ideals. And let be the melody to be the new weapon of you. And what can animate you can poison me. When trying to sleep and you can not close your eyes, Try to hear the cries of those who dream.   Posted by CANVAS on Tuesday, April 14, 2009 - 1:22 PM [Reply to this]

	Yvonne	I can't get over the fact that you grasp (and craft) this better than anyone else I know. That should be frustrating but instead feels strangely comforting and fitting. It makes me want to stand up and stand tall without caring whether or not anyone will listen. How weird is that? ..    Posted by Yvonne on Tuesday, April 28, 2009 - 10:26 AM [Reply to this]

	Mel Ann Choly Mel Ann Choly	word distillation - a potent force! more concoctions please Prof Magne :)   Posted by Mel Ann Choly on Tuesday, May 26, 2009 - 10:48 AM [Reply to this]