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David McWane



Last Updated: 11/21/2009

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Gender: Male
Status: Single
Age: 84
Sign: Scorpio

City: BOSTON
State: Massachusetts
Country: US
Signup Date: 1/13/2004

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Thursday, June 14, 2007 
a way out

gutter girls laughing
cackling
big teeth showing
swollen gums bursting
eyes scanning
looking for boys to kiss
broken windows poofing in light snow
would look beautiful
if it was a movie
if it was a stage show
if it was movie foam
but like death to me in a trash squat in Slovenia
I rise up from the broken-wood, folding cot that I lay in
with torn, army green fabric
my spindly body shaking wildly
back bones, shoulders and ribs shaking wildly
the aggressive cold
'wait, couldn't I die tonight?'
I thought, as I noticed the
lusty
moving
shadows
around me
crone's eyes widen for play at me
I approached these hellcats feeding
with a snatch and a glare
I grab their bottle
absinth doesn't taste very good when chugging it in desperation
but it's your only way out

 

 

 

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See How She Flies Like Lucy In The Sky
Caitlin Jackson

 
wow that sounds sheerly brutal.
chugging absinth?! i know I wouldnt dare
 
Posted by See How She Flies Like Lucy In The Sky on Thursday, June 14, 2007 - 8:15 PM
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Never was anything great achieved without danger
Audrey Weidemann

 
Don't all good, unappreciated performers feel this way from time to time? It's a hard row to sow but the worth is there eventually. You are excellent with your imagry and pause.
 
Posted by Never was anything great achieved without danger on Thursday, November 15, 2007 - 10:08 PM
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emily
Emily Binienda

 
i stumbled upon your writing as a suggestion from a friend.
and i'm quite happy i did.
your writing is superb.
very characteristic, and inspiring.
love the imagery of this particular poem though.
fantastic.

i'm Emily, by the way.
:)
 
Posted by emily on Thursday, November 29, 2007 - 7:16 AM
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