scribbled on the bus yesterday... having problems with line breaks. Any advice for me?

We kissed at incinorator sunset of the earth
hissing into space's endless steaming night
We lived off lint that transformed into windows
that opened to the crystal garden of our ancestors
and loved ones deceased!

We drowned ourselves in opulent pools of perfumed brain fluid
and wept at the beauty of our bowels,
little slugs grated on the pavement.
We swam in placenta bubbles and traveled to the days we die
We woke up in an empty, meaningless night
brushed the outside of our hands from across a city
and fell in dreamy embrace
sighing like children finally done with reasonless crying

After long blank spaces now missing, taken years
endless plains of people waiting in line
doing, doing, doing
We squinted one eye and spat on the world
and made our own mother
then followed her through the death-ridden treacherous road
away from humanity to the sea

We pulled each other's peeling skin
rolled up from the desert dirt rosy, raw and new
sealed off from the bitter
by a membrane of comprehendable life
finally understood, finally free
when we stopped trying