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Gender: Male
Status: Single
Age: 23
Sign: Aries

City: Covina
State: California
Country: US
Signup Date: 4/11/2006

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Uncle Justin! (2)
Saturday, July 14, 2007 
she was slim and pretty
with short hair.

she painted.

she had pierced nipples
that you could sometimes see
when she wore a white tank top
and no bra.

on the night before
school finals
she was in my room
sick
and about to leave.

my hands were shaking and
i said something stupid,
"do i have time to kiss you?"
and i kissed her,

long
and
hard.

then we were naked and fell into bed together.

later
when school let out
she left the state
and i went home.
5:11 AM
 
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Uncle Justin!
Justin Gautreau

 
I like the simplicity in this one. There's a sort of detachment in the writing but we get the feeling in between the lines, I would say...

I really dig where some of the emphasis is placed. That's where I take most of the meaning from this poem.
 
Posted by Uncle Justin! on Monday, August 06, 2007 - 6:48 AM
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