I love the way you think and I love your writing. I would love to edit your work. I think I am a very good editor so I edited this as a little example of my work.

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She danced on the beach…hunting for the agates smooth…the trees whispered secrets of her scent intoxicating aroma sweet.    

Victorian woman with her corset tight…satin soft her soft eyes allure.  

  As the sun rose in Paris far away the stars shone brightly and she watched the sky with clear intent sending him dreams of mermaids swimming through the sea.  Kissing his eyelids softly as he slept in deep content. Their woven words made a fabric brilliant with strands of colors interacting like the notes of a song creating a blanket of brilliance covering him. 

  She listened to the quiet and observed  the residual left behind of  silent words shared and it looked  like tinkerbell sparkles, little tiny bursts of color exploding then falling gently into the darkness and the lullaby of the waves soothed her senses sweet.