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Gender: Female
Status: Single
Age: 102
Sign: Gemini

State: North Carolina
Country: US
Signup Date: 4/26/2006

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Saturday, June 30, 2007 
Cover Story
(and a new paperback!)


Ever wonder how much say authors have on the cover of their books? I suppose if you're J.K. Rowling or John Grisham, you can pretty much call the shots. But if you're not, you're usually at the mercy of the marketing and art departments.
 
Which is why, a few years ago,  I fought a losing battle over this cover for my historical fiction, The Vanishing Point:


 
The novel's protagonist is a Renaissance painter, a teenage girl at the time the novel takes place. Does this dumpy dough-girl look like a teenager? Does anyone, anywhere have a thumb like the one stuck the wrong way through the pallette? Does this scream Renaissance? Or Queen Elizabeth with a serious eye condition?
 
I humbly suggested, when shown this masterpiece, that I'd prefer the artist's own work on the cover, since her skill had stood the test of time and I wasn't at all sure the same would prove true of Houghton Mifflin's illustrator. But the powers that be informed me that using my protagonist's work would be "old-fashioned." Hello??? She lived four hundred years ago! I even suggested they slice up an authentic painting, use it as part of a collage, if "now" was the look they wanted. But they told me the cover art had already been bought and paid for. To give them credit, after enduring my wailing and moaning and after the intercession of my terrific editor, Kate O'Sullivan, said powers did agree to put the artist's self-portrait on the BACK cover. Now I ask you, who looks younger? More interesting? -- the double-chinned wonder on the front cover above or this young girl relegated to the back:


 
But wait! Just out from the Good Guys Can Actually Win If They're Willing to Wait Long Enough department, here's some great news. The book's coming out in paperback this fall  And guess what's on the cover? The artist's portrait, cut up and used in a fresh, intriguing collage that really captures the spirit of the book:


 
So let's hear it for a marketing department that finally listened. And an art director who actually read the book. And an editor who hung in there and knows which battles can be won. Yeeeeehawww! Or as my heroine might say, Alé!
 
 
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Ms. Conduct

 
This story from http://www.alternet.org/story/55389 web share page may interest you -

"Time Is Right for New Pentagon Papers
http://www.alternet.org/story/55389

The story of the leak of the Pentagon Papers to The New York Times is famous, but how they got published as a book, with Gravel’s face on the jacket, reads like a John Grisham novel."

I think that the story also may apply to media, as well as freedom, books, intellectual freedom, and authors' creative license.

Alé!

Thanks for the thought-provoking blog - and, I love the end product - Super!

Shirley
 
Posted by Ms. Conduct on Saturday, June 30, 2007 - 5:44 PM
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LOUISE HAWES

 
Shirley,

I'm tickled you like the new cover -- for me, it really, truly works. It uses part of Fontan's portrait AND it conveys the way in which she was shut out from the world she wanted so badly -- the male dominated realm of art. By watching and learning from a distance, she mastered enough to crack that world wide open.

Sounds a little like Gravel in the article you sent :-)

Thanks!
 
Posted by LOUISE HAWES on Saturday, June 30, 2007 - 5:54 PM
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BookMarm

 
I LOVE the new cover, it is so much better than the old one. The cover is probably the most important element of a book because if the cover is not attractive it does not get picked up and read. The writer should have a lot of control over the cover, maybe not complete control since usually the publishers want to make it marketable, but in this case you were right.
 
Posted by BookMarm on Saturday, June 30, 2007 - 7:32 PM
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LOUISE HAWES

 
I can't wait to pass these repsonses on to my editor! Maybe next time we can save the painful in-between step where nobody listens to us!

Thanks for the feedback!
 
Posted by LOUISE HAWES on Saturday, June 30, 2007 - 7:35 PM
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Lauren
Lauren Butts

 
I really like historical fiction, so yay! But I have to admit, if book shopping... I do tend to judge books by there cover a bit. It's eye catching. I don't know what the first would have done for me, but the second totally rocks!
 
Posted by Lauren on Saturday, June 30, 2007 - 7:33 PM
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LOUISE HAWES

 
It makes you wonder what they were paying all that money for, doesn't it?!

Next book, I think I should survey Myspacers BEFORE the cover's finished!

Thanks so much, Lauren.
 
Posted by LOUISE HAWES on Saturday, June 30, 2007 - 7:37 PM
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Malcolm R. Campbell

 
Just think of all the people who were frightened away at the outset thinking God knows what about the first cover.

Looks good now, though.

Malcolm
 
Posted by Malcolm R. Campbell on Saturday, June 30, 2007 - 7:33 PM
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LOUISE HAWES

 
You're right, Malcolm. It's times like this that the big publishers' responses make the self-publishing route look pretty attractive. (Imagine a big smiley face here, since Tom's still working on the rich-text editor!)
xx
 
Posted by LOUISE HAWES on Saturday, June 30, 2007 - 7:40 PM
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Anna

 
I have to agree with you Louise, the new cover is FAR better than the old. Is this what I have to look forward to? ;o) ~Anna
 
Posted by Anna on Saturday, June 30, 2007 - 10:25 PM
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LOUISE HAWES

 
Kind of a damper, isn't it, Anna? But bad cover or good, I'm looking forward to that first book of yours. There's nothing like the first baby!
xxx
 
Posted by LOUISE HAWES on Saturday, June 30, 2007 - 10:31 PM
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Miss D. Meanor

 
I love "Book Cover 2.0"! The second cover makes me want to see what's inside...it is absolutely intriguing! I would have to pick this one up, and once a book has made it into my hands it will usually come home with me. Thanks for the insider scoop on being published. I had no idea that the author had so little control over their book's cover design.
 
Posted by Miss D. Meanor on Sunday, July 01, 2007 - 12:13 AM
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LOUISE HAWES

 
Thanks, Miss D! Yours are the very hands authors want to see their books in :-) So I'm hoping, next time around, Houghton will listen, if not to me, to Myspace... wish me luck!
 
Posted by LOUISE HAWES on Sunday, July 01, 2007 - 12:25 AM
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Darnesha

 
Like everyone else said, the second cover is so much better than the first...honestly I probably would never have tried to read The Vanishing Point if it had the first cover...well, since you wrote it, I'd read it, but if I'd never heard of you, I probably wouldn't have. I love the second cover!

darnesha
 
Posted by Darnesha on Monday, July 02, 2007 - 1:59 AM
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LOUISE HAWES

 
Hey, Cutie, thanks for your vote! I guess it's unanimous now -- which just goes to show, ad people and marketers are not always right about what WE think. Up with Myspace!
xxx
 
Posted by LOUISE HAWES on Monday, July 02, 2007 - 2:06 AM
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Sarah Aronson

 
I LOVE the new cover.

Congrats!

Recently, I met Laurent Linn, who designed my book cover. Before he began working on the cover, he read the book...and really got it. It makes such a huge difference.
 
Posted by Sarah Aronson on Monday, July 02, 2007 - 1:36 PM
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LOUISE HAWES

 
Thanks, Sarah! As I've already told you, your cover is arresting, chilling, and a definite winner. Linn did a fantastic job. I suppose there's many a slip between reading it and getting it, and some designers/illustrators just don't. You were lucky the first time around!
 
Posted by LOUISE HAWES on Monday, July 02, 2007 - 1:38 PM
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BgNzdK8

 
i always wondered about that crappy cover. i almost didn't read the book when i saw it, i AM someone who judges a book by the cover and so does EVERY teen i know! the only thing that got me to read it was a kid who reccommended it.
 
Posted by BgNzdK8 on Friday, July 06, 2007 - 7:05 PM
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LOUISE HAWES

 
Thanks for the feedback, Terry! I just wish The Powers That Be would ask librarians and kids BEFORE they make decisions FOR them :-(.
Oh, and it was great to hear Simon and Garfunkel on your site. It really took me back!
 
Posted by LOUISE HAWES on Friday, July 06, 2007 - 7:08 PM
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HarpOfHyperion

 
Could be worse, though ...

I had a magazine piece published where the last two or three paragraphs were deleted, and a different conclusion put in its place.

... Turns out that the printer, who was a zealous Christian, did not think my conclusion was pro-Christian enough -- and changed by conclusion with one which did not, at all, follow from the rest of the article.

(The piece was an examination of the influence of the Cult of Isis on Mariology).

I would have put up with having all the illustrations messed up, if they had just kept their fingers off my *text*!
 
Posted by HarpOfHyperion on Monday, July 23, 2007 - 4:45 PM
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LOUISE HAWES

 
Oooof! That is worse, much. My condolences. Were there provisions for "editorial revision" in the contract you signed? If not, that is purely and simply outrageous, not to mention disrespectufl. There's food for another blog here, no? How about the time my publishers decided the title of my book wasn't "marketable" when it was already in GALLEYS?
Or the way film and production folks regard the book on which a movie is based -- in some cases, at least, it seems to be little more than a jumping off place, a trigger that spawns an offspring so unlike its parent, only the credits will tell!
 
Posted by LOUISE HAWES on Tuesday, July 24, 2007 - 2:20 AM
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Nana

 
The second cover wins by a landslide! You could do this same survey with students and I guarantee they'll agree. As a matter of fact, I plan to do that after school starts. Have a great day!!
 
Posted by Nana on Thursday, August 02, 2007 - 6:24 PM
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LOUISE HAWES

 
Thanks so much for the feedback!
Coming from someone like you, who works with kids, that response means a lot. Do you think I should show this blog and all the comments to my editor? :-)
 
Posted by LOUISE HAWES on Thursday, August 02, 2007 - 6:32 PM
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Nana

 
Absolutely!!!!
 
Posted by Nana on Friday, August 03, 2007 - 10:43 PM
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Robin

 
I really like the new cover! I must confess that I too will open a book if I'm intrigued by the cover (shame on me!). I started reading Jasper Fforde's works because of the interesting art work. The newer books though aren't as eye catching.

I've worked in marketing and I can say it would behoove marketers to listens to the authors quite a bit more.
Alé!
 
Posted by Robin on Sunday, August 26, 2007 - 3:14 PM
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LOUISE HAWES

 
Yes, it's strange, isn't it? The author, the illustrator, the editor, the designer, the marketing reps--we're all on the same team, yet we play on different fields! What's the point in that?
Thanks for the comment, and not just because my daughter's name is Robin :-)
 
Posted by LOUISE HAWES on Sunday, August 26, 2007 - 3:22 PM
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Bob K.
Bob Kosturko

 
Louise: Who created the paperback cover for "The Vanishing Point"? Whoever it was did a lovely job.


BTW, Kate O'Sullivan is indeed a terrific editor and a good friend of mine.


Cheers!
Bob K.

 
Posted by Bob K. on Friday, April 04, 2008 - 1:44 AM
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LOUISE HAWES

 
I'm glad you like it, Bob. The creative mind behind it belongs to a young woman named Sheila Smallwood. Was she there when you were? It was done in a painting/collage frame with added Photoshop effects. It is, truly, the favorite of all my covers so far!

And you'll get no arguments from me about the wonderfulness of Kate -- she's smart, compassionate, and puts up with me!
xxx
Lou
 
Posted by LOUISE HAWES on Friday, April 04, 2008 - 1:51 AM
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