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Friday, March 13, 2009 

Category: Writing and Poetry
"The Hero of Elm Street"©1999 Mark Edward Hall, All Rights Reserved.
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Although I call myself a horror writer, horror is not all that I write. There does, however, have to be a certain measure of magic in all of the stories I write. ....


The following tale is close to my heart. It is basically a ghost story with elements of magic and wonder. It is a longish story, just shy of 10,000 words, a lot to ask of someone who is sitting and staring at a computer screen.  For those who choose to take the leap of faith and read it, I thank you from the bottom of my heart. I hope the magic infects you. For those who don’t, I thank you as well, for bearing with me through all of the stories on this blog and for those that are yet to come.
Note: It seems that the myspace blogging system doesn’t allow for the posting of pieces more than about 7000 words, so I will post in two installments, about a week apart.


 
Mark....

THE HERO OF ELM STREET

By Mark Edward Hall

 
Part 1


 
 “Jimmy Coombs was the undisputed hero of Elm Street,” Luella Coombs told her daughter-in-law and her three grandchildren on that stormy October night in 1956. “He was my husband’s son, but I loved him as if he was more than that, I loved him as if he was more than a step-son who happened to be the same age as me. What we shared is hard to put into words. I don’t believe I ever felt quite the same way about anybody before or since. Jimmy was a very special person in my life.”

The three children, Maggie, Eddie and David, anticipating a story, stared up at their grandmother with wide, expectant eyes, while Frannie, their mother, abruptly dropped the knitting she’d been working on into her lap. She was looking at her mother-in-law a little anxiously.

“Good Lord in heaven, Frannie. It wasn’t like that,” the older woman burst out, seeing the distressed look on her daughter-in-law’s face. “Not like that at all. What on earth are you thinking, for goodness sake?”

Frannie did not answer Luella’s question, just continued to stare stonily at the older woman. That’s when Luella Coombs threw her head back and began to laugh uproariously. A voluminous flood of tears spilled from her eyes and ran down her seamed cheeks. The woman guffawed heartily, her large-bosomed chest hitching up and down, her old Boston rocker working back and forth a mile a minute, creaking at every seam and joint. The children, not having the slightest idea why their grandmother was laughing, watched her in puzzlement. After a time the old woman managed to get herself somewhat under control. She pulled her glasses from her face and dabbed at her wet cheeks and the corners of her eyes with the hem of her apron. “Oh my,” she said, barely able to stem another fit of laughter.

“Why do you cry when you laugh, Gram?” eight-year-old Eddie asked. “You always cry when you laugh.”

“I’m told that laughing is nature’s way of healing all of the heartaches this life has to offer,” replied the older woman. “I’m not sure that’s exactly true, but I’ll tell you one thing, I’ve got first hand experience with heartache. In my lifetime I’ve had more than my share.”

Eddie’s expression fell into a puzzled frown. “Yeah, but you cry when you laugh. Why?”

“I’m not sure I can explain it properly,” Luella said. “But I’ll try. You see, I gave up crying a long time ago. And someone who doesn’t cry has got to find an outlet for his or her emotions. I do it by laughing. So in a way I get two for the price of one.” The old woman smiled, but it was a distant look that didn’t seem like a happy gesture at all.

Eddie now looked even more confused. “Well, why did you give up crying?”

“I just can’t bring myself to do it anymore, little Eddie. I suppose I got it all out of my system years ago. The heartaches are all gone now and good riddance to them. When you get to be my age all the things worth crying over have passed. There are only so many cries inside a person, you see. And after they’re all used up you cry only when you laugh.”

The boy nodded in understanding but Luella could see that he was just patronizing her, that he didn’t understand at all.

Frannie continued to stare stonily at the older woman, her mouth slack.

“Why are you so shocked?” Luella asked her. “Earl was my husband, and I loved him! You know that. There was never a man could compare with him, even though he was thirty years older than me. But Jimmy . . . Jimmy and me shared a different kind of love. It wasn’t exactly a brother and sister thing either, although I suppose that was a little bit of it. You know how siblings sometimes sense one another’s moods? Especially twins? Well, it was sort of like that with us. But Jimmy and I weren’t related in the physical sense. We were linked in a special way instead, in a way that can’t be explained in ordinary terms. It’s a bond that only happens to a person once in a lifetime, if they’re lucky. You see, Jimmy and I were able to sense one another’s thoughts and moods, even from across great distances. I guess you could say we were joined at the soul. And I know this to be true, because that joining remained long after Jimmy had passed out of this life.”

“Is this a ghost story, Gram?” Eddie asked, his eyes lighting up with anticipation, but his grandmother didn’t answer him. She just sat there rocking, that faraway look in her eyes, a fond little smile creasing the corners of her seamed mouth.

“Mom,” Eddie said, turning to his mother now. “Is this a ghost story? Gram said she was gonna tell us a ghost story.”

“I’m not sure this is a good night for a ghost story,” Frannie said, looking nervously toward the window.

That very morning Hurricane Camille had thundered ashore in the ..Carolinas.. and was now roaring mightily northward, destroying most everything in her path. And although the worst of the storm hadn’t yet reached the coast of Maine, it was on a collision course, and the wind was already blowing at gale force. More than two hours had passed since the electricity had gone out. Candle flames and hurricane lanterns fluttered and guttered in and around the shadowy kitchen where Gram, Frannie and the three children had taken refuge near the comforting warmth of the old cast-iron cook-stove. Outside the wind pushed the sea thunderously against the headland and tree branches lashed at the windows like cold, dead fingers.

“Nonsense!” Gram Coombs snapped. “This is a great night for a ghost story. The best kind of night, I suspect.” She sat forward in her old rocking chair and leered down at the children who were congregated in a semi-circle at her feet. “Besides, this isn’t just any old ghost story, this one’s true.”

“Is it really?” ten-year-old Maggie asked, her eyes sparkling with wonder.

“Now don’t you go scaring these children with your nonsense, Ma,” Frannie said, going back to her knitting. “I don’t want to be up all hours of the night comforting nightmares.”

“Lord in heaven, Frannie, this one’ll tickle their funny-bones more’n anything else.”

Frannie shot the older woman a distressed look. She’d stopped wondering years ago where her husband, Dan had gotten his streak of mischief from. In her day, Gram Coombs had probably been a worse hellion than any of her kids. The evidence was there in those sparkling green eyes and that mischievous little smirk.

“I sure wish Dan was here,” Frannie said, suddenly missing her husband very much. “I warned him the storm was coming, but he wouldn’t listen. I can’t believe he went driving all the way up to that damned Air Force Base on that damned stupid electrical job with that shyster he works for. Lord knows, they’ll be caught right in the middle of this mess.”

“Ain’t gonna do no good to worry yourself sick over it, dear,” Gram said. “Dan can take care of himself. He’ll be all right. You’ll see.”

“I’m not worried so much about Dan as I am about us,” Frannie said, but Luella suspected this was a lie. Her love for Dan was more like obsession, Gram knew.

“What kind of a ghost story is it?” little David asked his grandmother.

The old woman’s eyes sparkled. “It’s special,” she told the boy. “It’s about a special bond between two people . . . a bond and a friendship that will never, ever be lost.”

The boy pouted. “I want it to be scary,” he said.”

“Oh, it’s scary,” the woman solemnly replied. “Like all ghost stories should be. Anything beyond our understanding is sort of scary, in a way. Don’t you think?”

David nodded. Frannie sighed in resignation.

The old woman sat back in her creaking chair and a long contemplative sigh escaped her. “Let me see,” she said. “Where to begin.” Her eyes became a little unfocused and a small smile softly kissed her rouged lips, a sure sign that she had been transported back in time to the world of her younger years. Her mouth finally opened and the story began to unfold.

 
“It was 1918, and the Great War was raging in ..Europe... I remember it like it was just yesterday. Spring set in that year wetter and colder than any spring in recent memory. We were living on Elm Street then, in the town of Topsham—in the old Coombs place—keeping the woodstoves stoked up and trying as best we could to stay warm.

“On April 12th the biggest Nor’easter of the new century buried most of New England under eighteen inches of heavy, wet snow. The roof on the old Franklin Mill collapsed under the weight of it, killing half a dozen workers outright, and sending another three-dozen to the hospital. Terrible tragedy it was. And for the next three weeks following the Franklin Mill collapse the spring melt set up by that freak storm went about the task of transforming the entire countryside into the biggest pit of mud anyone had ever seen. The river rose above its banks that year, taking out the railroad bridge between James Village and Topsham and drowning out half the cellars on Elm Street. Henry Ives got swept up in it trying to get his smelt camp off and was carried downstream. Poor dear was never seen again. He never should have waited that late in the season to take his shack off the ice. Henry was a good man but he had a lazy streak and it ended up being his demise.

“So, all-in-all it was a terrible spring. The old-timers said it was the worst flooding since the spring of 1888, the year I was born. I should have taken all those terrible happenings as an omen of things to come, I suppose. But I didn’t. I was terribly naïve back then. I believed that nothing could penetrate the insulated life I had so successfully constructed around myself. You see, it was only a week later that I saw the vision of Jimmy above my bed and the very next day the letter arrived from the war department. I’ll never forget the way I felt when I saw that postmark. But I’m getting a little ahead of myself here. I should go back and explain the events leading up to that day in April of 1918, the day of the coming home party.

.. ..

Like I said, the Great War was raging over in Europe, and Jimmy Coombs, your grandfather’s son by his first wife Elizabeth had joined up for the cause. We were all mightily sad about it but knew in our hearts that it was a duty that could not be denied. Patriotism was in everybody’s hearts then, and it was such a good feeling to put God and country first.

“I’d married Jimmy’s father in the summer of 1907, and at that time your own father was twenty whole years away from being born. Can you imagine it? Earl, your grandfather, was my schoolmaster and I’d fallen head over heels in love with him in the summer of my seventeenth year. It was the same year I graduated from high school. He was such a handsome, gentle man, so kind, and so romantic. We courted for two whole years before I finally allowed him to take my hand. We were married in the spring of that year. He was forty-nine and I was nineteen. It was the most scandalous thing that had ever happened in the little town of Topsham, and the tongues were wagging something fierce. It was all such good fun. There was a wonderful kind of magic in the air back then.

“Earl already had a whole passel of kids from his first wife Elizabeth who’d died in 1905 from consumption. Most of those kids were older than me. Jimmy was the next to the youngest and my age. We’d been to school together and had become close friends years before I ever fell in love with his father.

“Jimmy never married. I’m not sure why. He could have if he’d wanted to. He was very popular with all the ladies. There were at least half a dozen as far as I know vying for his attention. Perhaps he just hadn’t settled on the right one yet. Lord knows he was just as handsome as his father. As handsome as your father is today.

“There could have been other reasons, too, I suppose. Jimmy was a complex man. There was this restlessness inside him that drove him beyond the realm of ordinary men. He was an adventurer, and he had style. He kept a room at his father’s house but he stayed there infrequently. Usually he was off somewhere in the world climbing a mountain, trekking through a jungle or rafting down some great wilderness river. I remember once reading an article in the Boston Globe that told about Jimmy Coombs and his courageous climb to the top of Mount Kilimanjaro. And you know, he never bragged about his conquests. That was one of his charms. We were all so proud of him. Jimmy Coombs was, indeed, the hero of Elm Street.

“And true to Jimmy’s style, when America joined The Great War he was among the first to volunteer.

“What you have to understand is, the world was different back then. I believe it was a better place to live in at that time in history. Even with all the heartache and tragedy of war it was better. You’ll never convince me otherwise. It’s one of those things I suppose I’ll never be able to explain properly. You would have to have lived in those times to understand the magic. There was more mystery then, more adventure. Great discoveries were being made every day. The ancient world was being uncovered in Egypt. Aviators were attempting trans-continental flight. Men were climbing great mountains and there was a race on to conquer the South Pole. The world was shrinking by degrees, and still, there weren’t any paved roads, no television sets. People around here were more innocent, and more neighborly. If someone got sick—like that time Elmer Hall broke his back pulling stumps out in Job Fosters wood lot with Betsey, that cantankerous old draft horse of his—people came from miles around to the Grange Hall with their covered dishes to help. Everybody pitched in all summer long to pay for Elmer’s operation down in the big city of Boston. Folks just did what they had to do then, and were proud of it. We took care of our own. Today the world is too impersonal. Neighbors don’t help neighbors like they did then. The world did, indeed, grow smaller, but through it all, people somehow seemed to grow apart. I don’t understand how that happened. It wasn’t supposed to be that way. It makes me sad to have lived to see those changes.

“But in 1918 I hadn’t yet reached the ripe old age of thirty, and most of life’s triumphs and tragedies were still to come. I remember my life stretched out ahead of me like the blank pages of an unwritten book.

.. ..

“So, a full year before the incident at the coming home party and only a couple days before he left for the war, Jimmy and I were upstairs in his room talking, and he was telling me about the new motorcycle he’d bought. As I’ve already stated, Jimmy didn’t stay at home much but when he did we always managed to get together for some good conversation. He was such a wonderful, generous man, so rich with life and possibilities. He always made time to be my friend, and I’ll love him forever for that.

“Our psychic bond began as a game, back in our school days, before we realized there was a serious side to it. We both soon discovered, however, that our psychic link—our ability to communicate beyond the physical—was no game. It was a unique gift, something we couldn’t even begin to understand, so we treated it with a quiet kind of reverence. Meaning that we didn’t broadcast it around. Folks back then would have called us romantic, or even crazy. So it remained a private thing, and we guarded our wonderful secret vehemently.

“And during those long periods when Jimmy was away our thoughts and emotions would sometimes cross. I can’t explain what magic caused it to happen. Only God knows the answers to such questions. I believe it was a way for Jimmy and me to keep the doors of communication between us open. Writing wasn’t always possible, you see, considering the lack of post offices in the exotic places he usually traveled.

“When he came home, the first thing he would say was, ‘Lulu, tell me where I’ve been and what I’ve been doing?’

“I think he would do it just to confirm in his own awe-struck mind the fact of our special bond. And more times than not I would get it right.

“‘Lulu, you’re a miracle,’ Jimmy would say and then he would embrace me fondly. We spent an awful lot of time together during those stays at home. I don’t suppose I can explain it properly without making it sound like more than it actually was. We loved each other, yes, and I’m proud of it, but I want to stress here that it was different from the romantic love your grandfather and I shared. That’s really all I have to say on the subject. Love is a complex thing and in the end only God can sort out the details. Your grandfather was a kind and patient man. He knew Jimmy and I had been close since childhood and I don’t believe he ever suspected any hanky-panky. It wasn’t in his nature. He needn’t have worried anyway because Jimmy’s and my relationship was so special we never would have let anything like a little hanky-panky spoil it.

“Now, as I was saying, Jimmy and I were up in his room. I was sitting cross-legged on his bed and Jimmy was sitting on the edge with his feet resting on the floor. He was telling me that he’d gone over to ....Lewiston.... to that new motorcycle dealership and he’d bought himself a brand spanking new Harley Davidson motorcycle.

“‘It’s a shiny black one,’ he said, ‘with these big sweeping handlebars that look like the horns of a mountain goat. Wait till you see it Lulu. It’s got wire-spoke wheels and leather saddlebags. It’s a real beauty.’

“I swear, Jimmy’s eyes were sparkling like a kid in a candy store.

“‘I’m going to leave it at the dealership while I’m away, and pick it up on the day I return from the war,’ he said. ‘That’s how you’ll see me first, Lulu. I’ll be riding that big black motorcycle machine.’

“I felt a little bit sad then. I’m not sure why. Jimmy was a brave man, but if you want the truth I think he was a little bit scared at the prospect of going off to war. What man wouldn’t be? The papers were full of the atrocities of The Great War. What a terrible thing it was. Some of the world’s finest young men were falling in the name of freedom. And Jimmy knew that, and he also knew that he might not be coming home, and I believe that motorcycle was sort of like a talisman to him. A bright and shining thing for him to focus on in those months he would be gone. The unspoken reality of the great war was that a lot of men didn’t come home, and I suppose buying that machine and leaving it here to savor, to dream about on those cold and endless nights was Jimmy’s own way of mortgaging a little piece of his own future. I leaned forward and hugged him then and cried and I did not want to let him go.

“But it mattered not. He left two days later. It was ..June 7, 1917, and within a month the letters began to arrive. We would all sit around the table after supper, Earl, me and the children, and Earl would read Jimmy’s letters to us. Jimmy was a diplomat and he rarely put anything bad in them, not wanting to frighten the children, I suppose. But I could sense an underlying tone of despair in those letters.

“And at night I began having these dreams. It was Jimmy’s and my psychic bond at work. I began picking up images from him. And none were very pretty. Most were images of trench warfare at its most gruesome. I could sense his emotions, his fear, his courage, his hunger and cold, and the worst emotion of all; loneliness. And I felt so helpless. And eventually, over the course of several months, those images began to overtake my life. Night after night they would haunt my dreams. I never told Earl. Through it all I did my best to be a good wife and mother. But it was oh, so hard. The images were so draining. I was so afraid for Jimmy’s life. I began to secretly curse the power that caused them. Why did I have to be blessed with such a terrible burden?

“Well, this went on throughout that long year of 1917 and into 1918, without letup. Somehow I managed to keep my wits about me. I wrote Jimmy once a week and filled him in on all the neighborhood gossip, updated him on his father’s activities and told him what was happening with the children. But I never told him about the visions I was picking up. I didn’t want him to lose focus and get careless. I desperately wanted Jimmy to come home.

“And then, on ..March 15, 1918.. we received the letter from the War Dept. We all stood in silent agony while Earl took the letter opener and slowly began slicing his way up the side of that envelope.”

.. ..

“The storm’s getting worse outside, ma,” Frannie interrupted. “I sure wish Dan would call. I’d feel a whole lot better.”

“Phone lines are probably all down, Fran. Why don’t you go check?”

“I’d better put some wood in the stove anyway,” Frannie said dropping her knitting beside her and getting up. “Anybody for hot chocolate?”

A strong chorus of excited yes’s erupted from the children.

Frannie went over to the cubby beside the kitchen counter, picked up the phone and listened.

“Finish the rest of the story, Gram,” Eddie said.

“When your mother comes back with the hot chocolate I will. Why don’t you children go see if she needs a hand?”

Maggie and Eddie got up and scrambled for the kitchen.

Frannie put the phone down again. “Ma, you were right,” she called from across the room in a small defeated voice. “Lines are down. Damn,” she cursed under her breath.

“It don’t sound like no ghost story to me,” David said dourly. He was still sitting cross legged on the floor at his grandmother’s feet frowning severely.

“You’re such a serious little boy, David,” Gram Coombs said fondly. “You keep that up and I swear you’ll have crow’s feet around those eyes of yours before you’re ten years old.”

David giggled. Gram tousled his hair.

Frannie filled the teakettle with water and put it on the back burner. She picked up a length of stove-wood and lifted the front plate with the hand iron. In the next instant, she let out a strangled little scream, jumped back and dropped the plate. It landed on the stovetop with a loud metallic clatter.

“Lord of ....Jerusalem...., Frannie,” Gram said jumping from her chair and hurrying over to the younger woman. “Did you burn yourself?”

Frannie had backed away from the stove a couple of steps and was looking at it as if it contained a demon. “No,” she said, her eyes huge and staring.

“Well, what is it then?”

The children had gathered around their mother. They were looking up at her with fear and uncertainty glistening in their eyes. Outside a strong gust of wind rocked the two hundred year old colonial house.

“Oh, it was nothing,” Frannie said finally. “Just my own silliness. I think this storm’s got me spooked. You know, for a moment I . . . I thought I saw a face in the flames. It startled me, that’s all. I guess I’m just being silly.”

“Yeah,” Eddie said with a nervous little laugh. “Silly. Mom’s silly.”

The phone dinged. Everybody jumped. Frannie picked it off the cradle and listened. “Just the wind on the lines,” she said softly. Outside a gust moaned along the eves of the house and fluted low discordant notes into the rain gutters.

The teakettle began to sing loudly. “Okay,” Frannie said. “I think we ought to get back to the hot chocolate and Gram’s story. What does everybody say?”

Another chorus of excited yes’s erupted from the children.

A nervous little look passed between Frannie and Gram.

“Now, where was I?” Gram asked after everybody had settled back into their respective places, mugs of steaming hot chocolate in hands.

“Grandpa Coombs was opening the letter from the war department, Gram,” Maggie reminded her. “And you were all so scared.”

“Oh of course,” Gram said.

.. ..

“We just knew what it was going to say and there was apprehension in our hearts and tears in our eyes even before the letter opener was halfway up the seam. Well, Earl finally fumbled it open and began to read aloud. It said that Jimmy had been wounded at ..Somme.., that his injuries were serious but not life-threatening. The cold weather and wet, muddy conditions had, however, complicated things and he’d contracted pneumonia. He was resting in a field hospital somewhere near the front and was expected to make a full recovery. Earl, the kids and I grabbed hold of one another then and did a circle dance around the kitchen, tears of joy now spilling from our eyes.

“After the shock of happiness had warn off Earl went back to the letter. It thus stated that Jimmy had been wounded while saving the lives of fellow soldiers and that he had been decorated for valor. We were all so proud. Jimmy Coombs truly was the hero of Elm Street.

.. ..

“Almost two weeks passed without a word, and finally, on April first we got a letter from Jimmy stating that he was being discharged from the Army and that he would be arriving home on April the twenty-first. There was no explanation beyond that. I don’t have to tell you how happy we were.

“Well, I wrote him back—not having any idea whether the letter would arrive in time or not—and told him we were planning a coming home party for him and that if the weather permitted we would take the party out into the back yard and we would see him there on the twenty-first. And that was the last word we got until we all saw him the day he came home.

.. ..

                                         Stay Tuned for Part 2
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ThoseLovelyShivers

 
A week for the ending? C'mon...........;-)
 
Posted by ThoseLovelyShivers on Friday, March 13, 2009 - 5:02 PM
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Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author
Mark Edward Hall

 
Thanks for reading, Tamara. I decided to wait a week because I wanted to build suspence. Looks like it's working.............Mark
 
Posted by Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author on Friday, March 13, 2009 - 9:29 PM
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Danny

 
I hate cliff hangers ha ha ha. Great dialog.
 
Posted by Danny on Friday, March 13, 2009 - 5:21 PM
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Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author
Mark Edward Hall

 
Hope you come back for the next installment, Danny. Thanks for the read.......
 
Posted by Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author on Friday, March 13, 2009 - 9:30 PM
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Thom futrell-martial artist, writer, artist
Thom Grim Reaper futrell

 
I am looking forward to part 2!!! Great writing my friend!!......Your friend and fan......Thom
 
Posted by Thom futrell-martial artist, writer, artist on Friday, March 13, 2009 - 5:55 PM
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Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author
Mark Edward Hall

 
I don't think you'll be disappointed, my friend. A least I hope not.............Mark
 
Posted by Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author on Friday, March 13, 2009 - 9:31 PM
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Elliot
Elliot Kennel

 
Part 2??! I need to know what happens nowwwwwwwww!......
 
Posted by Elliot on Friday, March 13, 2009 - 5:58 PM
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Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author
Mark Edward Hall

 
Tune in next time Elliot. As I explained in the forward, for some reason the myspace blog system won't hold a 10,000 word story. I decided to wait a week to build a little suspence.............Thanks again,......Mark
 
Posted by Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author on Friday, March 13, 2009 - 9:34 PM
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Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author
Mark Edward Hall

 
Thanks, Sue Burt, I'll post next Friday. I could have done it sooner but decided to get as many readers on board as possible with part one in order to build some suspence. Hope it works.............Mark
 
Posted by Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author on Friday, March 13, 2009 - 9:36 PM
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Don Boivin...Dark Fiction Author
Don Boivin

 
Wow! What an amazing story...and a week for part 2, well that is going to be a rough wait. Again, I want to tell you how wonderful I thought the writing was on part 1 and cannot wait for part 2.............~Don
 
Posted by Don Boivin...Dark Fiction Author on Friday, March 13, 2009 - 8:14 PM
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Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author
Mark Edward Hall

 
Thanks, Don. I've been so busy writing (I have at least ten projects going all at once) I haven't yet had time to get to your blog and check out your new story. But I haven't forgotten. I will.............Mark
 
Posted by Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author on Friday, March 13, 2009 - 9:39 PM
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John(Coyote)
John castellenas

 
Good story for Friday the thirteen. A excellent story....... Coyote
 
Posted by John(Coyote) on Friday, March 13, 2009 - 9:20 PM
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Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author
Mark Edward Hall

 
Thanks, John, hope you check out the next installment.
 
Posted by Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author on Friday, March 13, 2009 - 9:40 PM
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~Vivi~

 
Can't wait for part two !!! this was great you have me hangin hugs xoxo
 
Posted by ~Vivi~ on Friday, March 13, 2009 - 11:30 PM
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Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author
Mark Edward Hall

 
Thanks, Vivi, I appreciate you reading my suff. Hope you do come back for more.............Best,......Mark
 
Posted by Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author on Saturday, March 14, 2009 - 12:58 AM
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Rebecca

 
Totally drawn into the story only to be left hanging..and for a week? that is just downright mean...
 
Posted by Rebecca on Friday, March 13, 2009 - 11:43 PM
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Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author
Mark Edward Hall

 
Sorry to be so mean, Rebecca, but if you read the forward you can understand why I had to do it. I could have posted part two back to back, but felt that perhaps a litttle tension might be a good thing. I certainly hope you come back for more, and by the way, welcome to my blog.............Mark
 
Posted by Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author on Saturday, March 14, 2009 - 1:01 AM
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Rebecca

 
I honestly have no room to talk as I've done the same thing. When you know that people are waiting and actually anticipating that next post, it feels good......... I did read your reason for having to make it two parts and understood..and yeah- I'll be back..
 
Posted by Rebecca on Saturday, March 14, 2009 - 1:45 AM
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Just Jo (Flexwriter)
Joanne Chiles

 
Excellent story Mark!......Eagerly awaiting part 2 ......Hugs Jo
 
Posted by Just Jo (Flexwriter) on Friday, March 13, 2009 - 11:48 PM
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Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author
Mark Edward Hall

 
Welcome to my fiction blog, Jo. I will post part 2 next Friday. I do hope you come back and finish it. In the meantime there are many other tales posted. If you get the chance, please check some of them out.......Again, thanks,......Mark
 
Posted by Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author on Saturday, March 14, 2009 - 1:06 AM
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Kristaline
Kristaline shanon

 
I totally loved this...I can't wait to read the next part. A reality based ghost story, definitely makes you think it must be real.......Wonder what she saw in the window???......I will most certainly be back.......Kristaline
 
Posted by Kristaline on Saturday, March 14, 2009 - 3:29 AM
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Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author
Mark Edward Hall

 
Thanks for the read, Kristaline. Glad you liked it. Hope you enjoy the conclusion. Please check out some of my other tall tales while you're at it.............Mark
 
Posted by Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author on Saturday, March 14, 2009 - 3:04 PM
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P.K. Dawning

 
Hmmm... waiting on the ending like everyone else... but I have a strong feeling I know what happened to Jimmy...
 
Posted by P.K. Dawning on Saturday, March 14, 2009 - 5:24 AM
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Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author
Mark Edward Hall

 
Go ahead, guess. But even if you're right I won't reveal a single word. Wouldn't want to ruin it for everyone else. Just kidding, of course. Hope you stop by for the conclusion.............Mark
 
Posted by Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author on Saturday, March 14, 2009 - 3:07 PM
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M
Maggie G

 
I'll be back for the end. :) Great write. ......M.
 
Posted by M on Saturday, March 14, 2009 - 4:02 PM
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Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author
Mark Edward Hall

 
Thanks, M, I'll post it next Friday. I appreciate you reading it. Please, if you have the time, check out some of the other tall tales on my blog.............Mark
 
Posted by Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author on Saturday, March 14, 2009 - 11:55 PM
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Planet Wildflower
P. W.

 
............Interesting story, look forward to part 2. ............You sir are an excellent writer.
 
Posted by Planet Wildflower on Saturday, March 14, 2009 - 4:08 PM
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Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author
Mark Edward Hall

 
Thanks, Planet Wildflower. I'm glad you stopped by for the read. Hope you do so again.............Mark
 
Posted by Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author on Saturday, March 14, 2009 - 11:57 PM
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Gerard
Gerard Villegas

 
Hmm a little foreshadowing Mark? I'll have to read the next part.
 
Posted by Gerard on Sunday, March 15, 2009 - 12:55 AM
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Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author
Mark Edward Hall

 
I hope you do, Gerard. I think you'll like it.............mark
 
Posted by Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author on Monday, March 16, 2009 - 2:22 PM
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Ana

 
Well Mark, you definitely have piqued my interest to find out what happens, can not wait till the next part of the story.
 
Posted by Ana on Sunday, March 15, 2009 - 1:12 AM
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Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author
Mark Edward Hall

 
Hello, Ana, part two will be posted on Friday. Hope you enjoy it.............Mark
 
Posted by Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author on Monday, March 16, 2009 - 2:24 PM
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peter.k
Peter kelly

 
I'm staying tuned in ...........great .................peter
 
Posted by peter.k on Sunday, March 15, 2009 - 2:31 PM
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Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author
Mark Edward Hall

 
Thank you, my friend, for the read, and am looking forward to your thoughts on part two. Have a great week. ............Mark
 
Posted by Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author on Monday, March 16, 2009 - 2:26 PM
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Angela Roquet
Angela Roquet

 
I'm enjoying it so far. :) I'll definitely be back next week for part 2.
 
Posted by Angela Roquet on Tuesday, March 17, 2009 - 5:18 PM
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Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author
Mark Edward Hall

 
Thank you, Angela, I'll be posting it on Friday.............Mark
 
Posted by Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author on Tuesday, March 17, 2009 - 8:24 PM
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*stefy*

 
Wonderful reading, I'm glad you wrote parte II today, so I don't have to wait for the end :)......I'm going to read part II now!!! :)............
 
Posted by *stefy* on Friday, March 20, 2009 - 5:44 AM
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Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author
Mark Edward Hall

 
Hi, Stefy, thanks for reading part 1. I hope you also enjoyed part 2.............Your friend,......Mark......
 
Posted by Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author on Tuesday, March 24, 2009 - 12:27 PM
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Jean Smith P/W
Jean Smith

 
~ I enjoy a story that can keep my attention and this has done just that... I love ghost stories ~
 
Posted by Jean Smith P/W on Tuesday, March 31, 2009 - 10:53 PM
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Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author
Mark Edward Hall

 
Thank you, Jean.........Mark
 
Posted by Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author on Friday, April 10, 2009 - 6:29 PM
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Go To Hell Kitty
Sherri Hunt-Smith

 
I am so glad I have gotten here late and get to read the rest in one juicy gulp!
 
Posted by Go To Hell Kitty on Friday, April 10, 2009 - 5:28 PM
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CONNIE

 
Your writing is wonderful imagery. I especially enjoyed the characters. Very real. Heading for part 2..... 
 
Posted by CONNIE on Friday, April 17, 2009 - 10:02 PM
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Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author
Mark Edward Hall

 
Thank you, Connie. Welcome to my blog. I hope you enjoy part two.........Mark
 
Posted by Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author on Friday, April 17, 2009 - 11:17 PM
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Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author
Mark Edward Hall

 
Thank you, Budding Artist. I'm glad you liked it.........Mark
 
Posted by Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author on Tuesday, April 21, 2009 - 11:08 PM
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EDIEMAY -- SMILES ARE FREE!!!!!!!!!!

 
Okay, I am hooked and on my way to part 2--hugzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
 
Posted by EDIEMAY -- SMILES ARE FREE!!!!!!!!!! on Monday, April 20, 2009 - 8:37 AM
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Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author
Mark Edward Hall

 
Thanks again for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed.........Mark
 
Posted by Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author on Tuesday, April 21, 2009 - 11:09 PM
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Sheree Margaret

 
Wonderful writing...I tried to read this last night, but lacked the proper level of concentration...I'm going to digest this, and then move on to the second post.....
 
Posted by Sheree Margaret on Tuesday, April 21, 2009 - 10:19 PM
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Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author
Mark Edward Hall

 
Hope you enjoy part two, Sheree.........Mark
 
Posted by Mark Edward Hall – Horror Author on Tuesday, April 21, 2009 - 11:10 PM
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ruhappytoseeme is only accepting mobster/mafia war

 
well, due to my computer not running in this heatwave were having, it took me a week to get to read the whole part one, sooo im lucky and can continue right to part two :P Very good, cant wait to read the rest :).. 
 
Posted by ruhappytoseeme is only accepting mobster/mafia war on Tuesday, April 28, 2009 - 10:31 PM
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Lady Carol,

 
well my dear Mark that was an excellent read, your writes are  brilliant , one good thing about this cliff hanger is that I dont have  to wait to read part 2  I just turn  the page and carry on:) this is like a good book you cant  put down, but Im going to be good and keep part 2 for tomorrow :)  if I can:)  I will be back....
 
Posted by Lady Carol, on Thursday, May 21, 2009 - 6:49 PM
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