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Gender: Male
Status: Married
Age: 48
Sign: Aries

City: PALATINE
State: ILLINOIS
Country: US
Signup Date: 5/10/2006

Who Gives Kudos:

John (2)
flame in th.. (2)
Det. Slug (2)
neil (2)
James (2)
Elly Funky .. (2)
Easy Rog ;) (2)
July 14, 2008 - Monday 

Current mood:  warm
Category: Writing and Poetry
Prism

Prism leave
breaking sunlight
into layers
emerald
calcite
moss agate
malachite
spread wide
arch limbs
paint
a green rainbow
verdant
see
a supple ballet
sway spin
move
as wind fingers
pluck
twig branch trunk
as quiet witness
aware
so be
prism flesh
breaking world
into layers
tree
flower
bird
man
earth ride
arch live
draw
a breathing rainbow….
Currently watching:
Grand Canyon
Release date: 2001-03-13
3:44 PM
 
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John
John Booth

 
Good Poem Jeff
 
Posted by John on July 14, 2008 - Monday - 3:49 PM
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flame in the snow

 
You have managed to make a poem about trees, leaves, rainbows and prisms that is not sentimental but "breathes" --

holy chlorophyll, batman, you did it!

--tree hugger
 
Posted by flame in the snow on July 14, 2008 - Monday - 4:54 PM
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Det. Slug
David Swinson

 
Wow. I read "as wind fingers pluck twig branch trunk" four times. It is a wonderful line. This piece is racked with phrases worthy of committing to memory.
 
Posted by Det. Slug on July 15, 2008 - Tuesday - 2:58 AM
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neil

 
i have a prism.. it has a expoded clock in it...just thought youd like to know that
 
Posted by neil on July 16, 2008 - Wednesday - 8:47 PM
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James
JIm Christiansen

 
them green rainbos,
emerald, chartreuse, aqua,
often need the agua,
delay the other colors til fall or spring,
the thing is you like what you like.
 
Posted by James on July 23, 2008 - Wednesday - 9:54 PM
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Elly Funky Boots

 
Great images Jeff.
:)
 
Posted by Elly Funky Boots on July 25, 2008 - Friday - 1:26 AM
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Easy Rog ;)

 
I've missed too much of your work. Green my favorite color lol. Wonderful poem.

Rog ;)
 
Posted by Easy Rog ;) on August 6, 2008 - Wednesday - 1:37 PM
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Jim
Jim Turner

 
Unusual construction and good imagery. jim
 
Posted by Jim on September 27, 2008 - Saturday - 6:13 PM
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