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	Author- Alona Lee Jones Alona Jones	FIRST!   Posted by Author- Alona Lee Jones on November 14, 2009 - Saturday - 8:41 AM [Reply to this]

	Paul	it was a pile of shit to be totally honest   Posted by Paul on November 15, 2009 - Sunday - 4:35 PM [Reply to this]

	Seb	Ohhhh! Ow! Paul, you really pierced me there! My feelings are so hurt!  I now see my writing for what it is and will give up immediately. Thank you for making the world a better place by ridding it of one more worthless scribbler! (How is it I attract these morons?)   Posted by Seb on November 15, 2009 - Sunday - 7:23 PM [Reply to this]

	Paul	you'll never see your writing for what it is!! you are deluded just like half of the fukkin' idiots in here telling you otherwise ciao!!!!!!!!!   Posted by Paul on November 15, 2009 - Sunday - 7:49 PM [Reply to this]

	Shaun Shaun Mortimer	Some people are here for all the wrong reasons. What a loathsome little toad you are, Paul.   Posted by Shaun on November 16, 2009 - Monday - 7:21 PM [Reply to this]

	Terri	Even when you don't try, you nail it. This is at the very least a wondetrfully clear organization of thought - every line could be a poem in itself.   Posted by Terri on November 14, 2009 - Saturday - 9:12 AM [Reply to this]

	Paul	....like i said idiots!!!!:P   Posted by Paul on November 15, 2009 - Sunday - 7:50 PM [Reply to this]

	Animal Anticipation	Paul just wants Seb to read poetry to him and write about him http://www.zazzle.com/animal_anticipation   Posted by Animal Anticipation on November 17, 2009 - Tuesday - 1:40 AM [Reply to this]

	Seb	Now,now! Let's not be too hard on Paul - I remember the first time I tried to be a big man on the internet, too.   Posted by Seb on November 17, 2009 - Tuesday - 8:20 AM [Reply to this]

	Brandi DanYell Brandi Hope	I'm let down by that. Childish Sir.    Posted by Brandi DanYell on November 17, 2009 - Tuesday - 7:52 PM [Reply to this]

	Amanda Amanda Billington	What a nodick.  You owned him, Seb.   Posted by Amanda on November 17, 2009 - Tuesday - 8:54 AM [Reply to this]

	Author- Alona Lee Jones Alona Jones	I always wanted to be the `one` to say that...`there` i did it!  O`  to the poem.. Yes. your so good. Yes indeed U` are.   Posted by Author- Alona Lee Jones on November 14, 2009 - Saturday - 8:43 AM [Reply to this]

	Aaron	So what is it that's sweet about the sorrow of parting? Good piece.   Posted by Aaron on November 14, 2009 - Saturday - 8:43 AM [Reply to this]

	Flirt Like A Butterfly, Sting Like A Bee	A catty little piece!   Posted by Flirt Like A Butterfly, Sting Like A Bee on November 14, 2009 - Saturday - 8:48 AM [Reply to this]

	Rose	Well, I for one am willing to take the sad ending for the wonderful beginning.   Posted by Rose on November 14, 2009 - Saturday - 8:49 AM [Reply to this]

	Arky Sophisticate	There are so many wise and true observations here - especially the last four lnes. They kill me.   Posted by Arky Sophisticate on November 14, 2009 - Saturday - 8:52 AM [Reply to this]

	Lucy	Sounds like you have been there and back. I'll take your word for it.   Posted by Lucy on November 14, 2009 - Saturday - 8:53 AM [Reply to this]

	Jeff	Any relationship which has both cake and pie in it must be worthwhile, whatever the outcome   Posted by Jeff on November 14, 2009 - Saturday - 8:56 AM [Reply to this]

	Seb	Jeff, you said a mouthful.   Posted by Seb on November 14, 2009 - Saturday - 11:02 PM [Reply to this]

	Stephanie	Funny, true, witty, worldly - anything but worthless.   Posted by Stephanie on November 14, 2009 - Saturday - 8:57 AM [Reply to this]

	Rhona Rhona Lagerbeck	"It begins slow and uncertain and it ends hot and quick It beguns with “you’re beautiful” and ends with “you’re sick”." That made me laugh!   Posted by Rhona on November 14, 2009 - Saturday - 9:03 AM [Reply to this]

	Brandon Brandon D.	Dude, that's rich.   Posted by Brandon on November 14, 2009 - Saturday - 9:03 AM [Reply to this]

	DeeDee	I'll resist commenting on the message this could be construed to be sending, but you are very naughty!   Posted by DeeDee on November 14, 2009 - Saturday - 9:05 AM [Reply to this]

	Donna D is on holidays! :)	Anything but worthless, Seb... Deep; reflective; insightful; heart wrenching in many ways... and often true... I've been married 17 1/2 yrs, with no end in sight... but I can recall times when we almost went there. But on reading this at the moment, I'm relating it more to friendships... And isn't this a familiar scenario: "It begins with “you’re beautiful” and ends with “you’re sick”." Too sad! Too sad... but so real... It's a great poem, Seb...   Posted by Donna D is on holidays! :) on November 14, 2009 - Saturday - 9:05 AM [Reply to this]

	Seb	All I can say, Donna, is never get sick. You find out who your friends are then. Congrats on the 17 and the half!   Posted by Seb on November 14, 2009 - Saturday - 11:03 PM [Reply to this]

	Donna D is on holidays! :)	It's the 'half' that keeps me holding on for the next 'year' - gotta get that anniversary present...   (I hope I choose something good next year! ) When I read your reply in Hotmail just now, I came here knowing what you had written; it grieved my heart on your behalf... and the first thing I noticed on opening this was the amount of Kudos you have - and all of it formed together and had me thinking "Better to have one close friend than so many distant Kudos, ay..." I don't know why, Seb, and I haven't pursued the matter, and though I am sure you don't intend for it to be this way, your heart calls to mine often... There's just something about the hidden depths of your heart that awakens mine... If you ever need a shoulder, I have two... With love and respect, and a sincere heart Me...   Posted by Donna D is on holidays! :) on November 14, 2009 - Saturday - 11:14 PM [Reply to this]

	Large Marge Margaret Guildfoyle	Another little gem, Seb!   Posted by Large Marge on November 14, 2009 - Saturday - 9:10 AM [Reply to this]

	D on the cusp of Transcendence	Are there only beginnings and endings?   Posted by D on the cusp of Transcendence on November 14, 2009 - Saturday - 9:10 AM [Reply to this]

	Seb	There are very few second acts in American lives, Darlin'   Posted by Seb on November 14, 2009 - Saturday - 11:04 PM [Reply to this]

	Christy	How is this worthless? It is exciting, modern, cyncial - a Dr Seuss book for jaded adults.   Posted by Christy on November 14, 2009 - Saturday - 9:15 AM [Reply to this]

	Stella - HEYYY STELLAHHH!	Did you write this recently? because, It beguns with “you’re beautiful” and ends with “you’re sick”. Is either prophetic or terribly cruel depending on when you wrote it. But I like it, you cruel prophet   Posted by Stella - HEYYY STELLAHHH! on November 14, 2009 - Saturday - 9:18 AM [Reply to this]

	Seb	Very recently. I had no intention of ever posting it, though. It came as a last minute substitute for the intended poem, which I felt was too similar in style to last week's to sit back-to-back. I freely acknowledge this is not one of my better efforts, poetically or politically.   Posted by Seb on November 14, 2009 - Saturday - 11:06 PM [Reply to this]

	IrishT	^^^ omg to that! had not thought........... :(   Posted by IrishT on November 14, 2009 - Saturday - 12:47 PM [Reply to this]

	Allie Allie McLennan	Nice. When's the next beginning?   Posted by Allie on November 14, 2009 - Saturday - 9:18 AM [Reply to this]

	ari[elle]mnop♥ Arielle Minicozzi	it begins with a lay and ends with a lie. :)   Posted by ari[elle]mnop♥ on November 14, 2009 - Saturday - 9:21 AM [Reply to this]

	Ax Paola Axelle	(a worthless comment)   Posted by Ax on November 14, 2009 - Saturday - 9:22 AM [Reply to this]

	Valerie	This would be a cool song!   Posted by Valerie on November 14, 2009 - Saturday - 9:22 AM [Reply to this]

	Gen HeX	i thought the same thing! =)   Posted by Gen HeX on November 16, 2009 - Monday - 6:03 AM [Reply to this]

	Regina	Nice to see you with your devil still about you!   Posted by Regina on November 14, 2009 - Saturday - 9:42 AM [Reply to this]

	William the Conqueroo Will Hutchings	A little off colour, Guv'nor, but it has some moments which sting.   Posted by William the Conqueroo on November 14, 2009 - Saturday - 9:42 AM [Reply to this]

	The Bondurant Flyer	Modern romance, hey!   Posted by The Bondurant Flyer on November 14, 2009 - Saturday - 9:43 AM [Reply to this]

	Isis Isis Cambassian	A sense of humor makes your mind seem even sexier.   Posted by Isis on November 14, 2009 - Saturday - 9:44 AM [Reply to this]

	Gracie Gracie La Deuperouse	I notice there is one more beginning than there is end....   Posted by Gracie on November 14, 2009 - Saturday - 9:47 AM [Reply to this]

	Beth Beth Krogan	This is crazy good.   Posted by Beth on November 14, 2009 - Saturday - 9:47 AM [Reply to this]

	maria	Such a sad true poem . Makes me want to cry .  So True and such a pity it is. When I'm leaving this world I'll shed a tear for all the beautiful that somehow turned ugly for we did not have strength enough and beauty and maybe surety to keep it that way. Such a very sad poem . Made me sad but Beautifully written .   Posted by maria on November 14, 2009 - Saturday - 9:50 AM [Reply to this]

	Mrs Emma Peel	I havent had many serious relationships in my life but I feel like I have been through every one of these beginnings and endings.  This speaks to me.   Posted by Mrs Emma Peel on November 14, 2009 - Saturday - 9:51 AM [Reply to this]

	Ritchie	Some very cynical and sarcastic comments in this poem - and some righteously true ones, too.   Posted by Ritchie on November 14, 2009 - Saturday - 9:53 AM [Reply to this]

	Lainey	Man, am I ever feeling this one Seb. Hard to put into words, what you just did. Fantastic. I love it! xox Elaine   Posted by Lainey on November 14, 2009 - Saturday - 9:57 AM [Reply to this]

	Sandy Sandy Baxter	Alternately hilarious and tragic. Much the same as love.   Posted by Sandy on November 14, 2009 - Saturday - 9:59 AM [Reply to this]

	Nadia	I don't think it is worthless at all. Makes me think hard about a life of celibacy!   Posted by Nadia on November 14, 2009 - Saturday - 10:00 AM [Reply to this]

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