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Last Updated: 5/20/2006

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Gender: Male
Status: Single
Age: 25
Sign: Leo

City: LANCASTER
State: KENTUCKY
Country: US
Signup Date: 5/14/2006

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Monday, May 15, 2006 

Current mood:  depressed
Category: Life

 

I miss your soft brown hair,

I miss your glowing eyes,

I miss the way you looked at me,

I miss the way your cried,

Nothing mends a heart,

Nothing takes it's grief,

But without you...

There is no me...

Your all I see in darkness,

Your all I think about in day,

I cant remember now,

How I let my life slip away,

I kiss my baby's forehead,

and tell him Daddy loves him so,

And he gently rubs his finger tips,

Across his daddys nose...

He's so small and fragile...

 I know he'll never understand,

So I dont let him wimper.

I simply take his hand,

Daddys here now baby,

I usher him in close,

He is so confused now,

He has two different homes,

I awoke this morning,

In this awkward place,

I took another deep breathe,

And wiped the tears from my face...

======Adam Stevens========

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REMOVE PROFILE

 
hey i really liked ur poem! I right songs and poetry so i can recognize a good writer when i hear one.
 
Posted by REMOVE PROFILE on Tuesday, May 16, 2006 - 8:12 PM
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Rosemary

 
Fantastic poem. Very heart felt. 
 
Posted by Rosemary on Tuesday, May 16, 2006 - 9:15 PM
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Paula & Ken

 
Wow - that's so moving. I'm feeling alot of that right now. Bravo, Man - you nailed it for me.
*hugs*

 
Posted by Paula & Ken on Tuesday, May 16, 2006 - 11:38 PM
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♥♥SiMpLy uNiQuE♥♥

 

awesome poem.....I loved it......


 
Posted by ♥♥SiMpLy uNiQuE♥♥ on Wednesday, May 17, 2006 - 4:54 AM
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Quari Quari

 

wow, that was a really nice poem! most people wouldn't even look at it through a child's eyes, and i thought that was really unique. nice rhyme scheme.


 
Posted by Quari Quari on Wednesday, May 17, 2006 - 8:30 PM
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Awww Adam this is a really great poem!! I really liked it!!
 
Posted by on Thursday, May 18, 2006 - 12:38 AM
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Stephany

 
I miss the way your cried?
 
Posted by Stephany on Thursday, May 18, 2006 - 4:12 PM
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Stephany

 
I miss the way your cried?
 
Posted by Stephany on Thursday, May 18, 2006 - 4:12 PM
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Adam

 
Thank you all for the comments...I appreciate it very much
 
Posted by Adam on Thursday, May 18, 2006 - 6:39 PM
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