First of all these are really good. Secondly, in Numbers 1 and 5 her face looks tired, but of course that isn't your fault. I would try to coach your models, because they can't see what you see. try to keep a mirror on hand too...that will help them see what you see. They are really good pictures, and i hope you don't mind the constructive criticism.
I like the angle on #4, and the echo of the black in the bridge and her shirt and the white in the railing and her shirt.
Laurel
I like 1,3,and 4 the best...Deana is so beautiful...I should meet her...I see and hear about her all the time but I havent actually met her...she came after I moved to Texas...anyways...random statement. Good pics kid!
Much Love.