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caitlin ann



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Wednesday, January 09, 2008 

Current mood:anesthetized
Category: Writing and Poetry
quelled

the mountain peaks a line
like stradavaried strings on electronic scales
as the curtain fog falls
to curtail its symphony with
one
long
measure in grey
the last and gravest note 
in which the desert day will be kept cool..
spelled..
...save aside the wakeful world
and that cautious, twittering persistence
of what birds must do
despite quiet
..and all quelled mood.



©caitlin ann, 1.9.08
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Valentine deFrancis

 
Very inviting and intriguing as well. Great write

Val
 
Posted by Valentine deFrancis on Thursday, January 10, 2008 - 1:01 AM
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Neil

 
welcome back!

we've missed your work
 
Posted by Neil on Thursday, January 10, 2008 - 3:49 AM
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aNDy rULS.
andy WiDmer

 
sleep well...
 
Posted by aNDy rULS. on Thursday, January 10, 2008 - 4:17 AM
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Michael (隠者)

 
Good to "read" your voice.
Well done.
 
Posted by Michael (隠者) on Thursday, January 10, 2008 - 12:40 PM
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Seb

 
Ah! as always, you enchant, bewitch, bedazzle!
 
Posted by Seb on Thursday, January 10, 2008 - 7:55 PM
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♥ Sleepless n Chi-town ♥

 
Glad to see your back missed your writings.
Nice imagery painted here indeed your great at describing.
 
Posted by ♥ Sleepless n Chi-town ♥ on Friday, January 11, 2008 - 6:10 PM
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Helen

 
always so beautiful.... the imagery weaves the most enchanting mood....

H :-)
 
Posted by Helen on Friday, January 11, 2008 - 6:10 PM
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E A Poe, III
Ed Poe

 
somewhat Poe-like; if I might say so. happy new year. ~
 
Posted by E A Poe, III on Saturday, January 12, 2008 - 4:40 AM
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♥ Sleepless n Chi-town ♥

 
Very Nice WB havent seen you around much .
 
Posted by ♥ Sleepless n Chi-town ♥ on Tuesday, April 08, 2008 - 8:38 PM
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♫ Sleepless n Chicago ♫

 
Wow Caitlin i love this one
 
Posted by ♫ Sleepless n Chicago ♫ on Thursday, April 10, 2008 - 9:59 PM
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