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Gender: Female
Status: Single
Age: 33
Sign: Scorpio

City: pretty city
State: Tennessee
Country: US
Signup Date: 6/2/2006

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Monday, June 30, 2008 


but faced with a transfer that'd
take him gallons of gas from home
or foreclosure on the mortgage
he got suckered into
right tricked into on the first space

he feels foolish

but he wasn't the only one sitting on
booster seats of cut-out coupons
and rebate checks of confidence to
reach the board on that tall table

he wasn't the only one let out a holler
at that chance card bank error in your
favor get out of jail
free parking

but that house was paid off damnit
buyout used as a down payment
and when there was no work he
even had credit

he fell for it
he knows damnit
all of his cards flipped over
on the table

but he could have more
they said
low rates
they said
he could make money off
the small house
they said
have a yard

he damn well knows
he fell for it damnit and
he doesn't wanna
fuckin talk about it
no more, okay?

so now
he chooses the cannon
points it straight at the yard
to keep the bankers and their
monopoly money away

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Paul
Paul House

 
It would be nice if we could all have a cannon and keep the bastards at bay. Topical stuff, it seems.
 
Posted by Paul on Monday, June 30, 2008 - 4:49 PM
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Rick

 
irony is beautiful......at the bottom of this wonderful page I can get a new mortgage or I can get help with the current mortgage that I may be defaulting on......I'd choose the guy with the monacle
 
Posted by Rick on Monday, June 30, 2008 - 5:07 PM
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courtney j. campbell

 
i was always a thimble girl myself. i heard through the grapevine that you'll be out to get your crapamole today. don't go thinkin we're gonna shower and straighten up just for you, jimeroo.
 
Posted by courtney j. campbell on Monday, June 30, 2008 - 5:10 PM
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courtney j. campbell

 
i'm in default.

shit, that reminds me, i keep forgetting to send out that money order.
 
Posted by courtney j. campbell on Monday, June 30, 2008 - 5:59 PM
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Dhochartaigh
Thomas Dougherty

 
Wonderfully current, and wonderfully written. A great description of the underbelly of a free market economy, and us "suckers who are born every minute."

I paid $3,000 for my Masters in 1976. I never paid back a dollar because the State loan was forgiven at 25% a year because I taught reading in ghetto schools. Sure beats student loans of today.
 
Posted by Dhochartaigh on Monday, June 30, 2008 - 6:10 PM
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courtney j. campbell

 
that's not a half-bad idea! thanks, Pris!
 
Posted by courtney j. campbell on Monday, June 30, 2008 - 6:14 PM
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Brown Recluse / The Turk

 
everybody is feeling the squeeze of the economy these days. hopefully, things will get better after Bush and his cronies are out of office.

heartfelt write.
 
Posted by Brown Recluse / The Turk on Monday, June 30, 2008 - 8:31 PM
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courtney j. campbell

 
'everybody' might be a bit of an overstatement, but yeah.

are bush & his cronies ever out of office? i hope so.
 
Posted by courtney j. campbell on Monday, June 30, 2008 - 8:47 PM
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kate e kaboom

 
i love the way you so empathicly write about this character's troubles. i wish i had this talent; i am stuck in the mire of my own narrow experience.
 
Posted by kate e kaboom on Monday, June 30, 2008 - 9:37 PM
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courtney j. campbell

 
you are kind, but worry not - no experience is too narrow, imho.
 
Posted by courtney j. campbell on Monday, June 30, 2008 - 9:46 PM
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Michael Grover
Michael Grover

 
Yes, well said.
 
Posted by Michael Grover on Monday, June 30, 2008 - 10:02 PM
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Lady

 
kaboom!
 
Posted by Lady on Monday, June 30, 2008 - 11:05 PM
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courtney j. campbell

 
poor ed
 
Posted by courtney j. campbell on Tuesday, July 01, 2008 - 11:44 PM
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Terry

 
I really like the way this one MOVES down the page and into my chest.. like he moves into anger and realization..good poem Courteny.. I guess you are home now! Yes!
 
Posted by Terry on Tuesday, July 01, 2008 - 1:17 PM
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the TAOjONES Project

 
pesky bankers

nice piece

eb
 
Posted by the TAOjONES Project on Tuesday, July 01, 2008 - 3:49 PM
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another voice

 
nice story . . . .
told nicely too . . .
the last stanza is very very good.

good job!
 
Posted by another voice on Wednesday, July 02, 2008 - 2:13 AM
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