Who Gives Kudos: Rhymesoulnice (2) EDIEMAY -- .. (2) Monique (2) Eusthacia (2) Ravin~Never.. (2) Inner Beauty (2) Lori (2) Easy Rog ;) (2) Mountain Wo.. (2) kellet {sel.. (2) David (2) kingpapaj (2) Zav! (2) Ruggi (2) The Falcon (2) jeff g (2) THE TAO OF .. (2) (2) D J MYKE & .. (2) Profile Clo.. (2) (2) Colleen (2) Martin (2)

	Rhymesoulnice	heat of the night hmm damn love it   Posted by Rhymesoulnice on August 8, 2008 - Friday - 6:28 AM [Reply to this]

	Elly Funky Boots	Mmmmm yeah that night heat will getcha every time. Good to see you, John. :) xoxo   Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 8, 2008 - Friday - 6:33 AM [Reply to this]

	EDIEMAY -- SMILES ARE FREE!!!!!!!!!!	WONDERFUL--HERE ARE SOME FLOWERS   Posted by EDIEMAY -- SMILES ARE FREE!!!!!!!!!! on August 8, 2008 - Friday - 6:51 AM [Reply to this]

	Elly Funky Boots	And they're beautiful flowers. Thank you so much. ;)   Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 8, 2008 - Friday - 6:56 AM [Reply to this]

	Monique	A terrific first try.   Posted by Monique on August 8, 2008 - Friday - 6:52 AM [Reply to this]

	Elly Funky Boots	Hey good to see you Monique and thanks. I need to get over your way. xoxo   Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 8, 2008 - Friday - 6:57 AM [Reply to this]

	Eusthacia	love the cadence and effortless flow. so romantic, sistah moon. xoxo   Posted by Eusthacia on August 8, 2008 - Friday - 7:09 AM [Reply to this]

	Elly Funky Boots	Thank you so much, sistah. Love ya   Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 8, 2008 - Friday - 3:30 PM [Reply to this]

	Ravin~Never More *LWHP*	I think you did a splendid job Elly ... beautifully penned and captured!! XO   Posted by Ravin~Never More *LWHP* on August 8, 2008 - Friday - 8:46 AM [Reply to this]

	Elly Funky Boots	Thank you Miss Shauna. Love ya tons   Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 8, 2008 - Friday - 3:31 PM [Reply to this]

	Inner Beauty Inner Beauty	digging those funky boots....and the great writing.....IB =)   Posted by Inner Beauty on August 8, 2008 - Friday - 11:50 AM [Reply to this]

	Elly Funky Boots	Good to see you IB. We could start the Funky Boot Sisters Club maybe.... :)   Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 8, 2008 - Friday - 3:32 PM [Reply to this]

	Easy Rog ;)	A pleasure to read Elly. A new form you. You'd never know it. Dreamy romantic and sensual sigh. Dance yep you got it. Rog ;)   Posted by Easy Rog ;) on August 8, 2008 - Friday - 1:06 PM [Reply to this]

	Elly Funky Boots	Yeah guess I had to be in the mood to attempt one finally. Wanna dance, my poet friend? :)   Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 8, 2008 - Friday - 3:34 PM [Reply to this]

	kellet {sell out group} writer. Man up fuckers	Well done.   Posted by kellet {sell out group} writer. Man up fuckers on August 8, 2008 - Friday - 1:28 PM [Reply to this]

	Elly Funky Boots	Thank you, Kellett. I'm a new reader, but have really enjoyed your work. :)   Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 8, 2008 - Friday - 3:48 PM [Reply to this]

	David	The moon broke through The shredding clouds, Lifting its cape, Its dull gray shroud, Revealed us on the stones Romancing, I held you close, You stumbled, dancing; Why must you wear Those clunky shoes, I taste your lips, Your tongue intrudes; Your heel steps on My sandaled toe, You move too fast, You move too slow; Is it because You are so short, That to these high heels You ressort; Or is it because I am so tall; Your clunky shoes Make us fall. They aren't sexy They aren't smart, I step forward, Your knees do part; I spin you out And then around, I find us lying On the ground; Why not flats My little munchkin? Don't wear those clodhoppers To the luncheon, Lest when standing At the buffet, You trip and fall Into your tray.   Posted by David on August 8, 2008 - Friday - 1:38 PM [Reply to this]

	Elly Funky Boots	OMG David you've got no idea how hard I laughed when I read this. TOO FUNNY. I shall reply soon oh giant sandaled one. xoxo   Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 8, 2008 - Friday - 3:37 PM [Reply to this]

	kingpapaj	Thought these might fit the mood you've created. Ahhhhh...XO   Posted by kingpapaj on August 8, 2008 - Friday - 2:19 PM [Reply to this]

	Elly Funky Boots	Those are definitely hot boots. Will change into those this evening. Hehe. xoxo   Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 8, 2008 - Friday - 3:39 PM [Reply to this]

	Zav!	beautiful well done you   Posted by Zav! on August 8, 2008 - Friday - 3:37 PM [Reply to this]

	Elly Funky Boots	Thank you so much, Zav. xoxo   Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 8, 2008 - Friday - 3:39 PM [Reply to this]

	Ruggi	Ahhhh you did great with your first Pantoum! Somewhere between hawt and smooth.... perfect! :o)   Posted by Ruggi on August 8, 2008 - Friday - 3:53 PM [Reply to this]

	Elly Funky Boots	Thank you, Ruggs. I like hawt and smooth. Hehe. I need to catching up with your latest work. xoxo   Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 8, 2008 - Friday - 4:04 PM [Reply to this]

	The Falcon	Nice. I like it Elly. I've yet to write a pantuom. :D   Posted by The Falcon on August 8, 2008 - Friday - 4:40 PM [Reply to this]

	Elly Funky Boots	Thanks Falcon. I can't believe Dahlia hasn't challenged you to one yet. I know you'd do a great job. :) xoxo   Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 8, 2008 - Friday - 4:54 PM [Reply to this]

	Elly Funky Boots	Actually I messed up on the rhyme scheme. Dang it. Just reread Dahlia's last one. Oh well now that just means I have to try another. Hehe.   Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 8, 2008 - Friday - 5:13 PM [Reply to this]

	jeff g	you did a fantastic job with this one Elly it never skipped a beat... luv j   Posted by jeff g on August 8, 2008 - Friday - 4:45 PM [Reply to this]

	Elly Funky Boots	Thank you so much, my friend. Good to see you. xoxo   Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 8, 2008 - Friday - 4:55 PM [Reply to this]

	THE TAO OF SHISA BRI ॐॐॐ	This is excellent~ sultry~spiritual~ spatial! I have seen Pantuom around, but have gotten away form for myself so I had to look it up... WOW! That looked hard! I was sitting there with my eyes blurring! This is such a special poem then to have to jump through all those hoops and still be able to come up with an amazing piece as this! AWE! I understand it was a thing you wanted to try adn I may give it a go myself...but above all...the emotion is the major part of poetry....and this poem....is hooooops above the form!!!!   Posted by THE TAO OF SHISA BRI ॐॐॐ on August 8, 2008 - Friday - 10:39 PM [Reply to this]

	Elly Funky Boots	Thanks, Brian. Can't wait to read yours if you do try one and your last couple have been pretty sultry too. Loved them. Good to see you. xoxo   Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 9, 2008 - Saturday - 1:33 AM [Reply to this]

	THE TAO OF SHISA BRI ॐॐॐ	them are some damn funky boots! Luv it!   Posted by THE TAO OF SHISA BRI ॐॐॐ on August 8, 2008 - Friday - 10:56 PM [Reply to this]

	Elly Funky Boots	LOL :)   Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 9, 2008 - Saturday - 1:33 AM [Reply to this]

	Elly Funky Boots	Hi. Thanks, Mike. I see I did mess it up so I'll have to rework it this weekend, but it was fun to try. xoxo   Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 9, 2008 - Saturday - 12:46 PM [Reply to this]

	D J MYKE & The Boombox	You say, "I love you," in the grandest of ways.   Posted by D J MYKE & The Boombox on August 9, 2008 - Saturday - 6:50 AM [Reply to this]

	Elly Funky Boots	I do try. Hehe. Good to see you Mike. I will catch up to you soon.   Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 9, 2008 - Saturday - 12:46 PM [Reply to this]

	Profile Closed	*sighs* Just lovely...   Posted by Profile Closed on August 9, 2008 - Saturday - 9:44 PM [Reply to this]

	Elly Funky Boots	Awwww thank you Kate. I'm just reworking it now to get the rhyme scheme right so changing it up a bit. xoxo   Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 9, 2008 - Saturday - 10:07 PM [Reply to this]

	Elly Funky Boots	I had a fit getting this form into a half decent poem I tell you. There's still a line I need to changed, but well...my first pantoum attempt finally done. Next a sestina maybe. Love ya. Glad you're back and had fun.   Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 11, 2008 - Monday - 5:25 AM [Reply to this]

	Colleen Colleen Sperry	very passionate   Posted by Colleen on August 12, 2008 - Tuesday - 2:16 PM [Reply to this]

	Elly Funky Boots	Thanks Colleen. Hope you and Alba are having lots of fun. xoxo   Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 12, 2008 - Tuesday - 3:31 PM [Reply to this]

	Martin Martin Janis	You did it!!!!!!!!!!!, WOOT!, this is AMAZING. I can't believe I didn't see this before now, but it doesn't surprise me that it turned out such a romantic tale, perfectly written, nor that this was never beyond your talent. Well done, Ms Elly, you outdo yourself in every aspect with this awesome offering, the best pantoum I have read to date. hugs Mxx   Posted by Martin on August 13, 2008 - Wednesday - 11:05 PM [Reply to this]

	Elly Funky Boots	Awwwwww Martin thank you and it's so good to see you back. xoxo   Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 13, 2008 - Wednesday - 11:07 PM [Reply to this]