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Gender: Female
Sign: Scorpio

Country: US
August 10, 2008 - Sunday 

Current mood:  cooky/wacky
Category: Writing and Poetry

Just having a little fun riffing with David. Hehe.

David

 

That's Amore

The moon broke through
The shredding clouds,
Lifting its cape,
Its dull gray shroud,
Revealed us on the stones
Romancing,
I held you close,
You stumbled, dancing;

Why must you wear
Those clunky shoes,
I taste your lips,
Your tongue intrudes;
Your heel steps on
My sandaled toe,
You move too fast,
You move too slow;

Is it because
You are so short,
That to these high heels
You resort;
Or is it because
I am so tall;
Your clunky shoes
Make us fall.

They aren't sexy
They aren't smart,
I step forward,
Your knees do part;
I spin you out
And then around,
I find us lying
On the ground;

Why not flats
My little munchkin?
Don't wear those clodhoppers
To the luncheon,
Lest when standing
At the buffet,
You trip and fall
Into your tray.

 Bought these funky boots
At the church bizarre
Damn moonlight,
That's amore and shooting star
I think I'll just spit you
 Right back into the sky
Just lost the most ever
Tall, dark , handsome guy.

Our midnight rendezvous
It was a dance disaster
There goes the dream,
No happily ever after
Lost my footing
 Trying to act sexy and tall
Now my date
 Has a damn broken toe and all.

My funky boots
Well tonight they must go,
But when it comes to dancing
Barefoot... I'm a pro
I wonder if my sandaled prince
 Will give me another chance
So I can show him once and for all
How I really dance.

Mi amore, I forgive your heels,
As I hobble on my shaky crutches,
I should have side-stepped when you wheeled,
I too happy in your clutches;

You're just so cute, my little Gidget,
So lithe and slim and I still spry,
I never thought I'd love a midget,
But with those boots I thought I'd try.

My height I see caused the trouble,
You really are not to blame,
Let's lie here quietly in the rubble,
While I think of ways to forget the pain.

by David and Elly

 

 

 

Currently listening:
Italian Love Songs
By Dean Martin
Release date: 2001-08-28
Ruggi

 
FRIST??? :O
 
Posted by Ruggi on August 10, 2008 - Sunday - 3:40 PM
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Elly Funky Boots

 
Absolutely.

:P

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Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 10, 2008 - Sunday - 4:06 PM
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Ruggi

 
Ahhhh nothing beats a good clumsy romancing...! :D
 
Posted by Ruggi on August 10, 2008 - Sunday - 3:43 PM
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Elly Funky Boots

 
And I'm an expert at clumsy. LOLOL
 
Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 10, 2008 - Sunday - 4:07 PM
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Jimmy B

 
hehehe

Always Fun Elly

Skuishy Hugs
 
Posted by Jimmy B on August 10, 2008 - Sunday - 3:49 PM
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Elly Funky Boots

 
Hehehe hi Jimmy, my bud who always makes me smile.
:)
xoxo
 
Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 10, 2008 - Sunday - 4:08 PM
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SILVER SURFER

 
just dont step on my blue shade shoes lol now that was funky boots and David enjoyed a lot good write
 
Posted by SILVER SURFER on August 10, 2008 - Sunday - 3:49 PM
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Elly Funky Boots

 
LOLOL I'll try not to but can't promise anything.


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Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 10, 2008 - Sunday - 4:12 PM
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Mountain Womyn

 
I love this! Charming charming work!
 
Posted by Mountain Womyn on August 10, 2008 - Sunday - 3:53 PM
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Elly Funky Boots

 
Hey girl, where are your funky boots?
LOL
Thanks. So good to see you here.


xoxo
 
Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 10, 2008 - Sunday - 4:13 PM
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Nina

 
LOL... It is so funny ..because when I read the title to your poem, that very song with Dean Martin started playing in my head.. and some of the chodhoppers I have seen the young girls wear.. always have me wonder how the can even walk in them let alone dance LOL

That was a cute and fun read..
 
Posted by Nina on August 10, 2008 - Sunday - 4:31 PM
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Elly Funky Boots

 
LOLOL I knew it had to be this song for this piece you know...
I dunno how they dance in those...maybe lots of broken toes.
So glad you got a laugh from this.

Love ya, Nina.
 
Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 10, 2008 - Sunday - 4:41 PM
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Lissa
Lissa Parker

 
this is so nice, gave me a giggle so it did, wonderful you two together. you did a wonderful job:)
 
Posted by Lissa on August 10, 2008 - Sunday - 4:54 PM
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Elly Funky Boots

 
It was just one of those accidental collabs ya know. Great fun.
Glad you enjoyed it, Miss Lissa.

xoxo
 
Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 10, 2008 - Sunday - 5:35 PM
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Colleen has Faith
Colleen Cooper

 
COOL I'm 7th! The number of perfection! haha

This was a stupendous collaboration!~ You guys did a great job! Fun to read and now, I must say, that if I were allowed to wear "heeled" shoes, I'd ask to borrow them myself!

Great fun!!!

blessings and hugs!
 
Posted by Colleen has Faith on August 10, 2008 - Sunday - 5:33 PM
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Elly Funky Boots

 
Hehehe I will lend them to you when the day comes.
Number 7 is my favorite number after number 1. :)

xoxoxoXO
 
Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 10, 2008 - Sunday - 5:36 PM
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Profile Closed

 
This totally made me smile! :D
 
Posted by Profile Closed on August 10, 2008 - Sunday - 5:55 PM
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Elly Funky Boots

 
I'm glad it did.
:)

xoxoxoXO
 
Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 10, 2008 - Sunday - 6:13 PM
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kingpapaj

 
LOL, love the funky boots! xoxo
 
Posted by kingpapaj on August 10, 2008 - Sunday - 6:39 PM
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Elly Funky Boots

 
(((king)))
LOL thank you.
Pretty funky huh?
 
Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 11, 2008 - Monday - 12:58 AM
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Spiderboots

 
That made me smile! Wish i had the balance for wearing heels, everytime i try i look like a toddler learning to walk! Only 5 ft aswell so i need them! Love your user pic btw.
 
Posted by Spiderboots on August 10, 2008 - Sunday - 6:55 PM
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Elly Funky Boots

 
OMG I love your boots...Woohoo...
LOL

xoxo
 
Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 11, 2008 - Monday - 1:15 AM
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Monique

 
Love the boots.
 
Posted by Monique on August 10, 2008 - Sunday - 7:18 PM
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Elly Funky Boots

 
Thanks, Miss Monique.

xoxo
 
Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 11, 2008 - Monday - 1:27 AM
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Tyler Myrth

 
Wonderful wit runs through this. *smiling*

I can't imagine why, but now I'm getting the imagine of Scarlett dancing on the cowboys feet in Four Weddings and...
 
Posted by Tyler Myrth on August 10, 2008 - Sunday - 8:07 PM
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Elly Funky Boots

 
Hahaha Tyler. Too funny.

xoxo
 
Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 11, 2008 - Monday - 1:28 AM
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Janet

 
Love it!!!!!!!!!!! I have the same problem, clunky heels to add more than the needed few inches of height!

Nice write.
 
Posted by Janet on August 10, 2008 - Sunday - 8:19 PM
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Elly Funky Boots

 
Tough being short I tell you.
Good to see you, Janet.

xoxo
 
Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 11, 2008 - Monday - 1:29 AM
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Easy Rog ;)

 
Milton 1645

Haste thee, Nymph, and bring with thee
Jest, and youthful Jollity,
Quips and cranks and wanton wiles,
Nods and becks and wreathed smiles
Such as hang on Hebe’s cheek,
And love to live in dimple sleek;
Sport that wrinkled Care derides,
And Laughter holding both his sides.
Come, and trip it, as you go,
On the light fantastic toe;
And in thy right hand lead with thee
The mountain-nymph, sweet Liberty;
And, if I give thee honour due,
Mirth, admit me of thy crew,
To live with her, and live with thee,
In unreproved pleasures free ...

:)
 
Posted by Easy Rog ;) on August 11, 2008 - Monday - 12:58 AM
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Elly Funky Boots

 
To hear the Lark begin his flight,
And singing startle the dull night,
From his watch-towre in the skies,
Till the dappled dawn doth rise;
Then to com in spight of sorrow
And at my window bid good morrow,
Through the Sweet-Briar, or the Vine,
Or the twisted Eglantine.


:)
 
Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 11, 2008 - Monday - 1:33 AM
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Elly Funky Boots

 
Oh and thanks for the new boots, Easy.
:)
 
Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 11, 2008 - Monday - 5:05 AM
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Elly Funky Boots

 
Yes you know the shoe dilemma well....
;)
Good to see you, shoe sister.


xoxox
 
Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 11, 2008 - Monday - 5:04 AM
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Elly Funky Boots

 
Thanks Mike.
:)
 
Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 11, 2008 - Monday - 12:09 PM
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Angie

 
I love this write. Absolutely fantastic.
 
Posted by Angie on August 11, 2008 - Monday - 2:58 PM
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Elly Funky Boots

 
Thanks girl.

xoxoxo
 
Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 11, 2008 - Monday - 3:00 PM
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kellet

 
I would prefer the bare foot variety of your step...... ; )

fun write.
 
Posted by kellet on August 11, 2008 - Monday - 8:09 PM
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Elly Funky Boots

 
LOLOL me too I think.
Thanks. Had fun writing something lighthearted.
 
Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 11, 2008 - Monday - 8:14 PM
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Linda...

 
Witty and fun Elly...... :) and a hug
 
Posted by Linda... on August 11, 2008 - Monday - 10:22 PM
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Elly Funky Boots

 
Thanks Linda. Glad you enjoyed it.

xoxo
 
Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 12, 2008 - Tuesday - 1:17 AM
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"Dreamer"

 
i love this it is so refreshingly cute hee hee hee giggle giggle thank you for the smile.
 
Posted by "Dreamer" on August 12, 2008 - Tuesday - 2:24 AM
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Elly Funky Boots

 
:) I like to do fun cheery ones when I can.

Good to see you.

xoxo
 
Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 12, 2008 - Tuesday - 4:48 AM
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Lainey

 
Ok I am all over the board but catching up slowly..
HAAHAHAHHAHHA
This is so very funny Elly.
Too cute.

I giggled. and giggled again.
Thanks for the smiles.

And... you called LIsa a shoe sister. TOO FUNNY!
xoxo
Love you
Elaine
 
Posted by Lainey on August 12, 2008 - Tuesday - 7:03 PM
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Elly Funky Boots

 
Yeah it was just one of those accidently collabs that was just too funny not to post. David cracked me up with this one. I'm glad it brought smiles. I so think my friends would enjoy his poetry. He does a wide range so well.

Love you and boy am I ever glad you're home.

xoxo
 
Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 12, 2008 - Tuesday - 10:01 PM
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Martin
Martin Janis

 
This made me smile a LOT, I have been missing smiles lately, thank you for those Elly.

nice collab of conversation between two in rhyme ha ha, I loved this concept, it's different, fresh and funny. sensible shoes are the way to go, Being tall is way over-rated.

hugs
Mxx
 
Posted by Martin on August 13, 2008 - Wednesday - 11:12 PM
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Elly Funky Boots

 
I'm glad it brought a smile. I needed one too and I'm sure lots of other friends feel the same way. Hang in there Martin.

Love ya
 
Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 13, 2008 - Wednesday - 11:13 PM
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