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Last Updated: 8/29/2008

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Gender: Female
Sign: Scorpio

Country: US
August 20, 2008 - Wednesday 

Current mood:  focused
Category: Writing and Poetry

 

 

Sweet Torment

Dark eyed feral
Leave me not bleak
This day of my death
Six times a day
I chase you
In the labyrinth
Of my mind,
Weak still
With memories
That pander
Sweet torment, just,
Of the seed
You once spilled
Upon my fragile heart
Now
Weeping
Wasting
Wanton
Again
For you

by Elly

 

Walk the Word by Charla

This one I did is from a contest/challenge over at Charla's. The key is to use all five assigned words and this was my attempt. Was fun trying anyway... Give it a go if you're interested.

Pander      Feral      Bleak       Just      Six

Currently listening:
Kiss from a Rose
By Seal
Release date: 1996-11-21
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DejaVoodoos™

 
Beautiful sense of returning to once hurt....
 
Posted by DejaVoodoos™ on August 20, 2008 - Wednesday - 12:33 PM
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Elly Funky Boots

 
Thank you DV.

xoxo
 
Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 20, 2008 - Wednesday - 12:42 PM
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kingpapaj

 
I would say you did a wonderful job, for what ever that is worth. Gee.... do I like those boots.

Hope you enjoyed the dancing and ice cream on the beach last night.
 
Posted by kingpapaj on August 20, 2008 - Wednesday - 12:57 PM
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Elly Funky Boots

 
I always enjoy dancing and ice cream.

:)
 
Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 20, 2008 - Wednesday - 1:55 PM
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Easy Rog ;)

 
Dramatic. A sightly different voice for you. The chalenge effect lol. Anyway good stuff.

Rog ;)
 
Posted by Easy Rog ;) on August 20, 2008 - Wednesday - 1:21 PM
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Elly Funky Boots

 
Yeah those words were not easy to put into a poem. This was the best way I could think to go with them.
Good to see you this morning, Rog.
 
Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 20, 2008 - Wednesday - 1:56 PM
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rusky
Russell Ayres

 
That is a well used challenge Elly l r.

 
Posted by rusky on August 20, 2008 - Wednesday - 2:31 PM
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Elly Funky Boots

 
Thank you Mr. Rusky.

xoxo
 
Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 20, 2008 - Wednesday - 2:37 PM
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Inner Beauty
Inner Beauty

 
Six times a day
I chase you
In the labyrinth
Of my mind

I love that line....and boy, do I know that twisted trail!!! Great challenge response, Elly!
IB =)
 
Posted by Inner Beauty on August 20, 2008 - Wednesday - 3:29 PM
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Elly Funky Boots

 
Thanks sistah poetess.
I loved your last one. Beautiful.

xoxo
 
Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 20, 2008 - Wednesday - 5:34 PM
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Monique

 
You have incorporated the five words effectively.
Kudos.
 
Posted by Monique on August 20, 2008 - Wednesday - 3:43 PM
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Elly Funky Boots

 
Thank you Ms. Monique.

xoxo
 
Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 20, 2008 - Wednesday - 5:34 PM
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Elly Funky Boots

 
Thank you. Good to see you here, Terry.
 
Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 21, 2008 - Thursday - 12:51 AM
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Janet

 
Impressive, with such a challenge of words.

xox
 
Posted by Janet on August 20, 2008 - Wednesday - 9:48 PM
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Elly Funky Boots

 
Hi Janet. Thanks so much.

xoxo
 
Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 21, 2008 - Thursday - 12:51 AM
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Elly Funky Boots

 
Thank you, Mike.

Have a great evening.

xoxo
 
Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 21, 2008 - Thursday - 12:52 AM
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Scotorum (Another Pre-Traumatic Stress Victim)

 
A great write, Elly, one which so many can relate to one way or the other. I'm always struck in your poems by the depth of the feelings portrayed.
 
Posted by Scotorum (Another Pre-Traumatic Stress Victim) on August 21, 2008 - Thursday - 12:19 AM
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Elly Funky Boots

 
I'm afraid I'm usually in emotional overload, my friend.
Thanks, Bob. It always brings me a smile to see you here.
:)
 
Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 21, 2008 - Thursday - 12:55 AM
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ღ The Book of Ruthy ღ

 
very nicely done...isn't sweet torment the best kind? ;)
 
Posted by ღ The Book of Ruthy ღ on August 21, 2008 - Thursday - 12:55 AM
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Elly Funky Boots

 
Sometimes, yeah. Hehe.
Good to see you, Ruthy.
 
Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 21, 2008 - Thursday - 1:18 AM
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Tyler Myrth

 
Wonderful write, very smooth use of the prompts and loads of emotion.
 
Posted by Tyler Myrth on August 21, 2008 - Thursday - 2:13 AM
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Elly Funky Boots

 
Thanks, Tyler. I'll catch up to read your latest soon.
 
Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 21, 2008 - Thursday - 4:15 AM
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Eusthacia

 
oh my, I love the tone and strength of this, moon sistah, you outdo yourself!
 
Posted by Eusthacia on August 21, 2008 - Thursday - 3:08 AM
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Elly Funky Boots

 
((((Anna))))
Thank you so much, sistah.

Love ya
 
Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 21, 2008 - Thursday - 4:16 AM
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Ravin~Never More *LWHP*

 
Excellent crafting in this challenge my friend!! You rock! love this !

XO
 
Posted by Ravin~Never More *LWHP* on August 21, 2008 - Thursday - 3:41 AM
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Elly Funky Boots

 
That you sister Ravin. My what an avatar!!! Promise of a fun day at the Pub I bet. LOL

xoxo
 
Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 21, 2008 - Thursday - 4:18 AM
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Handlebar Hammer
steve barham

 
Dang labyrinthez!
 
Posted by Handlebar Hammer on August 21, 2008 - Thursday - 3:51 AM
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Elly Funky Boots

 
:)
Good to see you.
 
Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 21, 2008 - Thursday - 4:18 AM
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D J MYKE & The Boombox

 
You got all caught up in a bad cocoon here, and you can't get out.

I really love where you took this.

You owned the five words.
 
Posted by D J MYKE & The Boombox on August 21, 2008 - Thursday - 4:31 AM
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Elly Funky Boots

 
"Caught up in a bad cocoon" now that's poetic.
Thanks Mike.

xoxo
 
Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 21, 2008 - Thursday - 4:33 AM
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Kellet

 
I feel ya, sweet torment indeed.. ; )
 
Posted by Kellet on August 21, 2008 - Thursday - 4:30 PM
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Elly Funky Boots

 
:)
 
Posted by Elly Funky Boots on August 21, 2008 - Thursday - 5:47 PM
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