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Gender: Female
Status: Single
Age: 99
Sign: Gemini

City: United Kingdom
State: California
Country: US
Signup Date: 7/18/2006

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Thursday, August 16, 2007 

Current mood:  enthralled
Category: Romance and Relationships


The Paramour's decry !

I obsecrate you withstand, forsake nigh from me,
Nought, Yield nigh the snare of emancipation's portal freely,
Withrawn,adrift  along its fuss ferocity,
Hearth I shall fostered with my shield
Hearth ,I will ample ,with sense of quiescent ,
But feast it not as your serfage,
Adieu nigh my ardor's fate and deliverance clemency,
acquiesce and tame you with release and emancipation,
Shall  then you  surmise and submit,
With You I am destined to dwell
Destined to nest ,to dwell myself ,
With you my beloved ,i perpetuated
My Unchained Love

Eliza ( author)
copyright by Eliza
Allrights Reserved
(This poetry is property by the author and may not be reproduced)
8/07

Fribbles

 
Very beautiful and moving.

Mr. Fribbles almost feels lifted, as if he were moved outside of himself. As if his soul was freed from the bonds that are his flesh, and liberated to follow the wind wherever it blows him...

And spun around in the ether.

Except being a monkey, Mr. Fribbles doesn't understand it.

But that's ok, he's just a monkey.

F.
 
Posted by Fribbles on Thursday, August 16, 2007 - 6:12 AM
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Fred
Fred Wilson

 
Eliza you never cease to amaze me ,just when I think I knw a little about you ??????????????????. You are absolutely the star of my life. If you would like to go dancing Fri. or Sat. night call me .Pechangas not that far,.Love you, Fred
 
Posted by Fred on Thursday, August 16, 2007 - 10:14 AM
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Fribbles

 
Ok, one last time: Pechanga over Mr. Fribbles' HAIRY, FURRY, SIMIAN, 30% POST-CONSUMER RECYCYLED MATERIALS ASS!!
 
Posted by Fribbles on Saturday, August 18, 2007 - 1:30 AM
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danieljenkins photographer

 
i'm speechless.... wow...

beautiful...
 
Posted by danieljenkins photographer on Friday, August 31, 2007 - 4:34 AM
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Bill Reveles

 
E,
Have you ever written any words for me? Or was I smart to run before family would have been taken from me. It appears that from your elegant words for another my intuition was the shrewdest gift of all. I am a vagabond heart, I have a muddy shirt and a Monday smile. I can never be prepared to share something I thought to be a falling of flesh that one can only surrender when the heart is locked and tagged.

Did I escape or was I thrown to fall on the hardest of mattress.
 
Posted by Bill Reveles on Sunday, September 23, 2007 - 7:47 PM
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Will

 
I hope you are collecting your writings to compile into a book... No publisher with even the slightest inkling of intelligence would refuse to publish it. With you beloved one I would love to carry this one to the greatness you deserve...
-WC
 
Posted by Will on Saturday, September 29, 2007 - 4:52 PM
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Red Recordings

 
As beautiful as you are I think we would just be taken with your presence, this is kind of deep, it will take me a few minutes to really dissect it, know what I mean, but I Like it too!...O.K I think it is definitely a cry for Love, but as I already have said, I have your answer and it aint necessarily me. Whenever you are ready. You may even call me.
 
Posted by Red Recordings on Tuesday, February 05, 2008 - 6:46 AM
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danny

 
My Dearest Eliza;

I am hypnotized by your command of the English language and you ability to make it say using small rhetoric to accomplish such a cry from a loved one to her paramour crying out for him to recognize her love for him.Like I told you before,I know a publishing company to which I want to submit your unique other poetic creations to astound him with the talent and ability you have.
YOU WILL GET THE RECOGNITION THAT YOU DESERVE!!DON'T STOP,ELIZA,CREATING YOUR PROSE!!....Your NEW poetic admirer...Danny.
P.S....If my Columbia College English Professor.Mark Van Doren, was still alive,he would become devotee of yours,and I say this with all sincerity I can muster.Love,and take care,and waiting for your next masterpiece....XXX'X to you from your Boston Paramour.
 
Posted by danny on Thursday, February 28, 2008 - 3:59 AM
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