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Larry Winfield


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Gender: Male
Status: Divorced
Age: 102
Sign: Libra

City: LOS ANGELES
State: California
Country: US
Signup Date: 7/18/2006

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Monday, March 19, 2007 

Category: Writing and Poetry

Crossroads

in the city, it's hard work finding a crossroads -
the right mix of magic and
midnight desolation;
my friend from
New Orleans, John Sinclair, told me how
(never mind where it is)....
when the time was right, i sat on a pair of
plastic milk crates next to a dead fire hydrant,
pretended to work on a piece.
didn't hear her walk up,
didn't ask her name
didn't have to.
she said "read me something about being in love
and being alone."
i started, and she opened her throat,
poured music over the words -
tear-stained siren song,
stung my eyes, burned a hole in my chest.
she held my head, pressed my ear to her stomach
but i kept going till the words ran out and i started over
and the MUSIC
(god, her hands were warm)
the music
(on my neck, wet like tongues)
the music....
our voices mated, fused, faded to whispers.
stopped.
we slowly untangled,
she strolled off into the night, heels tapping,
my fingerprints on her legs
my face wet from her song.
with each step the city intruded,
filled the vacuum with noise and stench
till it wasn't my corner anymore.
it was hard work finding this crossroads
but i got a cab, moved on.
never mind where it    was.



 
Bravo...I have been at a loss to find a word that aptly describes your writing and I have decided that the appropriate word is "sultry." Sensuality clings to each of your word pictures like dew on the grass in the morning. For example:  "(god, her hands were warm)...
...(on my neck, wet like tongues)"

And the passage that became a film in my mind:
"
she strolled off into the night, heels tapping,
my fingerprints on her legs
my face wet from her song.
with each step the city intruded,
filled the vacuum with noise and stench
till it wasn't my corner anymore."


I felt that as I read it. Wonderful.

 
Posted by on Monday, March 19, 2007 - 1:22 AM
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african blue

 
Excellent, what else is there to say?
 
Posted by african blue on Monday, March 19, 2007 - 6:51 PM
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purpledogstar
Purple Dogstar

 
I like your style.
 
Posted by purpledogstar on Saturday, April 07, 2007 - 6:37 PM
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Jane

 
This is superb
 
Posted by Jane on Friday, May 18, 2007 - 3:40 PM
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CarolinaBlu
Marlene Elisabeth Lennon

 
purely awesome . . .

marlene elisabeth
 
Posted by CarolinaBlu on Monday, May 28, 2007 - 5:37 AM
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