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Ian Williams


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Gender: Male
Status: In a Relationship
Age: 39
Sign: Pisces

Country: UK
Signup Date: 7/18/2006
Monday, September 29, 2008 

Current mood:  artistic
Some poetry for a change:

DAWN CHORUS


Awake

Life takes a swipe at me with morning's spoon

And bitter the taste

 

Snap

Then crack the bones to roar with raking stretch

A little further this time

 

From the dark

Reality whispers

"Come on!

You've been expecting this

You are still you

And you are still sad

What more was there to expect?"

 

And?

…and I sigh.

 

How dark the night?

How far away?

Too far behind

So it would seem

 

I breathe

It is taken in

 

The dawn

Again, with mocking nod

Does its worst

And dawns upon me

 

Knock, knock

This is it

This is it

Again

 

Good Morning!

Good morning?

PhotoPopp
Photo Popp

 

is this one of your own? if so, quite good sir, quite good....

some poetry i come across is absolute tat, but this, i like!


 
Posted by PhotoPopp on Thursday, May 28, 2009 - 11:19 AM
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Ian Williams

 
Hello! Yes - this is one of mine. Very kind of you. I feel it needs some re-work towards the middle and end), however I am happy with the kick off!

Mainly do performance poetry - check out Dust 2 Dust (the tune on my profile) and Up North (the video).

Cheers

AYM / Ian

 
Posted by AYM on Thursday, May 28, 2009 - 1:31 PM
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Ian Williams

 
There - I've even edited it a bit!!!



 
Posted by AYM on Thursday, May 28, 2009 - 1:37 PM
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