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Tuesday, June 23, 2009 

Current mood:  blissful
His locks were long-down to his back,
He looked like he worked out everyday
He stopped at my feet in his taxi cab
And asked, “Montego Bay?”
 
I got in and began to stare
At his incredibly stunning frame
Imagining things I could do to him,
Then he asked me my name
 
Before long, we were in conversation
About what we liked and where we were from
We chatted as though we were alone in the car
Until I reached my destination
 
Reluctantly, I got out of the car
And said, “It was nice meeting you,”
He asked, “Can I see you again sometime?”
I asked, “How much do I owe you?”
 
He said, “Don’t worry, the fare is on me
I feel like you’re already my friend,”
I said, “Ok, thanks for the ride
Maybe we will meet again.”
 
The following day around the same time
I saw his car coming down the street
He stopped before I could put out my hand
And I breathed a sigh of relief
 
Very little could I do to hide
The broad smile I had on my face
I hadn’t been so excited in a while,
My heart had begun to race
 
I swallowed and said, “So how are you?
I see you’re alone this time,”
He replied, “I purposely didn’t pick up anyone;
Now that I see you, I’m doing fine.”
 
“So where are you headed today?” he asked,
“I’ll take you wherever you want.”
“I’m already there, are you surprised?
I had nothing else planned.”
 
With that, he took his eyes off the road,
Turned sideways and looked straight at me
“Wow, I feel really lucky today,”
And then we crashed into a tree.
 
The good thing is that we were not going fast
So neither of us was hurt
A bit shaken up, “What luck!” I said,
He replied, “It could have been worse.”
 
“Are you okay?” a passerby asked,
We called back, “Yes thanks, we’re doing alright,”
We got out to see what damage there was
Thankfully, only one broken light
 
“You see what your beautiful face has caused?”
He asked jokingly then I shook my head
“Don’t blame it on the woman now,”
And I really meant what I said.
 
“So now that we’ve been through so much
May I ask you out for a drink?”
“Sure you may go ahead and ask
But I’ll say ‘no’ is what I think
 
Being sober, you managed to drive
Your car into a tree
So if we were to have a drink,
You’d probably end up killing me
 
I had fun, don’t think I did not
This surely doesn’t happen every day
I’ll definitely have a funny story to tell,”
Then I turned to walk away
 
He then proceeded to explain
That everyone makes mistakes
And that he deserved a second chance,
One I should be willing to take
 
So I turned around and said, “okay,
But after the drink, I will drive
Don’t think I’m doing it for you alone;
Things go around in life.”
 
With that, we got back into the car
And drove to a bar on the seaside
We drank Dragon Stouts and shared a spliff
Until around a quarter to five
 
“So tell me more about yourself,
Are you seeing anyone?”
“Actually yes, kind of,” he said,
“Well, I was seeing a real good woman.”
 
“And what caused you to break up?
Did the good woman break your heart?”
“Sort of but it really is my fault
Why we’re still apart
 
She did something that caused me to be
Very disappointed in her
And she asked me for a second chance –
One I’m not sure she deserves.”
 
“Well, do you want to know what I think?”
“Yes, of course,” he replied.
I said, “Everything that happened since we met
Is to get her back in your life
 
You are trying to be with me –
A woman you don’t even know
And I bet you’re really just acting out
Of anger and being on the rebound
 
See, I gave you a second chance
After you crashed into the tree
I think you should do the same for her
I’d want someone to do that for me.”
 
“Maybe you’re right,” is what he said,
“But I really do like you.”
“Of course you do, I am your friend
Now go do what you have to do.”
 
“She’ll want to know what happened to the car.”
“So? Just tell her the truth,
I’m sure it won’t matter much to her
As long as she’s back with you.”
 
He said, “Thanks, let me take you back home,”
I replied, “No, it’s okay,
Just keep your eyes on the road
And get to your woman safe.”
 
And so for about an hour or two
I walked alone on the sand
And thought about what had happened that day
And why I had met that man
 
He might’ve thought that I had been
A blessing, an angel to him
But he had been an angel to me,
I’ll tell you what I mean
 
If things didn't happen the way they did
We’d most likely have had a one night stand
And so I felt really fulfilled
With the kind of evening we had
 
I had also recently been
A victim of a broken heart
And I had promised to make as many men pay
For the pain my ex had wrought
 
But with the hitting of the tree,
I lost the desire I had
And from that day, I haven’t had
Another one night stand


Written by: Ruth-Ann Brown
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www.mystiquebluegallery.com

 
This is a great poem :-)

 
Posted by www.mystiquebluegallery.com on Tuesday, June 23, 2009 - 6:45 PM
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RUTH-ANN BROWN

 
Thanks Keri K :-)
 
Posted by RUTH-ANN BROWN on Tuesday, June 23, 2009 - 6:47 PM
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Bianca

 
I like :) 10 points! I guess you just gotta take what u can get out of a situation hey :)
 
Posted by Bianca on Tuesday, June 23, 2009 - 6:46 PM
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RUTH-ANN BROWN

 
Thanks for reading, Bianca :-)
 
Posted by RUTH-ANN BROWN on Tuesday, June 23, 2009 - 6:47 PM
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Adideva
Adideva Maharaj

 
Very Good peoetry RUTH ,1 million percent !!!!! lol that was great poetry lol!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Posted by Adideva on Wednesday, June 24, 2009 - 12:25 AM
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RUTH-ANN BROWN

 
Thanks Adideva. Glad u enjoyed it :-)
 
Posted by RUTH-ANN BROWN on Wednesday, June 24, 2009 - 12:27 AM
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Sally

 
Nice!...It's take different situations for us to realize...well said!!!

 
Posted by Sally on Wednesday, June 24, 2009 - 12:25 AM
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RUTH-ANN BROWN

 
..Thanks Sally :-)..
 
Posted by RUTH-ANN BROWN on Wednesday, June 24, 2009 - 12:28 AM
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Ghetto Glamour

 
Easy to read, deeper meaning yet uplifting !
 
Posted by Ghetto Glamour on Wednesday, June 24, 2009 - 12:25 AM
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RUTH-ANN BROWN

 
Thanks for sharing :-)
 
Posted by RUTH-ANN BROWN on Wednesday, June 24, 2009 - 12:28 AM
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Dre

 
This I can relate to very sweet indeed Only difference for me though is that I fell for the "other" girl after my ex disappointed and things got more complicated now I lost a great friend Hope all is well with u though and loving jamdown as well Stay bless empress BLESS
 
Posted by Dre on Wednesday, June 24, 2009 - 1:47 PM
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RUTH-ANN BROWN

 
Hey Dre, <br /><br />Don't beat urself up too much...those things happen to the best of us, but I do hope u'll be able to regain ur lost friendship. Thanks for reading and commenting. Happy u like Jamdown. One love!
 
Posted by RUTH-ANN BROWN on Wednesday, June 24, 2009 - 1:49 PM
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Warren

 
..I very much enjoyed this. Perhaps the lyrics would make for a good song?
Well written Ruth..
 
Posted by Warren on Friday, June 26, 2009 - 2:57 PM
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RUTH-ANN BROWN

 
Thanks Warren. We'll see abt that.
 
Posted by RUTH-ANN BROWN on Friday, June 26, 2009 - 3:06 PM
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Kleber

 
Congratulations, Ruth. 
Good history. Even it can be argument for a film short length. 
Is it based on real facts? Or is fiction?
...... 

 
Posted by Kleber on Saturday, June 27, 2009 - 7:02 PM
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RUTH-ANN BROWN

 
It is fictitious.

 
Posted by RUTH-ANN BROWN on Saturday, June 27, 2009 - 7:03 PM
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Temwani

 
A lyk... Tz gr8 to knw u luk owt 4 pipo
 
Posted by Temwani on Sunday, June 28, 2009 - 4:17 PM
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RUTH-ANN BROWN

 
Thank you.

 
Posted by RUTH-ANN BROWN on Tuesday, June 30, 2009 - 1:02 AM
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Teecho Muzik

 
Wow, that was deep, I like it, two thumbs up!

 
Posted by Teecho Muzik on Tuesday, June 30, 2009 - 1:01 AM
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RUTH-ANN BROWN

 
Thanks.

 
Posted by RUTH-ANN BROWN on Tuesday, June 30, 2009 - 1:02 AM
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Garith
Garith Nunn

 
..Very interesting, some how alot of  try and find this love. Yet once we find it some times we dont have the guts to take what we think could  have been a great oppertuninty. ........Love .. lust and a burning desire to grab some one special even be it for a second is ..............
 
Posted by Garith on Saturday, July 04, 2009 - 9:43 PM
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RUTH-ANN BROWN

 
Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts on my blog, Garith.

 
Posted by RUTH-ANN BROWN on Thursday, July 09, 2009 - 12:11 AM
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'...INBEAT...'
'.INbeat.' '.International Beat.'

 
..Sounds like the makings of an interesting novel that gives voice to an abundance of talent and character...........Cheers and stick with, and to, all your artistic pusuits!........E.N...
 
Posted by '...INBEAT...' on Thursday, July 09, 2009 - 12:09 AM
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RUTH-ANN BROWN

 
Thank you, INBEAT.

 
Posted by RUTH-ANN BROWN on Thursday, July 09, 2009 - 12:12 AM
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Khira
Khira de Bod

 
WOW!!! This is really touching, I love it!!! 10/10
 
Posted by Khira on Thursday, July 09, 2009 - 4:00 PM
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RUTH-ANN BROWN

 
I'm happy you do, Khira. Thanks for reading ;-)

 
Posted by RUTH-ANN BROWN on Thursday, July 09, 2009 - 4:01 PM
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Dpoetic9

 
Very creative expression Ruth.. I never knew trees could be so un-lucky ;).. It reads like a short story and I could visualize the entire experience... Great Write!!
 
Posted by Dpoetic9 on Monday, July 13, 2009 - 8:34 PM
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RUTH-ANN BROWN

 
Thanks so much.

 
Posted by RUTH-ANN BROWN on Wednesday, July 15, 2009 - 1:08 AM
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Da Magnificentone
DAMAGNIFICENT ONE

 
....Maybe one night stands deserve a second chance lol.
....
 
Posted by Da Magnificentone on Saturday, July 25, 2009 - 12:11 AM
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Devonte

 
hi ruth was that a true story or a poem ethier way i love it
 
Posted by Devonte on Sunday, August 09, 2009 - 11:42 PM
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RUTH-ANN BROWN

 
Pure imagination, Devonte. Thanks though.
 
Posted by RUTH-ANN BROWN on Wednesday, August 12, 2009 - 4:32 PM
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brendalee

 
..Ilove that piece of writing it is really great..
 
Posted by brendalee on Monday, August 17, 2009 - 6:00 PM
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Kebra Ethiopia Sound

 
Love it! Keep up the Good works!
 
Posted by Kebra Ethiopia Sound on Monday, September 14, 2009 - 4:41 PM
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RUTH-ANN BROWN

 
Thanks KES!
 
Posted by RUTH-ANN BROWN on Thursday, September 24, 2009 - 2:06 PM
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