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Age: 20
Sign: Libra

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State: Missouri
Country: US
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December 2, 2007 - Sunday 

Category: Writing and Poetry
Somewhere in the world
a man gave his life today
for a woman whose face
he never saw
just to see her turn away
from demons she didn't know she had.

Somewhere in the world
a child died of hunger today
in a world full of food
in a world full of overweight people
simply because his nation
wasn't rich enough.

Somewhere in the world
A woman ran away today
from the burden of childhood
a burden she was forced to carry
by a cruel man she didn't know.

Somewhere in the world
a dog was beaten to death today
because his owner was incompetent and cruel
and though the dog loved his owner
until the last blow
his love for his master killed him
because it kept bringing him back.

Somewhere in the world
somebody lent their world to me today
just so I could see
what things I could achieve
if I let myself live.
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~♥Oakley♥~

 
<H3>In my opinion sweetie, for what it's worth.... THIS IS YOUR BEST ONE so far that I have read!!!! Awesome job!! I'm very proud of you for looking at life in this new way my friend!!

Hugs 2 you always sweetie ~Oakley
 
Posted by ~♥Oakley♥~ on November 29, 2007 - Thursday - 9:34 PM
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Wolfchild

 
*hug* Beautiful
 
Posted by Wolfchild on November 30, 2007 - Friday - 12:10 AM
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BC Beneke

 
This is a very mature piece. The duality of a lot of this is just really good. I might have to agree that it's the best thing you've written. At least the best thing I have seen from you in a long time.
 
Posted by BC Beneke on November 30, 2007 - Friday - 4:11 AM
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The Bloodstained Hurricane

 
very nice
 
Posted by The Bloodstained Hurricane on November 30, 2007 - Friday - 9:58 PM
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Takako
Takako Itoh

 
Yes, as your title, very good poem you created!
 
Posted by Takako on December 1, 2007 - Saturday - 10:57 AM
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Laura Ceri
Laura Kelly

 
I also agree that this is possibly the best you've ever composed: insightful, mature, complex, lyrical... Marvelous, my beloved sister!
 
Posted by Laura Ceri on December 3, 2007 - Monday - 1:47 AM
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R.senal

 
This is well done. I love the way you titled it with the parenthesis statement. The reader is supposed to decide that! :)

Cheers,
r.
 
Posted by R.senal on December 3, 2007 - Monday - 4:53 AM
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