MySpace

Photobucket


Wednesday, July 02, 2008 

Current mood:  determined
Category: Writing and Poetry

Photobucket

Acrostic Collection

"Silence Reigns with Blood"

MedusavsPerseus.jpg


(M)edusa's sinister strands, they slanted Perseus' eyes of wide wonder-heart shaped heads slither in and out of stone pillars...

(E)nergy trembled through a vague hero, questioning his understanding of sanity-a warm salty droplet untimely splashes...

(D)ivided in secret no more, for an echoing alert sounds-her devilish pace quickens to a hunt...

(U)nder dank moonlight, savage forked tongues tasted warm flesh-his cool blade unsheaths with deadly ease...

(S)ilence reigns with blood, a flicker of justice sparks-her ghastly head of a hundred temptations fell...

(A)nother thrill, another chill, just... another... kill... for a mythological hero.

All hail Perseus!

Photobucket

______________________________________________________

(D)evilish pain spins loose the velvet nuts and candy bolts-her dainty heart speeds to near explosion...

(A) sinister countdown ticks while demons whisper in her ear-the melting of a chocolately love has begun...

(M)agical moments in time seem lost forever in Hell's kitchen-Lucifer furiously chops up the final fruits of her hope...   

(N)ever has her life been so dank, lonely and saturated with sorrow-secretly she loves this genre, lessening the weight of a horrific fate...

(W)ith fever pitch, the devil scatters chopped memories across a puddle of melted passion-Paradise drops to her loosened knees...

(H)ell always has a place for broken hearts, fueling the hate of demons-never has a woman stoked the flames so high as Paradise...

(Y)oung Paradise must deny the devil's feast, finding a cold chill that will freeze her pain-Angels not wanting to scream, "Damn... WHY?"

______________________________________________________

"Razor's Edge"

(R)idicule and praise, they walk bloody hand in gloved hand.  The sick irony is that the illusion of friendship is really a two sided blade-a razor's edge glistening... 

(A)mber rage rapidly boiled up from the knifed depths of a man's bleeding soul, knowing his best friend's words were mere lies-one bloody hand was quick to use a blade...

(Z)odiac signs whispered warnings to Scorpius, now wounded on shaking knees.  He ignorantly ignored all his aquired knowledge of the stars-a bearded Sagittarian, with blood dripping hands, sinisterly laughs in the thundering distance... 

(O)ut of the weapons chamber comes Scorpius' stinger, uncoiling in silence for retaliation-vengeance instead will now walk with the gloved hand... 

(R)apidly, the venom flows through hundreds of puncture wounds.  Sagittarius' whitening flesh sucks up the toxic cerium-a clanking razor bounces off the stone floor, flinging blood about, just before the bulging eyes and trembling tongue follow...

_____________________________________________________________

"ANGER"

(A)bsolute rage thunders across a mirrored gaze-the tyrant's eyes pierce his lone wolf's concentration on the enemy...  

(N)ightfall delivers a heavy smoke haze-through the crisp wind comes a wailing beast of mad suffering...    

(G)ranted power from below becomes a maze-which fury shall he use to defeat the approaching foe? 

(E)ngulfing fear is an all out craze-an addiction that forces all tyrants to act...

(R)ivalries live within a daze-anger explodes into bloody war...

With this type of strategy...

no one wins.

______________________________________________________

"Death"

In pain, I fall asleep in the doctor's office...

(D)ivine encounters, desired in the third kind, seem to evade our deepest prayers-our daily existence may be of a most shallow nature...  

(E)ternal life, an illuminated void expanding beside a Lord and Savior, is full of holy rope-souls climbing furiously to escape damnation below... 

(A)mber smoke rises, burning up fraying twine, amidst the dirty whirlwind of doubters-a thunderous laugh echoes below...

(T)ime and space, a complex and unsafe dimension, provides this opportunistic haven-Jesus calls out with hymns and light as swinging souls scream... 

(H)eaven and Hell, legendary destinations of the wounded soul, continually battle for our company-death of the physical body is our only gateway as we climb the burning ropes of faith...

I awaken to learn of my dire sickness.  I pray I have the strength, before I die, to make it to the top.  My rope is burning...   

T.D. Mitchell
Tina Diane

 
Favorite line: Lucifer furiously chops up the final fruits of her hope...
 
Posted by T.D. Mitchell on Friday, April 04, 2008 - 1:29 AM
[Reply to this
Clash at Creeden: Cypher 8 of the C.C.R.
Scorpius Blood

 
Tina, that is my favorite line as well! Thank you for commenting.
Photobucket
 
Posted by Clash at Creeden: Cypher 8 of the C.C.R. on Saturday, April 05, 2008 - 4:18 PM
[Reply to this
Clash at Creeden: Cypher 8 of the C.C.R.
Scorpius Blood

 
Jon, I will take your advice! I enjoyed the honesty. Hurry back!
Scorpius
Photobucket
 
Posted by Clash at Creeden: Cypher 8 of the C.C.R. on Saturday, April 05, 2008 - 4:21 PM
[Reply to this
Horror Author ROY PATTEN
Roy Patten

 
Nice! True statements and deep. The eyes are the key to the soul.
Another masterpiece! Your friend, Roy
 
Posted by Horror Author ROY PATTEN on Friday, April 04, 2008 - 3:13 PM
[Reply to this
Clash at Creeden: Cypher 8 of the C.C.R.
Scorpius Blood

 
Roy, what would I do without your support?! You ROCK! Hey, plug your book on here sometime!
Scorpius
Photobucket
 
Posted by Clash at Creeden: Cypher 8 of the C.C.R. on Saturday, April 05, 2008 - 4:23 PM
[Reply to this
Ace of Spadez & The Sunz of the Zodiac™
Todd Wood

 
Damn... WHY? is good, but I still love Medusa the most!
Love ya bro,
Ace
 
Posted by Ace of Spadez & The Sunz of the Zodiac™ on Friday, April 04, 2008 - 5:24 PM
[Reply to this
darkangela

 
Wow...You have such a unique ..style..! I love how the first word of each, then spells its own thought or image. It's amazing the images you invoke with your writing. The personification, the emotion, the evil, the darkness, the unanswered questions....it's all amazing...

EXCELLENT!!!!
 
Posted by darkangela on Friday, April 04, 2008 - 5:26 PM
[Reply to this
Clash at Creeden: Cypher 8 of the C.C.R.
Scorpius Blood

 
Angela, you are too kind! However, I am soaking it up! =) Loved your words,
Scorpius
Photobucket
 
Posted by Clash at Creeden: Cypher 8 of the C.C.R. on Saturday, April 05, 2008 - 4:25 PM
[Reply to this
Lybrian Dragon

 
Man this is more excellent poetry. keep on writing. such depth and invisionment you provide. I love it all and cant wait for more. I knew you had it in you since freshmen algebra class.
now your just drawing with words keep up the good work my dear friend
may peace and love be with you
 
Posted by Lybrian Dragon on Saturday, April 05, 2008 - 4:09 PM
[Reply to this
Clash at Creeden: Cypher 8 of the C.C.R.
Scorpius Blood

 
Thanks J! I respect your opinion. Hey, send me some ideas about new poems if you enjoy my work!
Scorpius
Photobucket
 
Posted by Clash at Creeden: Cypher 8 of the C.C.R. on Saturday, April 05, 2008 - 4:28 PM
[Reply to this
Bookheart
Donna DeMott

 
Wow! I enjoyed "Medusa" and "Damn... Why?" very much. Lots of power and feeling behind each word. Story telling in a short, but distinctive form. I will look forward to reading more.

 
Posted by Bookheart on Saturday, April 05, 2008 - 4:10 PM
[Reply to this
Clash at Creeden: Cypher 8 of the C.C.R.
Scorpius Blood

 
Welcome to our world, Bookheart! I'm aso very glad you enjoyed the poems. Keep the views coming! ;)
Scorpius
Photobucket
 
Posted by Clash at Creeden: Cypher 8 of the C.C.R. on Saturday, April 05, 2008 - 4:30 PM
[Reply to this
Clash at Creeden: Cypher 8 of the C.C.R.
Scorpius Blood

 
Pandora, I appreciate the comment. Stay tuned for more Rancid Poetry!
 
Posted by Clash at Creeden: Cypher 8 of the C.C.R. on Tuesday, April 15, 2008 - 1:09 AM
[Reply to this
Robert Foster
Robert Foster

 
Welcome to this day, Friend, Once a connection of friends is made, greatness arises to excel. While pass'n thro' the ice, pain, snow, and the rain, and especially the giggles, the press'n occures, or mold'n if you will, of all that be, begins again, as the journey we walk continues, compress'n each strand weav'd thro' the long wear'n dresses, or jackets of coal, as drapp'd around us, that be dawn'd for a season. But now be'it crack'd, crush'd and brok'n. But, but, but, and oh, I love the buts, that appear within the our daily scripts, we be writt'n, this be the but, that lay down, the ole woman or man from the past, and picks up the detiny, soar'n high'r with a purpose! This sound, reveals, the diamond, resid'n within, and shinn'n thro' a Queen she be, or he, a King, within. And so, Call forth in each day, of this one, of royalty to arise, be, and thrive. and this be, for an eternity...your friend, Robert Foster
 
Posted by Robert Foster on Monday, May 19, 2008 - 5:08 PM
[Reply to this
Clash at Creeden: Cypher 8 of the C.C.R.

Scorpius Blood


Last Updated: 9/23/2009

Send Message
Instant Message
Email to a Friend
Subscribe

Gender: Male
Status: Married
Age: 33
Sign: Scorpio

Country: US

Who Gives Kudos:



My Subscriptions