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July 1, 2007 - Sunday 

Just some random things that have been itching to be scratched...

 

 

The air is often thick when you are here

lounging around in all of my thoughts

and I often choke when I try to breathe

while your madness buzzes round

 

 

up here in the clouds it is friendly

though I do miss the reassuring

feeling of good sturdy women

and their swift blows to the head

 

 

if only I had told of the secret

to life when it finally came

just before I drank all of the rum

and lost it in that last poker game

       but the man had this gun

       and sadly I couldn't run

       for I had drank every last

       drop of that damned rum

 

 

secrets may be found

when no one else is around

to piss on your shoes

and drink all of your booze

Currently listening:
Crwn Thy Frnicatr
By Psyclon Nine
Release date: 24 October, 2006
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Murat
Murat Yasar

 
Well, four interesting poems: as a lot of poet, you have interest in secrets.
First, we can see that you don't try to imitate over poets, yoy have you're way of saying things, that is a very good point, and that shows that you have some maturity on your way of writing, 2nd: you don't try to have a posture of poet, it's fresh and obviously "genuine".
3rst: you write from your life, the way your see and feel it, because you know that "poetry is life", is all about life and its secrets...
 
Posted by Murat on July 15, 2007 - Sunday - 6:09 PM
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Chimene Photographs

 
lol...crude-poetic. i tell you, i can envision you writing...
 
Posted by Chimene Photographs on March 20, 2008 - Thursday - 11:50 AM
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