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October 8, 2006 - Sunday 

Category: Writing and Poetry

A Little Rain

Danced like an angel in lieu of the now
Shined like a star that's touched the ground
Sweet like a spoken, unbroken vow
No pain or rain could stop her now
A sweet little girl unlike the rest
With a children's song beneath her breath,
she told me...
Sometimes you stand
Sometimes you fall
and sometimes a little rain's nothing at all

That's what she said to change my world
while she never spoke a single word
She never sang
It seemed she did
She smiled like a kid
I realized what I'd never see
while she sang that song beneath her breath
So silently she said to me
Life is life and death is death

With desire hid amid her eyes,
a choir filled her hidden cries
She said like heaven were her skies,
All the rain's for you and I
"Dance with me,"
she said again
"dance while all the night is left.
Dance before the water ends"
with a children's song beneath her breath

So late at night, the morning sun
was just below the horizon
Her salted tears to come undone
with a rain to soak her eyes in
The salted rain but still a girl's
far beyond so bittersweet
Within a rain, all the world's
the playground at her feet
I've never seen
the rain that way
That's what I must confess
Not till I heard a children's song
far beneath her bitter breath

We danced and danced
until the rain-
until the rain had nothing left
She said "no shoes"
but I refused,
again I must confess
But truthfully she would've danced
and ruined her favorite dress,
because the rain and all the pain
make a life that's less bereft
That's not what she said
but that's what I heard
with a song beneath her breath
So I listened to her every word
until the night had nothing left

Every day we're in the rain
even if it never falls
We should live and live again
if we're to live at all
We should live our every day
until the days have nothing left
And while she sang a children's song
beneath her lovely breath,
she told me...
Sometimes you stand
Sometimes you fall
Sometimes you have to crawl
Sometimes you need
Sometimes you bleed
Sometimes you have it all
And she said to me
repeatedly
without a word at'all
words that I would keep within
The words that I'd recall
She said...
Sometimes a little rain is nothing at all


For Mikaela, thanking her for making me dance in the rain


 

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REDBEARD

 

for when it rains it doesnt allways poor

sir this is beautifull


 
Posted by REDBEARD on October 8, 2006 - Sunday - 5:43 AM
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Shai
Avi Cado

 

i love the deep, childlike simplicity. beautiful.


 
Posted by Shai on October 8, 2006 - Sunday - 5:48 AM
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push past pathways, submerged, thru sensitive eyes

 
holy....wow...just wow..I think I will be reciting this in my sleep tonight! I LOVE IT JON! its so beautiful, simple, yet complex. You blow me away, my friend, you sincerely do.
 
Posted by push past pathways, submerged, thru sensitive eyes on October 8, 2006 - Sunday - 5:57 AM
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V

 

I'm speechless...it made me cry i don't know why...the simple words, the truth, reality...it is I it is you it is me...I like it Jon...especially this:

Every day we're in the rain
even if it never falls
We should live and live again
if we're to live at all
We should live our every day
until the days have nothing left


 
Posted by V on October 8, 2006 - Sunday - 6:10 AM
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Jone

 

My friend had a pretty sad blog about being single on a rainy day, so I quoted the very line above. Jon, thanks for sharing your gift with the rest of us "mere mortals".


 
Posted by Jone on October 8, 2006 - Sunday - 8:35 PM
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OPALESCENCE for CHD Awareness
Opal Henson

 

I love how you have captured the beauty and seeming innocence of what seems to be an indomitable spirt!!


 
Posted by OPALESCENCE for CHD Awareness on October 8, 2006 - Sunday - 6:16 AM
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¤'¯'°§ÚÑñ¥°'¯'¤

 
truly this made me cry so sweet and innocent and yet so deep ~i really did enjoy this one
 
Posted by ¤'¯'°§ÚÑñ¥°'¯'¤ on October 8, 2006 - Sunday - 6:39 AM
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ღ☮☠Duchess☠☮ღ RIP JONNY BOY, YOU WILL BE MISSED
Heather DeGroat

 
Your amazing. How do you it. Your words bring light to my life. Keep it up please please dont ever stop.
 
Posted by ღ☮☠Duchess☠☮ღ RIP JONNY BOY, YOU WILL BE MISSED on October 8, 2006 - Sunday - 6:44 AM
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animal crackers

 
You do both the rain and the girl poetic justice.  Merci bien.
 
Posted by animal crackers on October 8, 2006 - Sunday - 6:47 AM
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In a world of such horrors and pain

You'll never better the beauty of rain

 


 
Posted by on October 8, 2006 - Sunday - 8:28 AM
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goodbye

 
SO intense. CAPTIVATING! I was drawn in to never want it to end....Like the RAIN in our lives!
 
Posted by goodbye on October 8, 2006 - Sunday - 9:13 AM
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[[GABOLOSO]]

 
Wow!!! I'm in love with this poem!!!
Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant, what else could I say...
 
Posted by [[GABOLOSO]] on October 8, 2006 - Sunday - 10:15 AM
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Torri
Torri Lewis-Murphy

 
This piece is beautifully written and your playful expressions of life's ups/downs are nicely done. Thanks for another meaningful write!!
 
Posted by Torri on October 8, 2006 - Sunday - 11:19 AM
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♣Hi Charlie

This poem was great keep up the great work. It deserves a four leaf clover.

Your MySpace Friend

Robbie


 
Posted by on October 8, 2006 - Sunday - 12:21 PM
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lesley

 
I love this poem so much......and know the feeling so well...poeple being sensitive to each other and making each other carefree for a while..thanks for posting
 
Posted by lesley on October 8, 2006 - Sunday - 12:34 PM
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Designs by Vennie
Ms Vennie

 
this is just exquisite
 
Posted by Designs by Vennie on October 8, 2006 - Sunday - 1:22 PM
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Judi
judi fountas

 
Just too beautiful and so full of love.  Thanks for sharing your heart.  
 
Posted by Judi on October 8, 2006 - Sunday - 1:31 PM
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~*Arysa*~

 

Sometimes you stand
Sometimes you fall
Sometimes you have to crawl
Sometimes you need
Sometimes you bleed
Sometimes you have it all
And she said to me
repeatedly
without a word at'all
words that I would keep within
The words that I'd recall
She said...
Sometimes a little rain is nothing at all

 

everytime i read your poems

they are very inspiring i am

glad that you write; you give

people hope even when there

rain..♥


 
Posted by ~*Arysa*~ on October 8, 2006 - Sunday - 2:21 PM
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Loreli

 

Thank you for such a tremendous write.  Positively moving!  You capture innocense with beauty, grace, and simplicity.  This touched me on so many levels, I can't begin to explain.  I still like to dance in the rain in life, both figuratively and literally.  All my heartfelt thanks for putting this into words.  (Thank you for the add by the way!) Simply, Loreli

 

 


 
Posted by Loreli on October 8, 2006 - Sunday - 4:01 PM
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SUMMER LOVES!!

 
good blog
 
Posted by SUMMER LOVES!! on October 8, 2006 - Sunday - 4:16 PM
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NE FRUSTRA VIXISSE VIDEAR

 

Your poetry surpasses mine by leaps and bounds.

It has Joy and a simple Beauty about it, that my depressing poems lack....

Kudos, My Friend...

You're worthy of the title Poet...


 
Posted by NE FRUSTRA VIXISSE VIDEAR on October 8, 2006 - Sunday - 4:35 PM
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NE FRUSTRA VIXISSE VIDEAR

 

Ah, my friend, you honestly deserve the title "Poet".

Yours verses and rhymes outshine my own by leaps and bounds..

Kudos indeed, Jon...

V.


 
Posted by NE FRUSTRA VIXISSE VIDEAR on October 8, 2006 - Sunday - 4:39 PM
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ox0X j E s S X0xo
Annajessica benafin

 
that was wonderful...keep it up...i enjoy following ur writings...

 
Posted by ox0X j E s S X0xo on October 8, 2006 - Sunday - 6:13 PM
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Seb

 
What's simplest is often what's hardest. This is masterful
 
Posted by Seb on October 8, 2006 - Sunday - 7:45 PM
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delete

 
i love this poem its so simple yet so deep
 
Posted by delete on October 8, 2006 - Sunday - 8:18 PM
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~Jackie~
Jackie Duden

 

This is awesome. I have quoted the last paragraph to a couple friends who are down right now. : ) Hope you don't mind...don't worry you got credit. Peace.

Jackie


 
Posted by ~Jackie~ on October 8, 2006 - Sunday - 9:21 PM
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Jenny Neal: Super Hero Awesome

 
What a lovely poem....and a lovely named girl to write it about. ;)
 
Posted by Jenny Neal: Super Hero Awesome on October 9, 2006 - Monday - 12:25 AM
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SHHH.... VICTORIA'S SECRET...
Victoria Winslow

 

Wow!  I have to say that was one the most beautiful poems I have read in a long time. I know I can't but I would have it if you would ever allow me to have that poem on my page.

Victoria


 
Posted by SHHH.... VICTORIA'S SECRET... on October 9, 2006 - Monday - 1:43 AM
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Undying Love for Poetry~

 

Beautiful!!  I love to dance in the rain.  My kids love it too...our special thing to do!  I wrote something about dancing in the rain...this brought back great memories of that write for me.  Thank you for sharing!

 


 
Posted by Undying Love for Poetry~ on October 9, 2006 - Monday - 3:52 AM
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♥ Vickie ♥
Vickie McCluskey

 
Another truly beautiful and heart-touching poem!
 
Posted by ♥ Vickie ♥ on October 9, 2006 - Monday - 5:43 AM
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Beautiful....Thank YOU!!
 
Posted by on October 9, 2006 - Monday - 5:49 PM
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G. Fontana

 

I'm happy someone touched you in the rain there's is nothing else like it..


 
Posted by G. Fontana on October 9, 2006 - Monday - 6:37 PM
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~ Cogito ~

 
BEAUTIFUL WRITE THERE  ENJOYED
 
Posted by ~ Cogito ~ on October 9, 2006 - Monday - 8:48 PM
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Pelle

 

Woah that was amazing. I don't have the words.

Simply brilliant.

Thankyou for sharing.


 
Posted by Pelle on October 9, 2006 - Monday - 9:58 PM
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incognito!!!!
Teresa McKee

 

I sense that this was a young girl (child)

With that I assume that you are referring to the eternal wisdom of a child.

They seem to know so much more than we do, or perhaps they know all

that we have forgotten!  Beautiful writing--as usual!

--Teresa


 
Posted by incognito!!!! on October 9, 2006 - Monday - 10:39 PM
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Pam. And nothing more.

 
Your words speak of love and make me feel youthful again.  I'm so glad I read that poem today.
 
Posted by Pam. And nothing more. on October 9, 2006 - Monday - 11:43 PM
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Peace Patrice

 
absolutely beautiful......thank you again sir.
 
Posted by .peace_patrice. on October 11, 2006 - Wednesday - 3:27 AM
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I couldn't have read this piece at a better time. You have the gift of emotional intellegence! Thanks!
 
Posted by on October 12, 2006 - Thursday - 1:12 AM
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恋愛

 
you write so beautifully and this poem is gentle and lovely...great one here!
 
Posted by 恋愛 on October 14, 2006 - Saturday - 1:10 AM
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Ionn

 
   The most amazing poem I have read yet.  I am a newbe to the poetry relm, this one made me feel the inoccence of life and a desire to live the poem.
I'm a just a guy that is now blown away with this relm and your talent.

 
Posted by Ionn on November 4, 2006 - Saturday - 6:41 AM
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Brennan.

 
i like.
 
Posted by Brennan. on November 7, 2006 - Tuesday - 5:07 PM
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Genera Christine
Genera Humbert

 
This is beautiful!  wonderful images
 
Posted by Genera Christine on November 9, 2006 - Thursday - 6:37 AM
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Syreeta

 
That's a great poem!
 
Posted by Syreeta on November 14, 2006 - Tuesday - 2:33 AM
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Mind Over Matter

 

She said...
Sometimes a little rain is nothing at all

True, if it never rained we couldn't enjoy the sunshine

 


 
Posted by Mind Over Matter on November 26, 2006 - Sunday - 4:15 PM
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Amber

 

That was very very beautiful!  I really enjoyed it! 


 
Posted by Amber on November 29, 2006 - Wednesday - 5:53 AM
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Online Predator and Youth Violence Awareness

 

It's an honor to have a friend that can truly write from the heart. This one is absolutely beautiful.

 

Your Friend,

April-Sienna


 
Posted by Online Predator and Youth Violence Awareness on December 21, 2006 - Thursday - 10:16 AM
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beautiful


 
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Billie Jo Gerver

 
Quite Captivating!
 
Posted by Billie Jo Gerver on January 11, 2007 - Thursday - 8:50 AM
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i must admit, the name drew me in. being as i love the rain.

i really loved this one..if anyone were to ask me what it means to dance in the rain this would pretty much sum it up.

lovely.♥


 
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if teardrops were diamonds...i would be rich
ALIce Laarabi

 
sooooooooooooooo breautiful...I myself love dancing in the rain, my frieends think i am nuts..hehe.. but i love the rain kissing me...
 
Posted by if teardrops were diamonds...i would be rich on February 13, 2007 - Tuesday - 1:41 PM
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