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May 17, 2007 - Thursday 

Category: Writing and Poetry

Death's Final Trial

Death shuts its eyes---
A firing squad
(some fire blanks so the killer's unknown)
but Death still dies…

No one cries…
Death has died alone

Or so you've wished
upon a night
when you've thought of all the wrong he's done
But he hasn't died
Alone you've cried,
waiting for your time to come

You can't place Time on trial
No jury called
And if there were, Time would be acquittedly freed
No guillotine blade to beheadedly fall
Time has never had to bleed

You can't place Cancer
in a noose
It's always loose
or the branch always severed in half
No lethal injection for the heart attack
that you remember your grandfather had

No hydrocyanic gas for defective brakes
Emphysema can't die by cane
Alzheimer's and pneumonia can't have electricity pass
so rapidly through their veins

You can't burn AIDS at a stake
or disembowel
diabetes or suicide
You want your revenge, you want them back
You want to sit down and cry

But you swim out to save
someone who gave
you so many reasons not to swim out
They've bounded his legs
as he drowns and he begs
His life is on the scale of your doubt

Death in a cry
You've pulled him aside,
forgiving so you can move on
Death in a cry
Still everyone's died…
with a lot more death to come

"Everyone who loses somebody wants revenge, on God if they can't find anyone else. But in Africa, in Matobo, the Ku believe that the only way to end grief is to save a life. If someone is murdered, a year of mourning ends with a ritual that we call the Drowning Man Trial. There's an all-night party beside a river. At dawn, the killer is put in a boat. He's taken out on the water and he's dropped. He's bound so that he can't swim. The family of the dead then has to choose. They can let him drown or they can save him. The Ku believe that if the family lets the killer drown, they'll have justice but spend the rest of their lives in mourning. But if they save him, if they admit that life isn't always just... that very act can take away their sorrow… Vengeance is the lazy form of grief."

Monologue by character Silvia Bloom in the movie The Interpreter

Currently reading:
Ordinary Poems for Extraordinary People in These Ordinary Times
By Jon Sanders
Release date: 16 February, 2007
(kqueuet)

 
Excellent my friend.
 
Posted by (kqueuet) on May 17, 2007 - Thursday - 9:20 AM
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[[GABOLOSO]]

 
Aww you're making me teary-eyed once again.. lol =)
Loved the poem, especially the way you brought the message.
 
Posted by [[GABOLOSO]] on May 17, 2007 - Thursday - 9:37 AM
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Spin The Hands Of Time, Until You Reach The End

 
i really like it, and the way its kind of two different flows and shapes, within one. very musical. i also greatly appreciate the background reference that played part, underneath it. actually one of the more interesting things i've read in some time.
 
Posted by Spin The Hands Of Time, Until You Reach The End on May 17, 2007 - Thursday - 9:40 AM
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Lucy

 
Thank you so much for posting this, wonderful to hear such a perspective on this thorny topic, the story of the Ku way of addressing tragedy is astonishing and you have surely succeeded in making people really think and question the way we deal with the biggest and scariest issue in life. Brilliant work Jon!
 
Posted by Lucy on May 17, 2007 - Thursday - 10:14 AM
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Jeannie Kisses
Jeannie Never Innocent

 
great write...thanks for sharing...
 
Posted by Jeannie Kisses on May 17, 2007 - Thursday - 11:34 AM
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The Four-Legged Fish

 
This is beautiful! I never knew this about the Ku and your poem is so fitting.
 
Posted by The Four-Legged Fish on May 17, 2007 - Thursday - 11:46 AM
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Ms. Nicky
Ms. Nicky

 
This is an extraodinary piece...It certainly made me feel different about death ...
 
Posted by Ms. Nicky on May 17, 2007 - Thursday - 12:35 PM
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Maliceah

 
When I first started reading this, I was like "what? You can't kill death!" and then duh, I kept reading and it you worked it out beautifully to mean exactly that. No one knows when or how their time will come and we can't stop it from happening, thus is the human condition. Very nice work, my friend. :)
 
Posted by Maliceah on May 17, 2007 - Thursday - 12:41 PM
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Matt

 
morbid, and creative
 
Posted by Matt on May 17, 2007 - Thursday - 12:59 PM
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BC Beneke

 
This is simply one of the best poems you've ever written, and the quote from that movie was brilliant enough alone for me to buy that movie. I wasn't awe struck by the movie, but that line... was like the Al Pacino speech in Scent of a Woman, and to a lesser extent his speech in The Devil's Advocate. BRILLIANT, deep, and awe inspiring (atleast the last one was awe inspiring to me... I'm a big John Milton fan).

You know I love your work, and I have a huge favor to ask. I've been asked to compete in Je' Maverick's championship round of Poegasm against all the other winners. I came in second to a friend of mine who has had to pull out. I'm asking not only for your vote, but I want to beat the best he's got... and I'm going to need the support of the best poets I know, and you are at the top of the list my friend, it's you Dean and Eileen, and then an amazing second teer that has been catching up until today... but I would love the support if I can get it... send me a message and I'll toss you my idea. I know how stingy you are about receiving messages, lol.

Brad
 
Posted by BC Beneke on May 17, 2007 - Thursday - 1:30 PM
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BrownSista

 
uh ok that was wow amazing Mister Sanders,you have a way with words to me this is sadly truth!
 
Posted by BrownSista on May 17, 2007 - Thursday - 1:53 PM
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~Dee Dee~

 
Hi Jon. I think you should read my book because, we are not so very far apart on death! I know about death. I have breathed it! I have experienced it so many times as to where, I know there is ANOTHER life beyond death! Death is ONLY the beginning, NOT the end! Your poetry is profound! (I have a strong feeling that you write from your OWN experiences or whatever is in your heart)

God Bless you and yours always, my friend...

Debby
 
Posted by ~Dee Dee~ on May 17, 2007 - Thursday - 2:28 PM
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LAURETTA

 
This poem is real, and true!!!
Fantastic work, U are such a briliiant writer!
 
Posted by LAURETTA on May 17, 2007 - Thursday - 3:03 PM
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♥AJAX

 
It's great Jon. I've been reading your poems for awhile now and never commented but this one really got me. Especially the story at the end. Awesome. I have a severe case of goosebumps.
 
Posted by ♥AJAX on May 17, 2007 - Thursday - 3:35 PM
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~Deb~
Debbie Reed

 
Very profound..... just what I needed to read today to put my life in prospective
 
Posted by ~Deb~ on May 17, 2007 - Thursday - 4:04 PM
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BLUE EYEZ!! (NEVER LET ANYONE STEAL YOUR JOY)

 
AWESOME POEM!!
 
Posted by BLUE EYEZ!! (NEVER LET ANYONE STEAL YOUR JOY) on May 17, 2007 - Thursday - 5:59 PM
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~ Kat ~ The Dead Poetess

 
outstanding write STELLAR. interesting write below the poem I couldn't understand how any family or family member could be forgiving of the person who murdered or tresspassed against a loved one but thats just me,and vengence is only a temporary solution it is not the solution because it doesn't resolve ones greif and while vengence is an immidate solution it is better to vent ones emotions to acheive a closure because a real closure won't be acheived by acting too hastily and irately
 
Posted by ~ Kat ~ The Dead Poetess on May 17, 2007 - Thursday - 6:34 PM
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Sister Sophie

 
I really loved the meaning behind this poem. I agree with these people. Such wisdom. Your poem beautifully depicts the meaning of such an act of acceptance. The balance of nature and how, so often, to our thinking minds, we cannot see the bigger picture.
Beautiful piece. I loved it.

Love
Sophie
 
Posted by Sister Sophie on May 17, 2007 - Thursday - 7:16 PM
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♥MrzLizPatrice♥
Liz Galloway

 
Dear Jon,

Your poem is interesting...it makes you think about how much control or power, or lack thereof, you have over an event(Death) that's inevitable in our lives...whether death is caused by a disease or whether it's by the hands of man...we can hate Death or embrace it. Even in the story about the Ku & how they handle death can bring perspective to what one sees as the end of life. They can save a life and by doing so they LIVE & not die, to grieve is to die slowly. When you waste time grieving forever, you kill your soul daily. Death cannot be stopped, it's on a path of taking lives of the young, old, poor, & wealthy...we will all shake hands with him & embrace him, willing or unwilling. To fear death, is only making Life miserable.

I remind myself that I live to die, but in death, I will live eternally.

This is what's real..your poem is real!
 
Posted by ♥MrzLizPatrice♥ on May 17, 2007 - Thursday - 7:19 PM
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Dances with Shadows

 
The classic theme of calling death to trial. Superbly executed my chum.
 
Posted by Dances with Shadows on May 18, 2007 - Friday - 3:15 AM
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gill

 
powerful write. And the explanation at the end is helpful; Ku wisdom! It made me re-read the poem with fuller understanding.
 
Posted by gill on May 18, 2007 - Friday - 1:37 PM
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manka

 
i love the poam and the inspiraton behind it..i hav recently had death in my family..kind of soothing to read the last part!!!
 
Posted by manka on May 18, 2007 - Friday - 3:35 PM
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LuisRafael420

 
This is a powerful piece, one that any person who reads it can relate to. I definately read it a few times. I never get around to commenting on peoples work, but this work is brilliant.
 
Posted by LuisRafael420 on May 18, 2007 - Friday - 7:52 PM
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Barney

 
I like the notion of forgiveness. In a way it gives you power over death. If we don't need revenge for terrible wrongs then the wrongs themselves lose weight and without weight they can't frighten us of our own immenent fall. Strangely the older and closer I get to my own the less dread I have for it. I want to live mine to its fullest and best but am largely unconcerned with how I meet my end. The meat of a sentence isn't digested by the punctuation, how a life was spent isn't defined by its death.
 
Posted by Barney on May 18, 2007 - Friday - 11:04 PM
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Joy

 
You always find new ways to say the things that need to be said.
 
Posted by Joy on May 19, 2007 - Saturday - 12:04 PM
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אהבה
Love OneAnother

 
yes, oh yes! this monologue exactly what I believe! :-D

the poem's absolutely fantastic, Jon
 
Posted by אהבה on May 19, 2007 - Saturday - 2:45 PM
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~♥~By Bellã~♥~™

 
Your words speak true as I can relate as I watched my daughter lose her battle and as I begin mine.
"Diseases are invisible leeches that cling to us and anger becomes their voice. It's when you realize that death is only the beginning to a new beautiful journey that not everyone can follow, that you can let go and be free." -Venisia G.-F.

I always enjoy your work, when you have a chance check out mine.
 
Posted by ~♥~By Bellã~♥~™ on May 19, 2007 - Saturday - 5:45 PM
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Shane Disque (soon to be Chase)

 
Powerful! Love it!
 
Posted by Shane Disque (soon to be Chase) on May 19, 2007 - Saturday - 6:26 PM
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{Author}M@m@stears

 
INTERESTING STUFF..
STOP BY AND READ MAMASTEARS BLOGS..
 
Posted by {Author}M@m@stears on May 19, 2007 - Saturday - 6:47 PM
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Brenda Gail
Brenda Gail Harter

 
Jon this is truly Magnificent.. Great Write
 
Posted by Brenda Gail on May 19, 2007 - Saturday - 7:54 PM
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†Çrímsøngarnét†

 
Interesting way you brought it all back. At that, for me, you incorporated history and I enjoyed that thoroughly. The quote is very informative and I was glad to see where your thoughts were sparked :)

*~*K*~*
 
Posted by †Çrímsøngarnét† on May 19, 2007 - Saturday - 11:23 PM
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