you told me ALL about your DREAMS	<center>amazing poem, i love your work everything just always flows so nicely and the words speak volumes that im sure most people could never articulate keep up the amazing work :P   Posted by you told me ALL about your DREAMS on December 6, 2007 - Thursday - 1:25 PM [Reply to this]

	AVR	I really like this poem - the premise and the way it's written.   Posted by AVR on December 6, 2007 - Thursday - 1:40 PM [Reply to this]

	Dyrt	I am in love with this poem. I usually never read your work I'll be honest. But something told me to open this while I am work in a meeting drowning myself. I repeat I love this as if you were me at one point in time and now we see each other. I appreciate ya   Posted by Dyrt on December 6, 2007 - Thursday - 1:43 PM [Reply to this]

	**SANDYE**DIVINE INTERVENTION** ANGELICA Sandye-Angelica I Am	What a powerful write..If I never even try to breathe..I look forward to your writings..Angelica ~i~   Posted by **SANDYE**DIVINE INTERVENTION** ANGELICA on December 6, 2007 - Thursday - 1:57 PM [Reply to this]

	goodbye	so much emotion here.... I wonder the same thing sometimes!   Posted by goodbye on December 6, 2007 - Thursday - 2:00 PM [Reply to this]

	Sekou B. Sekou Black	Wow, that's somethin else.   Posted by Sekou B. on December 6, 2007 - Thursday - 2:11 PM [Reply to this]

	LoVing EveRy PreCious MomEnt Akacia Latrice Robinson	Another wonderful poem. Great imagery and rhyme. Love the line: is it still called drowning… if I never even try to breathe?   Posted by LoVing EveRy PreCious MomEnt on December 6, 2007 - Thursday - 3:23 PM [Reply to this]

	♥Your Love Is My Heart Disease♥	Oh wow this one is incredible! I truly enjoy reading your poetry and hope you will always continue to share it with us!   Posted by ♥Your Love Is My Heart Disease♥ on December 6, 2007 - Thursday - 5:33 PM [Reply to this]

	Rob	I can say but 1 thing: BRAVO!!! I wish I was as good as you at writing.   Posted by Rob on December 6, 2007 - Thursday - 6:03 PM [Reply to this]

	flame in the snow	I like the direction that you are taking with your poetry recently.   Posted by flame in the snow on December 6, 2007 - Thursday - 6:29 PM [Reply to this]

	Reddz Voice	NICE WORK! Peace and love... Redd   Posted by Reddz Voice on December 6, 2007 - Thursday - 7:07 PM [Reply to this]

	Ms. Dre'	This is my first time reading your poetry and I must say bravo. I'm a fan of honesty in poetry and this reads like pure honesty. I like and you have gained a fan sir! Keep it up! Peace and blessings: Dre'   Posted by Ms. Dre' on December 6, 2007 - Thursday - 7:27 PM [Reply to this]

	Jane	I'm new to your blog, too. Very original thought this one. I like the flow.   Posted by Jane on December 6, 2007 - Thursday - 8:26 PM [Reply to this]

	Shaun	This poem says so much without really saying it. Powerful imagery. Very nicely written. Thank you for writing it.   Posted by Shaun on December 6, 2007 - Thursday - 8:35 PM [Reply to this]

	The Ubiquitous They	The line that starts with 'i wonder' is pure genius, absolutely beautiful! :)   Posted by The Ubiquitous They on December 6, 2007 - Thursday - 10:44 PM [Reply to this]

	Demeter Lena Vanelslander	No than you just became one of the living dead.   Posted by Demeter on December 6, 2007 - Thursday - 10:48 PM [Reply to this]

	Kiwi Warrior Queen	Very thoughtful write Jon ;o) Namaste' ~Lady Di   Posted by Kiwi Warrior Queen on December 7, 2007 - Friday - 12:02 AM [Reply to this]

	Sleepy John john horan	beautiful, simple and yet very powerful, i think it's your best poem I've read in ages.   Posted by Sleepy John on December 7, 2007 - Friday - 12:18 AM [Reply to this]

	kyBLUESky	Defintely one of my new all-time Jon Sanders favorites. I've always thought drowning wouldn't be a bad way to go. I know that's not what you're talking about, but it's all kind of relative.   Posted by kyBLUESky on December 7, 2007 - Friday - 2:21 AM [Reply to this]

	†Çrímsøngarnét†	Good point; very strong.   Posted by †Çrímsøngarnét† on December 7, 2007 - Friday - 2:29 AM [Reply to this]

	Pelle	good stuff. i especially like the ending. great image you create. P.   Posted by Pelle on December 7, 2007 - Friday - 3:18 AM [Reply to this]

	Rena	how amazingly beautiful~   Posted by Rena on December 7, 2007 - Friday - 5:26 AM [Reply to this]

	אהבה Love OneAnother	drowning in Love is certainly a place to be   Posted by אהבה on December 7, 2007 - Friday - 8:43 AM [Reply to this]

	El Caballero	What is it about water expressions in poetry that fascinates me so? Nice work.   Posted by El Caballero on December 7, 2007 - Friday - 9:40 PM [Reply to this]

	Darra	Sounds odd to think of suicide as being serene but that is the tone of this poem... lovely.   Posted by Darra on December 8, 2007 - Saturday - 1:55 AM [Reply to this]

	Useless Ramblings	Beautiful John!   Posted by Useless Ramblings on December 8, 2007 - Saturday - 3:07 AM [Reply to this]

	Romano Nick Romano	i really think that you're an awesome writer man   Posted by Romano on December 8, 2007 - Saturday - 6:17 PM [Reply to this]

	FORGOTTEN 1 STANDS ALONE {T.I.R}	wow that is a great write and I know exactly how you feel   Posted by FORGOTTEN 1 STANDS ALONE {T.I.R} on December 9, 2007 - Sunday - 6:53 PM [Reply to this]

	moma bear	Very Amazing as usual-- Sometimes I think it would be better to accept the fate then always fight it so hard-- but fortunately for those who love us the body out wills the brokeness of our hearts or souls And even in our unconsciousness we will fight to survive.   Posted by moma bear on December 10, 2007 - Monday - 3:52 AM [Reply to this]

	Joh..anna Cherish Johanna Cloete	shooo beautiful!   Posted by Joh..anna Cherish on December 10, 2007 - Monday - 3:46 PM [Reply to this]

	Vixen	you're so smooth with the flow of words and imagery blending and melting.. loved it. xo   Posted by Vixen on December 11, 2007 - Tuesday - 3:14 PM [Reply to this]

	Debbie Debbie Combs	I find myself asking that question today...amazing penmenship..very nice.   Posted by Debbie on December 12, 2007 - Wednesday - 5:31 PM [Reply to this]

	a.Kai	You are reigning supreme with these emotional captures- i luv it!! a.Kai   Posted by a.Kai on December 13, 2007 - Thursday - 3:36 AM [Reply to this]

	Phil Philip kenny	It has pangs of infatuation running through it almost the the ,it reminds me of how desperate relationships can make you feel almost like your helpless that aomething is happening beyond your control but you can't and don't want to stop it , i empathise, great poem..Phil   Posted by Phil on December 15, 2007 - Saturday - 11:36 AM [Reply to this]

	♥manda marie.	amazing;; it's one of my favorites   Posted by ♥manda marie. on December 20, 2007 - Thursday - 7:14 AM [Reply to this]

	Kathleen Kathleen Montgomery	That is really an interesting question, Jon.  The poem is great and it has interesting images that evoke deep feelings and reflection on life.  However, the question itself is deeply thought-provoking - Is is drowning if you never try to breathe?    Posted by Kathleen on August 17, 2009 - Monday - 4:19 PM [Reply to this]

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